StepfordCrimson said: Why someone asked for a commission featuring characters from one of the WORST cartoons i've seen in awhile is beyond me but hey whatever gets good looking hypno art on here I suppose :P
One of the reasons why. Nobody expects it. And then it was just 4 bucks extra for total of 14...
Why someone asked for a commission featuring characters from one of the WORST cartoons i've seen in awhile is beyond me but hey whatever gets good looking hypno art on here I suppose :P
And now that I stumbled upon this after looking through the consensual hypnosis pool, I'd like to see consensual couples hypnosis with Nick and Judy, on the grounds that he makes his living manipulating others and therefore probably knows at least a little about hypnosis even if it's not practical for most cons.
Date May 24, 2016UserMasakakiKairiRating SafeScore55(vote up)
I definitely appreciate such detailed/helpful feedback, thank you.
Yeah, I'm glad you were able to refresh to see that I had posted the text there. I'm still not sure why the text gets so screwed up, but thanks for the luck wishing on figuring it out. I definitely hope to do that, soon. And yeah, I can see what you mean there with the last sentence/first bubble.
I agree with what you mean in terms of so much negative space. I had thought I'd be slightly different when finished, and I should've planned out the text bubbles better. It definitely would've been better placed elsewhere. Thanks for pointing that out - I'll keep that in mind.
As far as the background, I was afraid that might be the case. I was hoping it wouldn't be too jarring, but thanks for pointing that out.
I think I see what you mean about the couch and the cushion level. It might just be how I angled her and the pillows. Maybe.
I'm glad that the details in the expression was noticed. I tried to make sure she appeared quite happy in her position - as well as other things here or there.
A few things bug me here: Quite hard to read. Between the size of the text and the kerning, this strains my eyes a fair amount. You have a lot of negative space in the lower left there, which would be a good place to have those bubbles. As a bonus it'd also mean you aren't overlapping the focus of the image. The background is quite nice, but it draws my eyes away due to the stylistic difference. Perspective seems a bit skewed (eg. back of the couch seems like it would dip to cushion level well before it ends), though that might just be me. That being said, I love the eyes, with the faint traces of spirals hidden in the gradient, all the small details and her expression.
Edit: Oops, shoulda refreshed before posting my comment. Good luck finding out what does that to the text. Thanks for posting what was written. Being able to read it without trouble now, I can say I like it. The last sentence of the first bubble seems a little "exposition-y", but the rest is quite enjoyable.
I'll put it here! Since sometimes it seems the font is screwed up when I upload to FA...
---
01: Look, Master... at how many signatures. It fills up the back and front... and after reviewing, I know that the rest of your obedient slaves will get the rest to obey with your hypno-baton that you have given us to use.
02: It arouses me to know that I am part of something so special and important that will spread from village to village all for our Master.
03: Sitting here, out in the open, almost fully nude while letting the wind brush against my bare paws fills me with such pleasure. As Master has also taught - not only is obedience pleasure, but worshipping paws are pleasure as well.
04: I will continue to pass this information and spread it so that Master will have more and more of us, just as soon as I am done obeying the step which involves self-pleasure. Thank you, Master for giving such instructions to your loyal slaves.
--
The Petition says:
Feet Are Pleasure. Obedience Is Pleasure. --
Then lists a bunch of Animal Crossing villagers.
I hope that helps!
I'll need to really look into making sure the text/font doesn't suffer when I upload. I apologize!
Once a petition has been signed, it's taken to the Mayor. However, before many things go to the Mayor, it must first go through their assistant: Isabelle.
Of course, when the petition is joined with a user that's holding a hypno-wand - Isabelle knows that not only must she obey the petition, but just must get more signatures.
Incubus
2016-05-25 02:01:03>> #105850
Why someone asked for a commission featuring characters from one of the WORST cartoons i've seen in awhile is beyond me but hey whatever gets good looking hypno art on here I suppose :P
One of the reasons why. Nobody expects it. And then it was just 4 bucks extra for total of 14...
StepfordCrimson
2016-05-25 01:08:36>> #105843
Pinkanator
2016-05-24 19:34:18>> #105793
youtu.be/xb5jWCNP0aE
Ah, I remember when you didn't need talent for YTP.
