Letterabcd said: Fancy dress and Cirnoline confirmed for Virtual Hypnotan 3.0?
...pls? .W.
Haha that's thinking ahead. As in she wears one and hypnotises you? By the time I get to 3.0 the whole thing will be full 3d in VR so it should work quite well
Monochrome said: i would like to cut in ]: >
You're welcome to. Just be warned you might find it hard to cut out :-)
Imasuky said: I also needed to look up crinoline. I like this idea.
They are pretty crazy. Blurring the line between tailoring and architecture
*Sigh* alright, alright ... our perceptions are different in this, but whatever. I am going to point out the, at least to me, obvious things to make it valid feedback. Just saying it is bad can be misunderstood, so here's my reasoning:
The text is rather generic. It's not well thought out - the kind of text you read on so many websites and makes you switch between cringing and rolling your eyes instead of having a fun little read. A decent story focused around the character with sentences that don't make you think the character in the picture is talking to a horny teenager would vastly improve the overall quality. There's obviously a reason why this character was drawn so create something that fits the character and its traits. If you can make something work with it that wouldn't fit other characters, it's probably going to be a lot more interesting.
It also doesn't help that the text is put on the side in a big grey area that so clearly separates the picture and the text like they are two completely separate things. I would have used the same background color. It unnecessarily splits both elements, which should be one. I really think the pictures would be better without any text at all or with a decent story. Having it done like this actually does your art a disservice and devalues it.
This is of course only my opinion. Others may be fine with the story you wrote and might enjoy it - that doesn't mean they would enjoy it even more if the story was better. :)
Dazeys
2016-10-08 03:21:04>> #130516
Pinkanator
2016-10-10 22:25:47>> #131082
but I didn't want him to turn it around
SUCKS TO BE YOU
GO FEMDOM! GO FEMDOM!
imp9
2016-10-10 22:22:30>> #131077
YOU TURNED IT AROUNDDDDDD
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
but I didn't want him to turn it around
Thadias_trip
2016-10-08 08:14:14>> #130594
YOU TURNED IT AROUNDDDDDD
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
Truly Tharja is our one true mistress and saviot
The_scrublord
2016-10-08 07:00:45>> #130578
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
Jesus! Calm your tits, sooth your boobs, undo the calamity that is your mamaries!
Pinkanator
2016-10-08 03:16:27>> #130511
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
pokemongirl
2016-10-08 23:58:41>> #130707
Nazwa
2016-10-08 19:50:02>> #130654
Wait isn't the cat girl blake from rwby
Who?
I assure you that I've never seen RWBY.
sonicfire65
2016-10-08 18:25:43>> #130651
asaola
2016-10-08 08:51:29>> #130602
Riley
2016-10-08 06:13:15>> #130570
wolfkiller99
2016-10-08 01:33:33>> #130482
EdgeOfTheMoon
2016-10-08 12:10:29>> #130624
Fancy dress and Cirnoline confirmed for Virtual Hypnotan 3.0?
...pls? .W.
Haha that's thinking ahead. As in she wears one and hypnotises you? By the time I get to 3.0 the whole thing will be full 3d in VR so it should work quite well
i would like to cut in ]: >
You're welcome to. Just be warned you might find it hard to cut out :-)
I also needed to look up crinoline. I like this idea.
They are pretty crazy. Blurring the line between tailoring and architecture
Fancy dresses, tho. <3
Fancy dresses for fancy hypnosis <3
Kansattica
2016-10-08 11:20:49>> #130617
Letterabcd
2016-10-08 01:47:51>> #130486
...pls? .W.
AshleighZenith
2016-10-08 01:28:43>> #130481
Spiny spiral dress ^w^
Yus that is so me <3
Pinkanator
2016-10-08 01:21:40>> #130480
Which one~
Spiny spiral dress ^w^
Pinkanator
2016-10-08 00:55:55>> #130467
Systemfailure99
2016-10-08 00:55:02>> #130466
114
2019-02-27 11:06:47>> #306346
reader8363
2016-10-08 08:25:01>> #130597
plsignore
2016-10-08 00:48:22>> #130464
lkoiououi
2017-03-15 20:22:01>> #161852
I've only ever properly played Gen 4 Pokémon.
Thats the only one i have not properly played
Dragon-Cana-Love
2016-10-10 08:25:51>> #130941
Ah, right, Glacia. I think that might be because her Japanese name is Prim... Or at least that's what I'm getting from Bulbapedia.
No he's talking about Lorelei she appeared in the Orange Islands and they called her Prima, her japanese name is Kanna, but Glacia is Prim
Dragon-Cana-Love
2016-10-10 08:24:10>> #130940
If I didn't like Lorelei so much, I would have voted for only Candice to lose because she's a FUCKING CHEATER AND DESERVES IT.
How's she a cheater?
OmegaLurker
2016-10-10 06:08:28>> #130917
solddate
2016-10-09 14:03:03>> #130852
It's her name in the dub in the show they renamed her Prima XD
Actually I kind of like that interpretation of her more anyway smart and poetic and bigger boobs *giggles*
Imasuky said:
Yeah the changed it to fit the lip flaps.
Ah, right, Glacia. I think that might be because her Japanese name is Prim... Or at least that's what I'm getting from Bulbapedia.
HypnoMangaEditor
2016-10-08 07:51:54>> #130592
The text is rather generic. It's not well thought out - the kind of text you read on so many websites and makes you switch between cringing and rolling your eyes instead of having a fun little read. A decent story focused around the character with sentences that don't make you think the character in the picture is talking to a horny teenager would vastly improve the overall quality. There's obviously a reason why this character was drawn so create something that fits the character and its traits. If you can make something work with it that wouldn't fit other characters, it's probably going to be a lot more interesting.
It also doesn't help that the text is put on the side in a big grey area that so clearly separates the picture and the text like they are two completely separate things. I would have used the same background color. It unnecessarily splits both elements, which should be one. I really think the pictures would be better without any text at all or with a decent story. Having it done like this actually does your art a disservice and devalues it.
This is of course only my opinion. Others may be fine with the story you wrote and might enjoy it - that doesn't mean they would enjoy it even more if the story was better. :)
Sophia
2016-10-08 00:12:19>> #130451
Your art keeps getting better. Sadly, your stories are just as bad as they have always been. :(
That's really rude, just like I remember you to be :(
vahn_yourdoom
2016-10-07 23:48:08>> #130445
Your art keeps getting better. Sadly, your stories are just as bad as they have always been. :(
lul, well i think of the stories usually on the last minutes :p
Pinkanator
2016-10-07 23:42:31>> #130442
Your art keeps getting better. Sadly, your stories are just as bad as they have always been. :(
Well that's rude.
HypnoMangaEditor
2016-10-07 23:41:37>> #130441
pokemongirl
2016-10-08 23:50:59>> #130701
Emphaticpikachu
2016-10-07 19:48:20>> #130402