My lips are sealed. If Mister Mister Man wants it to be a surprise, a surprise it shall be.

Can you link me to said gallery?

Ah-mmm-YES! I didn't get curious about the artist and went through his whole gallery, because I really like the style, therefore having a good idea about what images are going to be used, using the information given.

Will think about taking it into consideration

just a suggestion, maybe you should have a '~' character at the end of Adagio's siren song instead of a '!'?

Perfect body

Joyce has always been best girl what crack pipe were you smoking

Your Nebura is my Joyce; this is the shit right now.

I am inclined to agree.

And then there was brain injection

And suddenly Joyce rockets up to even contend with Sasha for best girl

I reread this page and all i seem to be able to think about is "Oh My God they look so cute!!!"
Joyce panel 1 is over 9000
and Inma pannel 5 is being brainjacked~
Holy Myuk sure is a blessing for the shadowy world of hypno art~!

Ok.... strange in fact she is not hypnotized...
Her eyes are like that.

1) Midori-chans original character.
2) Possibly
3) It's actually a quilt, though you can supersized bingo on it.

3) Is that some form of bingo being played in the background?

Two questions:
1) Who is she?
2) Will we be seeing more of her?

(sees the skull) Murray? Is that you?

With no context looking at this image I do not think "Hypnosis" I think "Generic Evil Henchman". Since the hypnosis doesn't come from the source material (if it's been Nighthowler pellets it'd have been different) the image, or image set, needs to get the hypnosis across on it's own merits. Last time this image was posted it, again, had no context. It was sent to QC and they scrapped it.

NOW it is a part of a set and the previous image very clearly establishes the hypnosis.

yep, because wearing hypnotic goggles and acting completely different than usual is not hypnotic enough.

Welcome to moderation on the internet.
Enjoy the ride.

No. It was deleted due to the fact the hypnosis, while maybe evident to those who follow this artist, was very, VERY unclear. On it's own this image just didn't meet the standards of the site as determined by Quality Control.

However now that it has been paired with another image that very clearly shows the hypnosis it meets this site's standards.

Yes, for incredibly stupid reasons.

First of all, good job on trying to get better! :)

Just like RedCollarBlackCollar said, it would be easier to give opinions with a cleaner drawing. If you don't want the hair to cover the body and preserve the same pose, you can give it some movement, it can make a nice effect.

Now, I think her arm is a little too short, or maybe I'm not seeing it well. You can look for some guides about dynamism too.

Would probably be best to try and ink or use photoshop to try and make the lines much more pronounced. Also would highly recommend finding a scanner or use a good camera + lighting to make the pic less blurry.

Otherwise, my issue with the subject is how her hair covers most of her body and prevents us from seeing her outfit. Perhaps it was intentional, but I find it to be a bit of a shame.

You don't have to fix the drawing/subject itself, but I would ask that you make those lines more pronounced and eventually reupload it for a second attempt.

Sorry for bad quality!

I'm trying to step it up in my drawings!

I would be glad if you guys give me opinions about what i could have done better it would help! ^^

I do like how the snake tail curls around her nipples to preserve her modesty.

Yeah, what is this, consensual kaa? Who'dathunkit.

Not hypnotizing her 0/10

That’s hot. She’s a sexy little cactus

Wish I had this in my notebook *giggles*

Takes the chair*

Love the spirals in this one. They make everything better!

So tired...can't see straight.
Oh a chair perfect....*sits and penis hose up her butt.* uh wait this chai is....

Hi I'm Chris Hansen, please have a "seat"

What a lovely chair *giggles*