I want that worm

Yes mistress more more

yes more of her

Deal c:

I would be fine with this.

Not really. I was planning on this being something of a Dom-recurring character. In response to a lot of this community's perpetually sub characters like Erika, Hypno-Tan, and Crystal.

It very easily could be an inorganic android, with synthetic skin and fur. I don't believe there's any tag that fits for any possibility

It'd be cyborg if it's just partial, wouldn't it?

*nerd glasses spontaneously generate on face...displacing the glasses that were already there*

Try "robot"

What's with the mechanical bits?

EDIT: Wait I'm dumb. What tag do we use for androids (not robotification), and do we have a tag for visible seams?

I cant wait for my dearest to get us a trip here~

Mmmmm even more reasons to go to the Pink Hibiscus Resort *drools*
Love this so much Mr. H <3

I couldn't resist using it, stuff like that is one of my favourite kinds of visual gag.

Pink Hibiscus Resort, fostering peace by blasting people's minds til they forget that they're [one sided?] nemesis..es...

[ like that Awake-san's pointy hair thing going all wibbly when she's under seems to have become a running thing]

Nice! First time seeing Awake-Tan look so chilled out. Guess the holiday was good for her ^^

Thanks for drawing her H. Looks great!

Watched the stream for this, nice and chill.

Turned out great, love the bimboification that's not over the top. Very nice.

Seriously, Kassidy with the long hair like that is too hot.

Mmmm love these bimbos *drools*

IS this... healthy bimbofication? Whoa.

Fav for unusual thing.

Looks like a nice place too live.

As would i! @u@

I would love to become that

I would love to become that

Really like her design : )

Lots of cum from a titjob is also good as well : )

Hmm ... looks very "Velma"?

There is, I think. If not, there's the bbw tag.

why there is no "chubby" tag? I want more chubby girls in trance

Hehe. Uncanny valley.



I think the eyes look fine. The only "problem" I see with the image is that (imo) nasty filter on it to make it look like photo from an old camera.

It's creepy....like the artist took real bodies, then cg'ed their faces....that one on the left! brrrr...

I'm more concerned toward the eyes + think that the pic can be fixed up a bit more, otherwise it's nothing outlandish. Just wanna run it by QCC mainly.

Im not sure but I think the quality is fine, but the artist was trying to make it look like a polaroid or other old camera shot..

still definitely room for some polish here n there

Never put action in parenthesis like that. You either have to make it a prose narrative, or make it a script, or omit it.

Nice little story, not exactly what I had in mind when I commissioned it but still nice little idea for it!

Meh. You took away all her sass. You took away 'Meg'.

Trying to signal who's talking can be tricky. Especially if you are going for a specific character that isn't visible. Although I'm not sure what you could have done better aside from giving Meg a line to spell it out (like "What am I doing here, Hades?"), but that costs valuable space. For what it's worth I did recognize Hades from the first "babe"

My only gripe is that the control and transformation get reduced to quick little notes that might as well say "look at the pic" I would rather have had descriptions there and leave the reader to go "Oh, that pic is showing that part."

It's good, but yeah, I'd definitely recommend clarification, as well as maybe some quotation marks around dialogue instead of parentheses around actions. The actions are also a bit off, they look like a chat RP's commands. Instead of the "casts spell" line, I'd recommend something like "He casts a spell, and-" etc. Also, "show signs" is kinda vague, like, signs of? Or signs as in the spirals? If it's the spirals, don't use "signs", as the word doesn't make sense in that context. As for the transformation, go into detail, it's no fun if it's just someone transforming without any other descriptive text. You should try writing as if there's no art to go along with it in manips like these.

can i just fail my save without rolling @.@