Risa is way too cute to be a side character imo, I hope her roll gets expanded. Maybe an unlockable route for her after completing the main girls?
The Ayumu path for Hiroko it's scarier than certain sexual fantasies. How he overloads the girl's body to win or how he distances her from her friends when she should be celebrating her victory so that Kyou can have her moment of glory in a chat making Hiroko his assistant. The protagonist don't realize that he's torturing and abusing her. All of this can only mean that the writing is very good.
:)
Mattlau04 said:
Finally, another sayori enjoyer! :handshake:
Finally, another sayori enjoyer! :handshake:
:)
Hey, everyone! Hope we're all having a good start to the year~
In this month's public release, I shifted focus from the storyline I was struggling with and found some inspiration to write an alternate path for the Redemption storyline instead, where Kyou uses the penlight again despite knowing what it does. Can he still consider himself a good person? There's a few scenes written on this new path now as we start to find out...
As ever, you can find this month's release in PC, Linux, Mac and Android versions, on my Patreon, SubscribeStar or itch.io pages:
www.patreon.com/angelademille
angela-demille.itch.io/penlight
subscribestar.adult/angela-demille
That, along with another load of fun CGs, is that for another month. I'm making good progress on the new direction I've taken so I'm optimistic about having more to show next time. So please enjoy the new release and look forward to next time~
What's New
* WRITING: Some additional script for the Redemption storyline branch path "Use the penlight to help things along", plus some outline for later scenes on the eighth and ninth days
* ART: Added two new CGs to Hiroko's Gullible story branch
* ART Added a new CG set for the Redemption storyline
* ART: Added a new CG to Nozomi's Trance storyline, on the sixth day
* LOCALIZATION: Various edits and corrections to the existing Spanish script
* Word count is now over 314,000
* Minor typo corrections
In this month's public release, I shifted focus from the storyline I was struggling with and found some inspiration to write an alternate path for the Redemption storyline instead, where Kyou uses the penlight again despite knowing what it does. Can he still consider himself a good person? There's a few scenes written on this new path now as we start to find out...
As ever, you can find this month's release in PC, Linux, Mac and Android versions, on my Patreon, SubscribeStar or itch.io pages:
www.patreon.com/angelademille
angela-demille.itch.io/penlight
subscribestar.adult/angela-demille
That, along with another load of fun CGs, is that for another month. I'm making good progress on the new direction I've taken so I'm optimistic about having more to show next time. So please enjoy the new release and look forward to next time~
What's New
* WRITING: Some additional script for the Redemption storyline branch path "Use the penlight to help things along", plus some outline for later scenes on the eighth and ninth days
* ART: Added two new CGs to Hiroko's Gullible story branch
* ART Added a new CG set for the Redemption storyline
* ART: Added a new CG to Nozomi's Trance storyline, on the sixth day
* LOCALIZATION: Various edits and corrections to the existing Spanish script
* Word count is now over 314,000
* Minor typo corrections
This visual novel is a piece of media that ranks in the all time greats for me. I remember my first playthrough back in 2020, I hadn't given myself any spoilers and ended up going down the "sayori alter route", and I cannot overstate how much that playthrough affected me. All of the routes are incredibly thoughtful and each one does such a great job of capturing the horrors of something like the penlight that generally goes undiscussed in this community. But despite addressing those topics head on, the game also isn't a downer and the hopeful endings are all so perfectly bittersweet. I've finally joined your patreon, just because I think it's the right thing to do to support an artist who really spoke directly to me. Keep up the good work!
devilsubconscious said:
This visual novel is a piece of media that ranks in the all time greats for me. I remember my first playthrough back in 2020, I hadn't given myself any spoilers and ended up going down the "sayori alter route", and I cannot overstate how much that playthrough affected me. All of the routes are incredibly thoughtful and each one does such a great job of capturing the horrors of something like the penlight that generally goes undiscussed in this community. But despite addressing those topics head on, the game also isn't a downer and the hopeful endings are all so perfectly bittersweet. I've finally joined your patreon, just because I think it's the right thing to do to support an artist who really spoke directly to me. Keep up the good work!
This visual novel is a piece of media that ranks in the all time greats for me. I remember my first playthrough back in 2020, I hadn't given myself any spoilers and ended up going down the "sayori alter route", and I cannot overstate how much that playthrough affected me. All of the routes are incredibly thoughtful and each one does such a great job of capturing the horrors of something like the penlight that generally goes undiscussed in this community. But despite addressing those topics head on, the game also isn't a downer and the hopeful endings are all so perfectly bittersweet. I've finally joined your patreon, just because I think it's the right thing to do to support an artist who really spoke directly to me. Keep up the good work!
