huge-ass wall of nicely crafted text, and picture just being a footnote visualization of an interesting part somewhere in the text, like it would in a book :P
However, yeah that's a more fair criticism than what I thought you were originally trying to say. I do try to show rather than tell but it can be difficult in shorter pieces such as this, and when I'm trying to focus on the time when the action is the most... interesting. ;3
So yeah, that is something I'm still working on and this piece definitely was not my best as far as how I integrated the exposition. ^-^;
Thank you for the constructive criticism and the compliments, glad you're liking so far. :)
huge-ass wall of nicely crafted text, and picture just being a footnote visualization of an interesting part somewhere in the text, like it would in a book :P
Sirloin said: Kamala is a shapeshifter who can stretch, grow, shrink, her limbs or entire body. She refers to growing into a giant building sized version of herself as "Embiggening". It's even kind of her catchphrase.
This picture suggests she can use these powers very specifically
Also just realized her pubes have been shaved into the shape of the Ms. Marvel lightning bolt so either Alveus has a sense of humour or this aged up version of Kamala is goin' through some kinda phase right now.
just wondering but since she can "embiggen" ever part of her body, has she ever used it to make herslef look like a adult?
Sirloin said: Kamala is a shapeshifter who can stretch, grow, shrink, her limbs or entire body. She refers to growing into a giant building sized version of herself as "Embiggening". It's even kind of her catchphrase.
This picture suggests she can use these powers very specifically
Also just realized her pubes have been shaved into the shape of the Ms. Marvel lightning bolt so either Alveus has a sense of humour or this aged up version of Kamala is goin' through some kinda phase right now.
pokemongirl said: Embiggening Powers!?! She has these?!? Please Explain!
Kamala is a shapeshifter who can stretch, grow, shrink, her limbs or entire body. She refers to growing into a giant building sized version of herself as "Embiggening". It's even kind of her catchphrase.
This picture suggests she can use these powers very specifically
Also just realized her pubes have been shaved into the shape of the Ms. Marvel lightning bolt so either Alveus has a sense of humour or this aged up version of Kamala is goin' through some kinda phase right now.
Seen most of those before. I was more looking for specific ideas people would like to see for omakes and covers. I'll pick the ones I also like to use, and maybe some ideas of my own.
I do like at least two of the ideas you listed above, but only one of them I think I can work into an image.
Date May 6, 2016UserGJT0530Rating ExplicitScore204(vote up)
There's going to be one more page posted soon. I was waiting on a small correction.
Unfortunately I couldn't afford to finish up yet. The next campaign i manage to get a commission in, I'll commission the finale and a cover page...maybe also a back cover page. I'm currently taking cover suggestions.
hypnoguy777
2016-05-07 19:20:53>> #102724
<<m.youtube.com/watch?v=hlkhZMl6S40|wowee!>>
Mr Poopybutthole? Is that you?
Dantus
2016-05-07 18:43:07>> #102715
<<m.youtube.com/watch?v=hlkhZMl6S40|wowee!>>
That shit is great, thanks for posting it ^^.
Pinkanator
2016-05-07 17:02:08>> #102705
<<m.youtube.com/watch?v=hlkhZMl6S40|wowee!>>
Holy shit that is fucking hilarious.
pokemongirl
2016-05-07 16:19:03>> #102697
112947
2016-05-07 12:01:05>> #102684
Succubunny
2016-05-09 03:58:30>> #102938
loved it <3 cummed for you Succubunny =3
Thanks, glad you enjoyed. ^-^
FBA
2016-05-09 01:41:01>> #102912
Succubunny
2016-05-08 21:15:52>> #102891
well, that's one of the reasons i love hypnohub.net/post/show/59...ipper-ass-bimbofication-b so much :P
huge-ass wall of nicely crafted text, and picture just being a footnote visualization of an interesting part somewhere in the text, like it would in a book :P
Arashidrgn is fun that way, yes. :3
Anon123456
2016-05-08 19:45:04>> #102883
"Hun?" :p
However, yeah that's a more fair criticism than what I thought you were originally trying to say. I do try to show rather than tell but it can be difficult in shorter pieces such as this, and when I'm trying to focus on the time when the action is the most... interesting. ;3
So yeah, that is something I'm still working on and this piece definitely was not my best as far as how I integrated the exposition. ^-^;
Thank you for the constructive criticism and the compliments, glad you're liking so far. :)
well, that's one of the reasons i love hypnohub.net/post/show/59...ipper-ass-bimbofication-b so much :P
huge-ass wall of nicely crafted text, and picture just being a footnote visualization of an interesting part somewhere in the text, like it would in a book :P
Succubunny
2016-05-08 02:39:51>> #102795
Amazing @3@
Thanks, glad you like. ^-^
voyer
2016-05-07 05:32:30>> #102650
JCavalier
2016-05-07 15:30:59>> #102693
Okay, I KNOW I left a comment on this earlier today. Did the image get deleted and reuploaded?
