EroSaur626 also commissioned this piece of Emily & Gina with cowkinis by Smeef (also known as Valvalis).
It's because of them that we get to enjoy all of this milk.
Emily and Gina are from the game Slaver's Quest, which I work on. The free game is available here: slv-quest.fanbox.cc . I also post updates on the Hub forum.
Date Mar 5, 2024UserVortexMasterRating SafeScore45(vote up)
Transcript: "Just relax, everything will be alright, we promise-" The girls before her smiled eerily, each one looking beautiful, and each identical to the last. An endless wall of seemingly mindless drones acting on a single controller's wishes, and now their wishes were her. "Just keeps staring, let yourself sink deeper" It was hard to stop, hard to pull her gaze away and escape, so hard that she couldn't, all she could do was keep staring and sink a little deeper. "That's a good girl you want this you need this!" As she stared, their words sounded more and more right, her mind fading, voices forming, telling her how beautiful she could be, how beautiful she should be. "That's right, relax, sink, surrender, and join us!" She could feel herself changing even now, her bust and hips growing out as her waist shrank in, her hair lengthening down her back, her eyes were taking on the same glowing, pink hue that she was staring into She was becoming one of them, and all she could do was sink deeper and deeper, losing her old self to this new one, her mind felt so fragile, almost like the littlest thing could shatter it into tiny, broken, unnecessary fragments as she gave herself to the collective It scared her how close she was to disappearing and she loved that. "I'm a good doll
- The text is to small - Try to avoid generic fonts, there are plenty of easy to read Fonts out there - wild words or anime ace 2.0 are often used in Manga Translations, people are pretty used to them and if you use generic fonts you are kind of pulling people out of there comfort zone - which you don't want to do, especially when we talk about trance and relaxation in a manip - It's fine if you just add space left and/or right with the text, however you should avoid colors that don't match the picture. For example, the above picture is quite dark, using white is the worst choice here. Both black and a gradiant from black to dark blue would have been better. You can also just extract the color code by using the pipette, simple and easy. Lastly, bluring the edges where the 2 blocks (picture and textblock) does make the transition a bit better. - Don't get any illusion that your work was very good on your first try because your score is great. Your base picture choice was very good and you have none of the big blacklisted tags on this picture. That gets you a decent score by default. - Color codings in the text is a good idea. Especially like you did with certain keywords. You can also use it to make it easier for people to see which character is talking, if you have multiple characters in your story. However, in most cases I would advise you color coding by outlining text - you can see how that looks here: hypnohub.net/post/show/36429 - there are exceptions, mostly with certain colored backgrounds, where you will want to color the text and outline it black (example here: hypnohub.net/post/show/49645 )
LukaBood said: Sadly, I don't really have a source, it's an image I saved ages ago and I don't remember where I found it! If anyone else can provide one, or the original artist, please do!
Done. By the way, I hope you won't mind if I will manip this pic in the future. I just don't like the idea of abandoning that story.
Anhita said: that moment you want the original image sauce but its not posted at all
Sadly, I don't really have a source, it's an image I saved ages ago and I don't remember where I found it! If anyone else can provide one, or the original artist, please do!
SnowyLight
2024-03-05 22:24:34>> #537300
pokemongirl
2024-02-25 19:15:09>> #536421
Perks of having controllable tail hair~~~
loganblast39
2024-03-05 22:19:01>> #537298
RakugakiToki
2024-03-05 20:43:46>> #537293
IDPet
2024-03-05 21:10:11>> #537295
tvattrcerebr
2024-03-05 20:55:52>> #537294
IDPet
2024-03-05 19:06:13>> #537280
anonlv000
2024-03-05 19:59:40>> #537292
The no-dialogue version can be found at this post's child, #197657.
pokemongirl
2024-03-05 19:53:53>> #537287
Valvalis
2024-03-05 19:38:37>> #537282
anonlv000
2024-03-05 18:58:28>> #537279
It's because of them that we get to enjoy all of this milk.
