I definitely appreciate such detailed/helpful feedback, thank you.

Yeah, I'm glad you were able to refresh to see that I had posted the text there. I'm still not sure why the text gets so screwed up, but thanks for the luck wishing on figuring it out. I definitely hope to do that, soon. And yeah, I can see what you mean there with the last sentence/first bubble.

I agree with what you mean in terms of so much negative space. I had thought I'd be slightly different when finished, and I should've planned out the text bubbles better. It definitely would've been better placed elsewhere. Thanks for pointing that out - I'll keep that in mind.

As far as the background, I was afraid that might be the case. I was hoping it wouldn't be too jarring, but thanks for pointing that out.

I think I see what you mean about the couch and the cushion level. It might just be how I angled her and the pillows. Maybe.

I'm glad that the details in the expression was noticed. I tried to make sure she appeared quite happy in her position - as well as other things here or there.

Thank you again!

A few things bug me here:
Quite hard to read. Between the size of the text and the kerning, this strains my eyes a fair amount. You have a lot of negative space in the lower left there, which would be a good place to have those bubbles. As a bonus it'd also mean you aren't overlapping the focus of the image.
The background is quite nice, but it draws my eyes away due to the stylistic difference.
Perspective seems a bit skewed (eg. back of the couch seems like it would dip to cushion level well before it ends), though that might just be me.
That being said, I love the eyes, with the faint traces of spirals hidden in the gradient, all the small details and her expression.

Edit: Oops, shoulda refreshed before posting my comment. Good luck finding out what does that to the text. Thanks for posting what was written. Being able to read it without trouble now, I can say I like it. The last sentence of the first bubble seems a little "exposition-y", but the rest is quite enjoyable.

I'll put it here! Since sometimes it seems the font is screwed up when I upload to FA...

---

01: Look, Master... at how many signatures.
It fills up the back and front... and after
reviewing, I know that the rest of your
obedient slaves will get the rest to obey
with your hypno-baton that you have given
us to use.

02: It arouses me to know that
I am part of something so
special and important that
will spread from village
to village all for our Master.

03: Sitting here, out in the open, almost
fully nude while letting the wind
brush against my bare paws fills
me with such pleasure. As Master
has also taught - not only is obedience
pleasure, but worshipping paws are
pleasure as well.

04: I will continue to pass this information
and spread it so that Master will have
more and more of us, just as soon
as I am done obeying the step which
involves self-pleasure. Thank you,
Master for giving such instructions
to your loyal slaves.

--

The Petition says:

Feet Are Pleasure.
Obedience Is Pleasure.
--

Then lists a bunch of Animal Crossing villagers.

I hope that helps!

I'll need to really look into making sure the text/font doesn't suffer when I upload. I apologize!

Print is kinda hard to read, even zoomed, but maybe I just need my glasses.

Thanks for posting this :3

--

Once a petition has been signed, it's taken to the Mayor. However, before many things go to the Mayor, it must first go through their assistant: Isabelle.

Of course, when the petition is joined with a user that's holding a hypno-wand - Isabelle knows that not only must she obey the petition, but just must get more signatures.

After she enjoys herself first, that is...

Isabelle © ACNL

For some You can purchase your own "Your Character Here" from me: (I wish I could use html here, sorry) www.furaffinity.net/view/20062713/ || www.furaffinity.net/view/20062678/

Is it really done? Only part 7 will tell. Whenever that may be ;)

EDIT: Somehow that got posted on the wrong image. And it took me 3 days to notice.

He almost killed a pidgeon |=(;3c

Well someone missed the fucking point.

I mean... It's good, but it's awful. So very, very awful.

But I like it?

But I take perverse pleasure in Lunatix Unleashed.

You don't want one. It'd turn out like this:

www.youtube.com/watch?v=rgJ7Yf_2GuI

They are making another Scooby Doo comic, with cyber punk stuff. What I want to know it's where the new Batfink?

Does anyone else even remember that one?

WHERE THE FUCK IS MY HONG KONG PHOOEY REBOOT YOU HACKS?!?

Like it alot funny how the first thing it makes her do is put her hand down her pants xD

Must suck to be possessed by the hands of The Onceler.

Nice :)

[CURRENT YEAR]

>Not brainwashing her with her own headphones
>2016

Wunderbar, we're back!

Is that the Hulk in panel 1?

Also, when is Dina Blue gonna come in and kick some ass?

Something reminiscent about that look on the last panel of vinyl.

Cool. Can't wait to see them

(She's totally mine)
But yeah we need more Chiaki for sure! I promise once I get the funds I'll commission some of her from Jack

Agreed, and so does the Danganronpa franchise as well. Danganronpa and hypnosis/mind control is my favorite combination

Back off, she's mine! (ง'̀-'́)ง

Still, I think that we can agree that we need more Chiaki on the Hub.

Dafuq?

I will not deny I do have a soft spot for Sunstone, so it probably did have an influence on the styling

This looks like a hypnosis sunstone

Agreed ten-fold!

Man I love these two!!! You got to keep it up they're amazing!

They just ignore you for the extra attention :P

honestly I could see this playing out either way as femsub or femdom... damned good pic either way

It is good, it's just also a few different kinds of fucked up and a bit of a depression smorgasboard.

I thought it was really good, influential and important though?

(but, you have really high standards, so idk.)

You saved yourself some pain ...

Ah, right - the eyes are actually brighter than the original but it is fairly subtle. I could change that, or add some dialogue (not that I'm at all familiar with NGE).

Man I want someone to write a story for this

That wouldn't be entirely out of character...

...It looks like she just walked up to the brainwashing machine and went "hey, that looks like fun!"

more bumblebee and nora will improve this site by 10000%

I don't know, but it's unforgivable.

More Nora.