Yes, there was a little detail I had to fix.
EoD
2016-05-07 10:47:25>> #102679
godofwar99
2016-05-07 05:29:20>> #102649
pokemongirl
2016-05-08 21:42:52>> #102895
This is pretty much what I'd be doing with my hypno-harem girls 20 hours a day.
(I mean let's be real, I can only fuck 'em for 3, 4 hours tops).
hehe
Mezzberry
2016-05-08 19:40:17>> #102881
(I mean let's be real, I can only fuck 'em for 3, 4 hours tops).
pokemongirl
2016-05-08 05:42:45>> #102819
Dear god pokemongirl why does that idea seem so hot?
Um... because it is super hot : ) *giggles*
Bibla499
2016-05-07 22:53:52>> #102751
I'd already play Nintendo without needing to be hypnotized *giggles* Though of course it's always more fun : D
Dear god pokemongirl why does that idea seem so hot?
111
2016-05-07 17:57:35>> #102708
Inactive001
2016-05-07 08:48:59>> #102667
NinjaW
2016-05-07 05:35:34>> #102651
pokemongirl
2016-05-07 03:29:54>> #102634
thedeadpool12345
2017-10-11 04:30:01>> #203889
Kamala is a shapeshifter who can stretch, grow, shrink, her limbs or entire body. She refers to growing into a giant building sized version of herself as "Embiggening". It's even kind of her catchphrase.
This picture suggests she can use these powers very specifically
Also just realized her pubes have been shaved into the shape of the Ms. Marvel lightning bolt so either Alveus has a sense of humour or this aged up version of Kamala is goin' through some kinda phase right now.
just wondering but since she can "embiggen" ever part of her body, has she ever used it to make herslef look like a adult?
Verity
2017-04-30 10:33:35>> #171901
pokemongirl
2016-05-07 04:31:51>> #102642
Kamala is a shapeshifter who can stretch, grow, shrink, her limbs or entire body. She refers to growing into a giant building sized version of herself as "Embiggening". It's even kind of her catchphrase.
This picture suggests she can use these powers very specifically
Also just realized her pubes have been shaved into the shape of the Ms. Marvel lightning bolt so either Alveus has a sense of humour or this aged up version of Kamala is goin' through some kinda phase right now.
Need to read this now *drools*
Sirloin
2016-05-07 03:57:04>> #102639
Embiggening Powers!?! She has these?!? Please Explain!
Kamala is a shapeshifter who can stretch, grow, shrink, her limbs or entire body. She refers to growing into a giant building sized version of herself as "Embiggening". It's even kind of her catchphrase.
This picture suggests she can use these powers very specifically
Also just realized her pubes have been shaved into the shape of the Ms. Marvel lightning bolt so either Alveus has a sense of humour or this aged up version of Kamala is goin' through some kinda phase right now.
pokemongirl
2016-05-07 03:28:15>> #102633
Moturispicer
2021-07-03 00:07:52>> #427208
zuzej
2016-05-09 03:20:19>> #102929
zuzej
2016-05-09 03:20:18>> #102928
zuzej
2016-05-09 03:19:23>> #102927
choosing to fuck ginny over hermione
GJT0530
2016-05-07 20:04:06>> #102731
I do like at least two of the ideas you listed above, but only one of them I think I can work into an image.
GJT0530
2016-05-06 23:54:54>> #102607
Unfortunately I couldn't afford to finish up yet. The next campaign i manage to get a commission in, I'll commission the finale and a cover page...maybe also a back cover page. I'm currently taking cover suggestions.
crazyman
2016-05-06 23:02:45>> #102604
There better be more of this today
It would be nice
Diaper_queen
2016-05-06 21:27:04>> #102598
Amentibus
2016-05-07 08:42:22>> #102666
SIGN THE CONTRACT
/人◕‿‿◕人\
Lord-Enonymous
2016-05-07 06:40:34>> #102658
Morgoth
2016-05-06 23:29:42>> #102606
Don't call it rape. Just call it sex without your consent.
I really want to be able to upvote comments ^^
Mr_Face
2016-05-06 21:32:42>> #102599
Halarith
2016-05-06 21:05:38>> #102597