Vorp
2016-05-24 19:24:49>> #105792
Incubus
2016-05-24 18:58:43>> #105788
waitwhatfanartofthisshowwhatisthismadnesscurseyoucanadacurseyou
Rule 34...
(has a surprising amout of it, btw)
Also, I was hoping for such reactions :P
FemPyro221
2022-01-07 04:30:12>> #452712
lucasblakeman0
2018-12-31 02:00:14>> #296668
You mean the smell variation specifically?
Edit: <<www.deviantart.com/blackw...belle-Smell-Ver-769041697|done>> ^^
It's already on deviantart my friend!
BlackWidow69x
2018-10-20 07:17:12>> #285620
Blackwidow69x can you upload this to your deviantart account?
You mean the smell variation specifically?
Edit: <<www.deviantart.com/blackw...belle-Smell-Ver-769041697|done>> ^^
lucasblakeman
2018-10-20 01:01:15>> #285563
Pinkanator
2018-01-12 20:23:21>> #227046
Ankha appreciates and welcomes all who worship her as the Queen she is!
Ahahahaha @w@
dmcman
2016-05-25 15:04:20>> #105928
So, are you going to give the bigger version so we can see what it says on the bottle?
It says:
Mind Control Liquid
Quick & Effective
Made by Mattel
Just a stupid toy crossover joke.
Would it help if I told you I was drunk while making this?
Pinkanator
2016-05-25 04:23:35>> #105871
Clearly, it was made by en.wikipedia.org/wiki/M*A*S*H_(TV_series)
Cause suicide is painless... It brings on many changes... And I can take or leave it if I please...
Kansattica
2016-05-25 03:14:23>> #105864
that a company in the cartoon?
Clearly, it was made by en.wikipedia.org/wiki/M*A*S*H_(TV_series)
godofwar99
2016-05-24 22:59:25>> #105815
It looks like
Mind Control Liquid
Quick & Effective
Made by
Uh....
MASH???
Yeah, not gonna get that last one.
that a company in the cartoon?
rain
2016-05-24 19:07:33>> #105790
Mind Control Liquid
Quick & Effective
Made by
Uh....
MASH???
Yeah, not gonna get that last one.
volco
2016-05-25 09:33:27>> #105913
asaola
2016-05-24 10:06:50>> #105736
phantomreader42
2016-05-24 08:58:28>> #105715
And now that I stumbled upon this after looking through the consensual hypnosis pool, I'd like to see consensual couples hypnosis with Nick and Judy, on the grounds that he makes his living manipulating others and therefore probably knows at least a little about hypnosis even if it's not practical for most cons.
laststand0810
2016-05-25 05:45:39>> #105884
MasakakiKairi
2016-05-24 18:00:34>> #105781
Except zed :p
Most of the original artist's work is of Zed!
Umbra
2016-05-24 17:17:25>> #105777
MasakakiKairi
2016-05-24 17:01:07>> #105776
Nothing's gonna stop the Ahri train, NOTHING!
ikr
Dantus
2016-05-24 13:27:23>> #105758
BlackWidow69x
2016-05-24 11:06:26>> #105746
[snip]
I definitely appreciate such detailed/helpful feedback, thank you.
Yeah, I'm glad you were able to refresh to see that I had posted the text there. I'm still not sure why the text gets so screwed up, but thanks for the luck wishing on figuring it out. I definitely hope to do that, soon. And yeah, I can see what you mean there with the last sentence/first bubble.
I agree with what you mean in terms of so much negative space. I had thought I'd be slightly different when finished, and I should've planned out the text bubbles better. It definitely would've been better placed elsewhere. Thanks for pointing that out - I'll keep that in mind.
As far as the background, I was afraid that might be the case. I was hoping it wouldn't be too jarring, but thanks for pointing that out.
I think I see what you mean about the couch and the cushion level. It might just be how I angled her and the pillows. Maybe.
I'm glad that the details in the expression was noticed. I tried to make sure she appeared quite happy in her position - as well as other things here or there.