Emily and Gina are from the game Slaver's Quest, which I work on.
The free game is available here: slv-quest.fanbox.cc .
I also post updates on the Hub forum.
Bloodly
2024-03-05 19:57:46>> #537291
pokemongirl
2024-03-05 19:55:19>> #537290
pokemongirl
2024-03-05 19:54:30>> #537289
pokemongirl
2024-03-05 19:51:42>> #537285
Hopefully with a side of fries lol
pokemongirl
2024-03-05 19:48:58>> #537284
CandyBimbo
2024-03-05 15:48:49>> #537256
april
2024-03-05 19:33:04>> #537281
"Just relax, everything will be alright, we promise-" The girls before her smiled eerily, each one looking beautiful, and each identical to the last. An endless wall of seemingly mindless drones acting on a single controller's wishes, and now their wishes were her.
"Just keeps staring, let yourself sink deeper" It was hard to stop, hard to pull her gaze away and escape, so hard that she couldn't, all she could do was keep staring and sink a little deeper.
"That's a good girl you want this you need this!"
As she stared, their words sounded more and more right, her mind fading, voices forming, telling her how beautiful she could be, how beautiful she should be. "That's right, relax, sink, surrender, and join us!"
She could feel herself changing even now, her bust and hips growing out as her waist shrank in, her hair lengthening down her back, her eyes were taking on the same glowing, pink hue that she was staring into She was becoming one of them, and all she could do was sink deeper and deeper, losing her old self to this new one, her mind felt so fragile, almost like the littlest thing could shatter it into tiny, broken, unnecessary fragments as she gave herself to the collective It scared her how close she was to disappearing and she loved that.
"I'm a good doll
LukaBood
2017-09-15 22:08:43>> #198822
Done. By the way, I hope you won't mind if I will manip this pic in the future. I just don't like the idea of abandoning that story.
Thank you, and of course I don't, not my pic in the first place anyway!
Some tipps since this is your first manip...
Thank you very much for the advise, I'll take it in mind if I do another one! (Nothing in mind currently, I'll see if I get any further inspiration!)
HypnoMangaEditor
2017-09-15 15:00:37>> #198748
- The text is to small
- Try to avoid generic fonts, there are plenty of easy to read Fonts out there - wild words or anime ace 2.0 are often used in Manga Translations, people are pretty used to them and if you use generic fonts you are kind of pulling people out of there comfort zone - which you don't want to do, especially when we talk about trance and relaxation in a manip
- It's fine if you just add space left and/or right with the text, however you should avoid colors that don't match the picture. For example, the above picture is quite dark, using white is the worst choice here. Both black and a gradiant from black to dark blue would have been better. You can also just extract the color code by using the pipette, simple and easy. Lastly, bluring the edges where the 2 blocks (picture and textblock) does make the transition a bit better.
- Don't get any illusion that your work was very good on your first try because your score is great. Your base picture choice was very good and you have none of the big blacklisted tags on this picture. That gets you a decent score by default.
- Color codings in the text is a good idea. Especially like you did with certain keywords. You can also use it to make it easier for people to see which character is talking, if you have multiple characters in your story. However, in most cases I would advise you color coding by outlining text - you can see how that looks here: hypnohub.net/post/show/36429 - there are exceptions, mostly with certain colored backgrounds, where you will want to color the text and outline it black (example here: hypnohub.net/post/show/49645 )
T323
2017-09-15 14:40:24>> #198747
Sadly, I don't really have a source, it's an image I saved ages ago and I don't remember where I found it! If anyone else can provide one, or the original artist, please do!
Done. By the way, I hope you won't mind if I will manip this pic in the future. I just don't like the idea of abandoning that story.
LukaBood
2017-09-15 14:11:20>> #198743
that moment you want the original image sauce but its not posted at all
Sadly, I don't really have a source, it's an image I saved ages ago and I don't remember where I found it! If anyone else can provide one, or the original artist, please do!