averageguy17 said:
I'I feel like narrowing down "what" they're gimmick is, it'd be easier to place them into the story and write around that. This i feel is a way to keep it more organised, so you're not trying to balance or write why Chelsea is acting one way and then some other way the next scenario without writing a convoluted connection/explaination as to why she's acting so differently between scenarios.
I'I feel like narrowing down "what" they're gimmick is, it'd be easier to place them into the story and write around that. This i feel is a way to keep it more organised, so you're not trying to balance or write why Chelsea is acting one way and then some other way the next scenario without writing a convoluted connection/explaination as to why she's acting so differently between scenarios.
Understandable. You don’t really need to write out full scenarios, I’m more interested in the various actions they can perform under MC. If a particular type of MC isn’t possible, i’ll find a workaround within reason. If a particular action isn’t possible, same case. Particular triggers and different types of MC are possible depending on their permanence and effect.
To make it easier to work with and not against their particular gimmicks, here’s the breakdown:
Natsume is brainwashed by an enchanted ring, which acts like a programmed computer that can possess people who wear it.
Rina is hypnotised by Hypnotia.
Chelsea is also hypnotised by Hypnotia, but her primary method of MC is nanomachines (documented for the original story).
Etta primarily has a penis-shaped parasite that can possess her (OG story document)
Furthermore, all methods of MC are amplified by the town, making it easier to obtain and maintain control over people. Also, the theme is fantasy, but nanomachines exist so...
Various methods of MC can be mixed and matched, again depending on their permanence and effect, which I will judge. Don’t worry about it too much when you provide suggestions; I will see what elements are reasonable.