Kansattica said: I like that the rabbit's dress has RABIT on it in case she forgets what she is. It's why all my shirts say HUMAN.
It's what TVTropes calls Gratuitous English. It looks silly to us (or like Vegeta's famous "Badman" shirt), but it has an air of exotic coolness by sheer virtue of being a different language over there, just as if a comic artist drew an anthro rabbit with "兎” written on it.
I just finished on a stream early, i'm sorry for the lack of tag, i have to go work soon, so i wanted to upload it before going, also i don't get how add the picture on the poll i created (so i deleted it) can someone explain me ? By the way i m gonna translate it later, but if someone can do it for me i really appreciate it.
Date May 2, 2016UserwaverunRating SafeScore10(vote up)
I think an issue here is that large yellow spirally stuff has obliterated most of the available negative space to place the text in, you left yourself mostly with the flowerbed, which is less than ideal because it's a busier surface and too close in color to the text you chose. [and with it being a fairly spindly font, it's easier for it to get lost anyway.]
[That and the fact you had to explain what each of the text colors signifies is kind of a sign that the idea doesn't translate that well by itself? Maybe just the 'trigger' or the mood texts, but both at once seems a bit of a reach for clarity. I did think the message in green was a nice in character touch though, just wouldn't have picked up on it without reading the comments.]
waverun said: If it makes you feel any better. I tried to add some effects to it, but I couldn't duplicate font into a new layer with GIMP. AND, the green text is supposed to be a connected trigger.
- Right click on Text Layer -> "Alpha to selection" - Layer -> New Layer - Select -> Grow (2px) - Edit -> Fill with FG Color (FG Color should probably be black in this case)
Now you need to drag the newly created layer under the text layer which will result in a black outline around the text and instantly increase the readability of the text. It should look something like this: hypnohub.net/post/show/27962
Pinkanator said: I mean, I think it's fucking genius, but I kinda worship you as the second coming of Hypno Christ, so maybe I'm not a reliable source. But I still love it.
And let me guess: Lyra's like your Virgin Mary?
Date May 2, 2016UserplsignoreRating QuestionableScore56(vote up)
anyway, chances are it's either Danny who's secretly had naughty thoughts about the MILF under his roof, or Dani who wants to see what a full-grown woman's body feels like
Hypno Hammer said: yeah. Dani possessing her... you know I was just in a debate with someone on Danny and Dani's relationship, about being father-daughter or brother-sister. they're sort of both. so what does that make Maddie? Dani's mom? grandma?
I would think closer to twins because Dani has Danny's DNA like how twins have similar DNA.
gothboyfang said: It's green eyes so it might be Dani.
yeah. Dani possessing her... you know I was just in a debate with someone on Danny and Dani's relationship, about being father-daughter or brother-sister. they're sort of both. so what does that make Maddie? Dani's mom? grandma?
You are really good with lighting effects. Both the glow and the lighting on her bodie look great, sadly the pendant really looks very copy paste - even the connection between the metal and the crystal ...
I know it is hard to find a really good pendant to use, but you can do better than this.
Date May 2, 2016UserRileyRating ExplicitScore247(vote up)
I like the use of shapes around the text boxes to identify characters, they actually helped me to figure out which order to read in so definitely an excellent touch!
Snootboop
2016-05-06 19:07:09>> #102589
god that tail is huge, it's like a but afro.
Buttfro.
Ogodei-Khan
2016-05-03 01:33:29>> #101991
I like that the rabbit's dress has RABIT on it in case she forgets what she is. It's why all my shirts say HUMAN.
It's what TVTropes calls Gratuitous English. It looks silly to us (or like Vegeta's famous "Badman" shirt), but it has an air of exotic coolness by sheer virtue of being a different language over there, just as if a comic artist drew an anthro rabbit with "兎” written on it.
Mister Vi
2016-05-02 23:00:33>> #101959
HypnoHammer
2016-05-02 19:59:29>> #101928
She looks like Bianca from pokemon! :v
When I saw the thumbnail, I thought it was Bianca
Cell
2016-05-02 15:14:48>> #101903
Yakai
2016-05-04 22:30:25>> #102257
Vanndril
2016-05-03 08:07:56>> #102029
I've been waiting for good stuff of this character. :3
Pazuzu
2016-05-02 09:44:45>> #101868
Yakai
2016-05-02 08:41:31>> #101862
By the way i m gonna translate it later, but if someone can do it for me i really appreciate it.
waverun
2016-05-18 10:25:20>> #104650
e621.net/post/show/895739
I'd like to see you comment here on THAT!
But keep the description in mind.