Thank you again!
natsune
2016-05-24 10:21:58>> #105739
Quite hard to read. Between the size of the text and the kerning, this strains my eyes a fair amount. You have a lot of negative space in the lower left there, which would be a good place to have those bubbles. As a bonus it'd also mean you aren't overlapping the focus of the image.
The background is quite nice, but it draws my eyes away due to the stylistic difference.
Perspective seems a bit skewed (eg. back of the couch seems like it would dip to cushion level well before it ends), though that might just be me.
That being said, I love the eyes, with the faint traces of spirals hidden in the gradient, all the small details and her expression.
Edit: Oops, shoulda refreshed before posting my comment. Good luck finding out what does that to the text. Thanks for posting what was written. Being able to read it without trouble now, I can say I like it. The last sentence of the first bubble seems a little "exposition-y", but the rest is quite enjoyable.
BlackWidow69x
2016-05-24 09:52:12>> #105731
---
01: Look, Master... at how many signatures.
It fills up the back and front... and after
reviewing, I know that the rest of your
obedient slaves will get the rest to obey
with your hypno-baton that you have given
us to use.
02: It arouses me to know that
I am part of something so
special and important that
will spread from village
to village all for our Master.
03: Sitting here, out in the open, almost
fully nude while letting the wind
brush against my bare paws fills
me with such pleasure. As Master
has also taught - not only is obedience
pleasure, but worshipping paws are
pleasure as well.
04: I will continue to pass this information
and spread it so that Master will have
more and more of us, just as soon
as I am done obeying the step which
involves self-pleasure. Thank you,
Master for giving such instructions
to your loyal slaves.
--
The Petition says:
Feet Are Pleasure.
Obedience Is Pleasure.
--
Then lists a bunch of Animal Crossing villagers.
I hope that helps!
I'll need to really look into making sure the text/font doesn't suffer when I upload. I apologize!
phantomreader42
2016-05-24 08:59:22>> #105716
BlackWidow69x
2016-05-24 08:51:07>> #105712
--
Once a petition has been signed, it's taken to the Mayor. However, before many things go to the Mayor, it must first go through their assistant: Isabelle.
Of course, when the petition is joined with a user that's holding a hypno-wand - Isabelle knows that not only must she obey the petition, but just must get more signatures.
After she enjoys herself first, that is...
Isabelle © ACNL
For some You can purchase your own "Your Character Here" from me: (I wish I could use html here, sorry) www.furaffinity.net/view/20062713/ || www.furaffinity.net/view/20062678/
kharonalpua
2016-05-24 08:00:04>> #105704
EDIT: Somehow that got posted on the wrong image. And it took me 3 days to notice.
MaDrow
2016-05-25 03:23:22>> #105866
Dick Dastardly did nothing wrong.
He almost killed a pidgeon |=(;3c
Pinkanator
2016-05-24 18:52:28>> #105785
You don't want one. It'd turn out like this:
www.youtube.com/watch?v=rgJ7Yf_2GuI
Well someone missed the fucking point.
I mean... It's good, but it's awful. So very, very awful.
But I like it?
But I take perverse pleasure in Lunatix Unleashed.
Bloodly
2016-05-24 16:59:16>> #105775
WHERE THE FUCK IS MY HONG KONG PHOOEY REBOOT YOU HACKS?!?
You don't want one. It'd turn out like this:
www.youtube.com/watch?v=rgJ7Yf_2GuI
Imasuky
2016-05-24 10:55:48>> #105743
WHERE THE FUCK IS MY HONG KONG PHOOEY REBOOT YOU HACKS?!?
They are making another Scooby Doo comic, with cyber punk stuff. What I want to know it's where the new Batfink?
Does anyone else even remember that one?
Pinkanator
2016-05-24 10:21:55>> #105738
So anyone hear about that grimdark reboot of Wacky Racers?
I think it's interesting.
WHERE THE FUCK IS MY HONG KONG PHOOEY REBOOT YOU HACKS?!?
Lunawolf
2016-05-26 22:59:21>> #106191
MrGerp
2016-05-24 07:24:28>> #105694