Thank you so much! I hope to keep going for a while yet :)
Angela_DeMille said:
In this month's public release...
In this month's public release...
I only want to say to Angela that I'm really happy to be able to hypnotize Nozomi's mother in the zombi route. Despite the consequences. Milfs are great. ^^
Hello, everyone!
February's release sees the alternate path of the Redemption storyline almost completed. We're just missing an epilogue, although there's an outline written of how it's going to go. Overall I think this story path's a pretty tough read, in keeping with the theme of the route, but a necessary contrast to the original story. I'm interested to see what people make of it!
Nozomi's Trance story path also saw a little love, with the new CG looking really pretty and facilitating a minor rewrite of the scene it's in that will make another CG possible. It's a nice feeling to be able to finally get that part of the game illustrated at last~
As ever, you can find this month's release in PC, Linux, Mac and Android versions, on my Patreon, SubscribeStar or itch.io pages:
www.patreon.com/angelademille
angela-demille.itch.io/penlight
subscribestar.adult/angela-demille
I hope you all enjoy this one! And join us next time for the finished Spiral path epilogue along with a few other goodies :)
What's New
* WRITING: Some more script for the Redemption storyline's Spiral path, up to the penultimate scene, and a completed outline for the epilogue
* WRITING: Minor script edits for Nozomi's Trance storyline
* ART: Added two new CGs for the Redemption storyline Spiral path
* ART: Added a new CG for Nozomi's Trance storyline
* ART: Replaced the old dining room & kitchen background for Kyou's house with a new kitchen background
* MUSIC: Added a new piece of background music, which plays towards the end of the Redemption Spiral story path
* LOCALIZATION: Various edits and corrections to the existing Spanish script
* Word count is now over 323,000
* Minor typo corrections
Known Issue
* Visual errors will be produced when loading an old save that references the old dining room background
February's release sees the alternate path of the Redemption storyline almost completed. We're just missing an epilogue, although there's an outline written of how it's going to go. Overall I think this story path's a pretty tough read, in keeping with the theme of the route, but a necessary contrast to the original story. I'm interested to see what people make of it!
Nozomi's Trance story path also saw a little love, with the new CG looking really pretty and facilitating a minor rewrite of the scene it's in that will make another CG possible. It's a nice feeling to be able to finally get that part of the game illustrated at last~
As ever, you can find this month's release in PC, Linux, Mac and Android versions, on my Patreon, SubscribeStar or itch.io pages:
www.patreon.com/angelademille
angela-demille.itch.io/penlight
subscribestar.adult/angela-demille
I hope you all enjoy this one! And join us next time for the finished Spiral path epilogue along with a few other goodies :)
What's New
* WRITING: Some more script for the Redemption storyline's Spiral path, up to the penultimate scene, and a completed outline for the epilogue
* WRITING: Minor script edits for Nozomi's Trance storyline
* ART: Added two new CGs for the Redemption storyline Spiral path
* ART: Added a new CG for Nozomi's Trance storyline
* ART: Replaced the old dining room & kitchen background for Kyou's house with a new kitchen background
* MUSIC: Added a new piece of background music, which plays towards the end of the Redemption Spiral story path
* LOCALIZATION: Various edits and corrections to the existing Spanish script
* Word count is now over 323,000
* Minor typo corrections
Known Issue
* Visual errors will be produced when loading an old save that references the old dining room background
Hello again, everyone!
This release brings with it the completion of the main script for the Redemption Spiral story path and adds a bunch of new CGs to accompany it. Overall I'm pretty happy to get it done, and in reasonably good time, too~
With the Spiral story path now written to a conclusion I've since turned my attention to the sliiightly more humane version of the Villainous Robot storyline, informally known as the Tennis Bot path. To see the latest script, follow the Robot path and choose "No, I need to chill out" when prompted. We have a few more scenes done here, plus some outlining for some of the later stuff. I still have a lot to think about here, but I've laid a good foundation for next month and hope to make a lot of progress on it by then.
As ever, you can find this month's release in PC, Linux, Mac and Android versions, on my Patreon, SubscribeStar or itch.io pages:
www.patreon.com/angelademille
angela-demille.itch.io/penlight
subscribestar.adult/angela-demille
So, enjoy! And I hope to see you again next month!
