Sirloin said: Maybe the picture cuts off there and they just went with what they had...?
yep, that was the only reasonable good pic I could find .-. and about the comma thing, I only noticed it after posting, and I was like "fuck it! Too lazy to fix it"
I'm not sure of the exact allure of feet so I can't give you any pointers on that, but some potential issues I see:
- the story focuses on the feet, yet in the picture the foot is sort of off-center/off-focus, and the other foot is cut off entirely. Using another image may be a better fit for your story.
- the other (more minor/nitpicky) thing is the text layout, the coma should not be at the start of a new line, al you want -> all you want, and I think that font is Times New Roman? It gives a stiff/professional look, instead of maybe a teasing/dominate feel you're going for here.
i She means that it's too "blunt" of you know what I mean, it's not really "hypnotizing" or like Relanor said, "alluring" It needs to have an origin of some sorts and it needs more detail and thoroughness
Zarvex3 said: Haha, thanks. It's another one of those shows where we really need more stuff of it on the Hub...and like I said, there are a lot more blonde, tanned brainless bimbos in my collection of pics so far XD
Pinkanator said: Still haven't gotten to Kill la Kill, but damn that's hot.
Haha, thanks. It's another one of those shows where we really need more stuff of it on the Hub...and like I said, there are a lot more blonde, tanned brainless bimbos in my collection of pics so far XD
Hentila
2016-08-25 21:58:08>> #121689
Maybe the picture cuts off there and they just went with what they had...?
yep, that was the only reasonable good pic I could find .-. and about the comma thing, I only noticed it after posting, and I was like "fuck it! Too lazy to fix it"
Sirloin
2016-08-25 20:30:10>> #121681
Cradily
2016-08-25 20:28:17>> #121679
- the story focuses on the feet, yet in the picture the foot is sort of off-center/off-focus, and the other foot is cut off entirely. Using another image may be a better fit for your story.
- the other (more minor/nitpicky) thing is the text layout, the coma should not be at the start of a new line, al you want -> all you want, and I think that font is Times New Roman? It gives a stiff/professional look, instead of maybe a teasing/dominate feel you're going for here.
Hypnofootslave
2016-08-25 18:13:16>> #121668
What exactly do you mean?
She means that it's too "blunt" of you know what I mean, it's not really "hypnotizing" or like Relanor said, "alluring" It needs to have an origin of some sorts and it needs more detail and thoroughness
Hentila
2016-08-24 04:12:05>> #121306
Almost fantastic, just not enough flare. Nothing sexy about this- you need allure.
What exactly do you mean?
pokemongirl
2016-08-23 22:09:14>> #121156
EdgeOfTheMoon
2016-08-23 21:17:55>> #121141
Pingo
2016-08-23 19:53:33>> #121133
Hope you like it =)
Pinkanator
2016-08-23 18:30:18>> #121128
Haha, thanks. It's another one of those shows where we really need more stuff of it on the Hub...and like I said, there are a lot more blonde, tanned brainless bimbos in my collection of pics so far XD
Also I finally made a post in the manip general here hypnohub.net/forum/show/111?page=29 but haven't heard anything back yet.
It really depends on the inspiration. You may, you may not. They're great regardless XP
Zarvex3
2016-08-23 16:38:17>> #121124
Still haven't gotten to Kill la Kill, but damn that's hot.
Haha, thanks. It's another one of those shows where we really need more stuff of it on the Hub...and like I said, there are a lot more blonde, tanned brainless bimbos in my collection of pics so far XD
Also I finally made a post in the manip general here hypnohub.net/forum/show/111?page=29 but haven't heard anything back yet.
Pinkanator
2016-08-23 16:21:57>> #121122
Evilunicorn
2021-02-01 12:15:59>> #404720
Argonis
2016-08-31 04:59:32>> #122809
gmun
2016-08-24 08:53:40>> #121348
Don't know why girls with their hair up and entranced looks really hot but it works.
ill second that notion
pokemongirl
2016-08-23 22:06:45>> #121155
Contorted
2016-08-23 19:22:32>> #121131
pokemongirl
2016-08-23 21:58:44>> #121151
Flashlight237
2016-08-23 12:27:04>> #121113
SeaithDaizon
2016-08-23 10:46:52>> #121105
If you’re interested in a comm, please contact me privately for one!
SeaithDaizon
2016-08-23 10:46:34>> #121104
If you’re interested in a comm, please contact me privately for one!
FireMario86
2017-04-27 03:53:11>> #171237
You can mil anything with nipples.
And before ask Pink yes that includes you. Male lactation is real but rare.
....I have nipples, Greg. Can you milk me? :P
Imasuky
2017-04-27 03:46:32>> #171234
Welll, cats make milk too :)
You can mil anything with nipples.
And before ask Pink yes that includes you. Male lactation is real but rare.
EdenSnake
2017-04-27 03:45:11>> #171232
Kitty cow. Strange concept.
SCIENCE DEMANDS I MILK YOU
Welll, cats make milk too :)
Pinkanator
2016-08-23 22:09:38>> #121157
Mmmmm I wana be a kitty cow *drools* NEED to be milked!
Kitty cow. Strange concept.
SCIENCE DEMANDS I MILK YOU
pokemongirl
2016-08-23 22:05:47>> #121154
Brainwasher
2016-08-23 10:06:15>> #121099
Kass: Yes master
Kaa: Good bring them here next time so they can have "fun"
Kass: yes master
indenial394
2021-02-22 21:52:54>> #407643
Hmmmmn, cockwashing *drools*
Even better, cockwashing from dresshorse... *eyes roll into back of head*
asaola
2016-09-17 05:40:29>> #125782
CuddlyCarlos
2016-08-24 02:53:30>> #121262
what is the model for the helmet?
50% is a 'ween hat from tf2, 50% is custom.
filflat
2016-08-23 21:49:22>> #121147
filflat
2016-08-23 21:47:48>> #121145