She looks like she's hiding cat ears XD

I think you've already established Inma as a frank character.
"... Thinking of a way for you to satisfy me", and all that.

Ayyyyyy

Glad you kept it, love the matter of factness :3c

That last line cracked me up XD. Nice

Im always open to proofread people's stuff. If you're curious on how to contact me, use the site's mailing system and I'll give you more info there. Or if I'm online on the IRC you can reach me by Whoising TradeJack and finding me under any of my aliases.

now that's what I need.

Thank you all for all of the feedback, its been really helpful so far. I'll get it right eventually.

Nice! Still a little rough in parts (already covered by those above), but as someone who's draws more enjoyment from story than image, I can say I am thankful for the fixes. I like that the story seems a little more... personable? now, as well.

General question mostly on topic: I'm sure this has been asked and answered dozens of times previously, but is there somewhere on the site dedicated to asking for/offering to proofread? I would have thought forums, but there appear to only be a small number of threads related to individuals asking for help.

I second this. You're conceptualising is fine; however, you are lacking the "finesse" for grammar. As the person before me said, you ought to have someone proofread your stuff before making the permanent version of the image. I'd write the story first on word or notepad etc.

I'd for one advise to have someone revise/proofread your writing. Not horrible in any way, but could definitely use some refining to help improve it. And if you're wondering what exactly I'm talking about, there are grammatical errors, typos, etc. that should be easily avoided...

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"Oh Yes My master! Please...put your cock in my pussy! Please master!!" :v

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You're doing good, I'd say c:

Well, I know someone's going to be very happy about this one, Myuk. c:

still practicing....

Yes.

Don't forget about the artist tag, and keep up the good work, you are getting better :)

Planeptune recruitment system?

Yes we need more Noire on here

Long Tone is long.
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it looks like this person is holding up a cat.

Longcat detected.

So KAWAII!!!!

SO KYOOOT

Jasmine is 15 during the original Aladdin Movie, which ends on the day of or after her 16th birthday. It's a major plot point that that law of Agrabah says she must choose (or be assigned) a suitor to marry by her 16th birthday. All appearances set after the first movie would show her as 16 or older, but she should at least be assumed to be 15 or older in all cases...

Possibly old enough for consent, but definitely not old enough to model in porn ;)

Also, I love nude slaves -- but outfits can be incredibly hot. Think about it as a tool for play, and costumes can become even hotter than total nudity...

I was getting her mixed up with Snow White who's 14

Even if that were the case, the loli tag wouldn't apply. Insofar as tags go, we consider looks rather than canon age.

No, Jasmine is 15-16. Google directly says 16 to a "Princess Jasmine age" query, though several results from the search claim she's 15. I trust Google over Buzzfeed, though.

Something about this has been bothering me and I've got it. That's not how Jasmine's nose works Jim.

what that backround behide those sluts?

man those outfits are slutty as all fuck and I love em.

I'll say this about Adagio, girl moves fast to get what she wants.

Well here it is. The ending of the 2nd series. Some of you may be dissapointed knowing how my previous series ended, but hey, it's my story. If you want you can consider yourselves part of the audience and you were made slaves too. Been sick lately and this was the only ideea I had. So with this it's over. All that's left will be a new series in the future for the Friendship Games movie to make it a trio. Till then enjoy and thank you for watching.

This is a great comic, although the art style goes for more realism than cartoony cuteness, which is quite different from the usual Undertale aesthetic.

Clearly Alphys' proportions in the later pages have caused some controversy, but overall I like this comic for the futa-Undyne and hypnosis method ^^

good, more for me

Oh god, so adorbs :3.

BTW, in b4 nerd rage 'the * is missing'.

EDIT: Really became a lot less adorable with the next page. Realistically drawn uber chubby Alphys is just a huge turn off.

Listen tracer, don't come at me unless you are ready to see how much I want to put inside you lol

something something die a hero, live to be a villain

Out of all the sick, twisted, depraved hentai on this site, this image of Tracer's butt is the most offensive.

I've got a lot more I want to make. Currently working on a HypNet Origin manip story.

Finally your back I've missed your work

so, I know this whole is literally 4 years old but...
did nobody notice that you quoted sans there? sneaky! :D

Also, I gotta say I am an absolute fan of internet arguments that resolve relatively peacefully

*distant laughter continues*

SOMEONE HELP! I CAN'T BREATHE! I CAN'T STOP LAUGHING!!ITSTOOFUNNYWTFHAHAHAAA!!

*gasp!* THE FACES!! HAHAHAHAAA.

Comedy gold

Aha! Thanks.

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