What's New
* WRITING: The Redemption storyline's Spiral path has now been scripted up to an epilogue along one sub-path
* WRITING: Minor edits to and corrections to Sayori's Doll storyline
* WRITING: Some more script for the Villainous Robot story path following the choice "No, I need to chill out" (AKA the Tennis Bot path), up to the fifth day, and outlined script up to the sixth day
* ART: Added three new CGs for the Redemption Spiral story path
* ART: Added a new CG to illustrate some early scenes in the Villainous Robot and Devoted storylines
* LOCALIZATION: Various edits and corrections to the existing Spanish script
* Word count is now around 330,000
* Minor typo corrections
This release brings with it the completion of the main script for the Redemption Spiral story path and adds a bunch of new CGs to accompany it. Overall I'm pretty happy to get it done, and in reasonably good time, too~
With the Spiral story path now written to a conclusion I've since turned my attention to the sliiightly more humane version of the Villainous Robot storyline, informally known as the Tennis Bot path. To see the latest script, follow the Robot path and choose "No, I need to chill out" when prompted. We have a few more scenes done here, plus some outlining for some of the later stuff. I still have a lot to think about here, but I've laid a good foundation for next month and hope to make a lot of progress on it by then.
As ever, you can find this month's release in PC, Linux, Mac and Android versions, on my Patreon, SubscribeStar or itch.io pages:
www.patreon.com/angelademille
angela-demille.itch.io/penlight
subscribestar.adult/angela-demille
So, enjoy! And I hope to see you again next month!
What's New
* WRITING: The Redemption storyline's Spiral path has now been scripted up to an epilogue along one sub-path
* WRITING: Minor edits to and corrections to Sayori's Doll storyline
* WRITING: Some more script for the Villainous Robot story path following the choice "No, I need to chill out" (AKA the Tennis Bot path), up to the fifth day, and outlined script up to the sixth day
* ART: Added three new CGs for the Redemption Spiral story path
* ART: Added a new CG to illustrate some early scenes in the Villainous Robot and Devoted storylines
* LOCALIZATION: Various edits and corrections to the existing Spanish script
* Word count is now around 330,000
* Minor typo corrections
Public Release 0.1568.2: Tennis Bot Script Additions
And we're back again!
This update keeps the focus on the Tennis Bot sub path of the Villainous Robot storyline that I began last month. As mentioned last time, you'll need to follow the Robot path and choose "No, I need to chill out" when prompted to get on this path.
The new content takes us to the weekend's events, adds a couple of neat CG sequences and ends on quite the cliffhanger. I also added one more CG to Nozomi's Trance storyline, along one of the alternate paths.
As ever, you can find this month's release in PC, Linux, Mac and Android versions, on my Patreon, SubscribeStar or itch.io pages:
www.patreon.com/angelademille
angela-demille.itch.io/penlight
subscribestar.adult/angela-demille
That's all for this month's major updates. It's been another difficult month for me personally, but I'll try to crack on with writing a conclusion to the Tennis Bot path in time for next month. I hope you'll look forward to it :)
What's New
* WRITING: Additional script for the Robot-Tennis Bot story path, up to the seventh day
* ART: Added two new CGs for the Robot-Tennis Bot story path
* ART: Added a new CG for the Nozomi Trance story path
* FIX: Sayori's induction CG in day 14 of the Doll storyline was not displaying correctly
* Word count is now around 336,500
* LOCALIZATION: Various edits and corrections to the existing Spanish script
* Minor typo corrections
This update keeps the focus on the Tennis Bot sub path of the Villainous Robot storyline that I began last month. As mentioned last time, you'll need to follow the Robot path and choose "No, I need to chill out" when prompted to get on this path.
The new content takes us to the weekend's events, adds a couple of neat CG sequences and ends on quite the cliffhanger. I also added one more CG to Nozomi's Trance storyline, along one of the alternate paths.
As ever, you can find this month's release in PC, Linux, Mac and Android versions, on my Patreon, SubscribeStar or itch.io pages:
www.patreon.com/angelademille
angela-demille.itch.io/penlight
subscribestar.adult/angela-demille
That's all for this month's major updates. It's been another difficult month for me personally, but I'll try to crack on with writing a conclusion to the Tennis Bot path in time for next month. I hope you'll look forward to it :)
What's New
* WRITING: Additional script for the Robot-Tennis Bot story path, up to the seventh day
* ART: Added two new CGs for the Robot-Tennis Bot story path
* ART: Added a new CG for the Nozomi Trance story path
* FIX: Sayori's induction CG in day 14 of the Doll storyline was not displaying correctly
* Word count is now around 336,500
* LOCALIZATION: Various edits and corrections to the existing Spanish script
* Minor typo corrections
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