This is an alternate version of a scene I posted here a while back; I finally found an actual crystal prop that I liked well enough to use. Thanks to Archeopterix making it and giving it away.

...This is great.

Gas plant hypnosis

Hittin all the good buttons

I have a newfound respect for you, Myuk.

1. Great art
2. 3rd best hypnosis type
3. That fucking S-Tier pun, I fucking love it and imma tell all my frie-oh.

That gas works fast.

Also, looking at the one panel where you just see outlines of their eyes, did Inma and Joyce switch positions?

Once again...
Myuk does is stuff~
And i am just here, applaudîg!

The makers of the anime were like "Fuck that Pokédex entry and borrow footage from Sweet Scent". First I was very happy when I've learnt this (then upcoming) episode was about Stantler. After watching I felt ripped off |=(:/

Oh god so I wasn't the only one

all they need is some red eyes and they'll be lit.

I must have watched the jungle book 80 times.

Younger us took what we could get. Ooh, dictionary entry for 'Trance?' Yes, please! xD

Transcript:
HEY THERE, WANTED TO SEE HOW YOU'RE HOLDING UP.

OH, GOOD I GUESS.

WELL THAT'S GOOD. SOME OF THE BOYS WERE WORRIED YOU'D HAVE SOME TROUBLE ADJUSTING,

HUH? OH THAT, NO OF COURSE NOT. A GIRL, IN CHARGE OF AN ENTIRE SHIP? *GIGGLE* THAT'S THE SILLIEST. THING I'VE EVER HEARD. IT SEEMS LIKE SUCH A LONG TIME AGO, I CAN HARDLY. EVEN REMEMBER BEING CALLED "CAPTAIN"

IT WAS YESTERDAY...SO YOU'RE FINE WITH THE DEMOTION?

HUH... WHAT? OH, YAH, I MEAN SHIPS PLEASURE TOY IS A MUCH BETTER POSITION FOR A GIRL LIKE ME, I THINK. SORRY I'M A LITTLE OUT OF IT. I'VE BEEN WATCHING THIS TRAINING VIDEO ON THE POSITION ALL DAY. I WAS KIND OF CONFUSED AT FIRST, BUT I THINK ... I GET THIS HAPPY FUZZY FEELING WHENEVER I THINK ABOUT LETTING THE GUYS USE ME.

I KNOW! RIGHT? SOME OF THE OTHER GIRLS SEEMED TO HAVE TROUBLE WITH IT I'M GLAD TO SEE YOU'RE DOING OK THOUGH! MELLI DOWN IN ENGINEERING? SHE WAS THROWING A FIT ABOUT IT. SOMETHING ABOUT A CONSPIRACY AND BRAINWASHING AND HOW SHE WAS A SUPER SMART "CHIEF ENGINEER.'

*GIGGLE* THAT'S SILLY. SHE'S A GIRL! GIRLS CAN'T FIGURE OUT COMPLICATED MACHINES AND COMPUTERS. THAT'S WORK FOR BOYS.

WELL NO DUH. ANYHOW, THEY FINALLY GOT HER OUT OF THE LAB SHE'D LOCKED DOWN THE BOYS SAID THANKS FOR THE ACCESS CODES BY THE WAY. I'VE GOT HER STRAPPED DOWN HERE IN MEDICAL NOW.

OH SURE, ANYTHING FOR THE MEN. I'M JUST GLAD I COULD REMEMBER ALL THOSE NUMBERS, IT WAS SUPER HARD. HOW IS MELLI DOING?

SHE IS OK. LIKE, AN HOUR AGO ONE OF THE BOYS PUT THIS VIZOR THINGY ON HER, SO SHE COULD WATCH SOME RETRAINING VIDEOS LIKE YOU. SHE WAS YELLING UP A STORM, BUT NOW SHE'S QUIETED DOWN. OH HEY LOOK, SHE'S DROOLING.

WELL OK DOC, I HOPE SHE LEARNS ALL ABOUT BEING A GOOD LITTLE FUCK TOY.

"NURSET SILLY. ME A DOCTOR? *GIGGLE* THAT'S A GOOD ONE! THE GUYS SAID SHE WOULDN'T KNOW HOW TO DO ANYTHING ELSE WHEN SHE'S DONE. ANYHOW. ONE OF THE GUYS IS GOING TO COME CHECK ON YOU IN A BIT. SO MAKE SURE YOU'RE NICE AND READY. "CAPTAIN"!

*GIGGLE* SHUT UP SILLY, THAT WON'T BE A PROBLEM. I'M SUPER HORNY ALREADY.

OF COURSE YOU ARE! WE ALL ARE. JUST A BUNCH OF OBEDIENT HORNY GIRLS.

Mmm, that's some good shit!

That was my first thought!

You bimbofied the... DOCTOR....are you TRYING to gte yourselves killed!?

Thanx, and u too!

This is balls.

Nice expression

one thing. with both Greed's the tattoo was on the hand. so the tattoo should go above her boobs

Well, if it had, I think we can all agree that Ed would have been done for.

Well the original Greed was still in there sort of. So this could happen.

I seem to recall that he could have been, except his willpower was super strong.

guysshutthefuckupijustgotnetflixandimmawatchbrotherhoodafterifinishdeathnoteandwatchcodegeasscausewaverunsaysitsgreatsoiwouldntmindifyouwerentspoilerhappykthankssorrybracingforhate

Thanks~

Yay! Text! For those of you who like reading, Enjoy~

Very good, just like always ^^

New Manip~ Text Version coming soon! (Like, In Two Minutes. XD)

It's not the long text, it's the wall that hits you with all the amount of it cramped up. You can make a lot of text be a lot more digestable by providing it in a better way in bite sized chunks.

Long text is fine -- sometimes you kust need to know how to format it. It's too easy for long text to be oppressive, so sometimes, with long text, it can help to have multiple images, or to break it up in one way or another. Your writing quality seems solid, but I dislike images (personal taste) where I can't enjoy most of the image while I'm reading the text. In general, I'd recommend making sure your images don't go too wide: Build your caption to the bottom of the image, and you can sometimes get away with much longer text than pushing it all to the side.

Longer posts are heaven!

A lot of my favorite pieces are long-text manips, actually. And, again, putting aside the formatting issues, your content, your story, the written word of your manip, is actually solid.

Most importantly: you accept criticism. That means you'll grow, and growth means improvement, even outside of this world of fetish porn. I've got no room to talk about formatting of manips, but I've got a thing or two to say about writing, and I really enjoyed this piece. Don't stop. You're doing fine.

i'm glad there's some people defending this in the comments since that means i didn't completely fuck up, but i still think this is my least favorite manip of mine so far. that fact that i fucked up so hard writing fetish porn, which really should be the bottom of the barrel in terms of writing quality, does not bode well for me if i'm actually going to go on to make stuff that isn't porn. brevity is the soul of wit and i fucked up with that a lot here. and don't even try and defend the formatting, you'll just end up making yourself look silly.

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That's a reallllyyy nice collab. You guys should totally do more =P



I am ashamed I have no idea who this character this. Haven't been into touhou for a while ><

My first thought was "I know a little about Touhou, and yet I have never seen this character in my life". And then it turns out she was a background character in one game and main character of one print work.

Also, Western order names, guys.

agreed!

It'd be pretty freakin sweet to see a picture of her being hypnotized by a magical book of sorts.