Pastel-Daemon
2016-05-03 21:19:49>> #102086
[That and the fact you had to explain what each of the text colors signifies is kind of a sign that the idea doesn't translate that well by itself? Maybe just the 'trigger' or the mood texts, but both at once seems a bit of a reach for clarity. I did think the message in green was a nice in character touch though, just wouldn't have picked up on it without reading the comments.]
HypnoMangaEditor
2016-05-03 05:48:46>> #102016
If it makes you feel any better. I tried to add some effects to it, but I couldn't duplicate font into a new layer with GIMP. AND, the green text is supposed to be a connected trigger.
- Right click on Text Layer -> "Alpha to selection"
- Layer -> New Layer
- Select -> Grow (2px)
- Edit -> Fill with FG Color (FG Color should probably be black in this case)
Now you need to drag the newly created layer under the text layer which will result in a black outline around the text and instantly increase the readability of the text. It should look something like this: hypnohub.net/post/show/27962
Pinkanator
2016-05-03 01:45:57>> #101995
And let me guess: Lyra's like your Virgin Mary?
Lyra is like, the God that made God. A Super God, if you will. Fuck I love her.
waverun
2016-05-03 01:27:25>> #101989
I mean, I think it's fucking genius, but I kinda worship you as the second coming of Hypno Christ, so maybe I'm not a reliable source. But I still love it.
And let me guess: Lyra's like your Virgin Mary?
HypnoHammer
2016-05-04 01:16:09>> #102135
HypnoHammer
2016-05-04 01:10:32>> #102133
I would think closer to twins because Dani has Danny's DNA like how twins have similar DNA.
that's what I said, but he said he was going by logic. like how Jango Fett is like the father of the clone army. he even had a clone he called a son.
gothboyfang
2016-05-03 21:29:01>> #102087
yeah. Dani possessing her... you know I was just in a debate with someone on Danny and Dani's relationship, about being father-daughter or brother-sister. they're sort of both. so what does that make Maddie? Dani's mom? grandma?
I would think closer to twins because Dani has Danny's DNA like how twins have similar DNA.
HypnoHammer
2016-05-03 08:31:12>> #102034
It's green eyes so it might be Dani.
yeah. Dani possessing her... you know I was just in a debate with someone on Danny and Dani's relationship, about being father-daughter or brother-sister. they're sort of both. so what does that make Maddie? Dani's mom? grandma?
gothboyfang
2016-05-03 08:28:25>> #102032
Could be Desiree or Ember for all we know. Who said it had to be one of the male ghosts possessing her?
It's green eyes so it might be Dani.
bullet
2016-05-02 10:20:55>> #101873
I like the work otherwise, but this made me laugh
dkx45
2016-05-02 06:26:13>> #101842
it is on the collective.
Well that makes sense now, I just didn't care enough to try and track it down
Rotem_Dishon
2016-05-02 06:19:35>> #101840
This looks like something that would be on the collective
it is on the collective.
dkx45
2016-05-02 06:03:59>> #101836
Mezzberry
2016-05-02 05:47:05>> #101833
Text ain't half bad either ^^
DouDile
2016-05-02 23:00:22>> #101958
Wow. Can't say I ever expected Kenny Omega appearing on this website... XD
Suprise baby! :v
BubblegumPrincess
2016-05-02 22:19:45>> #101955
DouDile
2016-05-02 07:42:16>> #101856
I liked this one very much, Dou... specially the short haired girl <3
Thank you so much. :v
Inactive001
2016-05-02 06:53:23>> #101851
DouDile
2016-05-02 05:16:41>> #101823
m.youtube.com/watch?v=OagqHN21Rgo
JamesF
2016-05-02 17:54:40>> #101915
Evilunicorn
2016-05-02 14:20:35>> #101899
JimLogan54
2016-05-02 05:21:38>> #101829
Thank you!
Of course.
ubertuba
2016-05-02 05:19:24>> #101825
I like it. Good job
Thank you!
JimLogan54
2016-05-02 05:18:02>> #101824
voyer
2016-05-02 07:51:53>> #101858
HypnoMangaEditor
2016-05-02 05:02:33>> #101820
I know it is hard to find a really good pendant to use, but you can do better than this.
hypnobotmaster
2020-12-29 03:18:19>> #400246
AshleighZenith
2016-05-03 22:50:49>> #102101
not too different to ours <3
*giggle*
Not different at all :P
Kayvaan
2016-05-03 22:26:30>> #102095
feslatichy
2016-05-02 22:03:05>> #101949
112947
2016-05-02 12:29:16>> #101888
BML-20XX
2016-05-09 21:37:06>> #103057
DouDile
2016-05-02 07:49:23>> #101857
Lord-Enonymous
2016-05-02 04:07:42>> #101814
Morgoth
2016-05-02 01:04:31>> #101793
P.S. I really like your series, keep up the good work ^^