This pic is super hot to me and I normally don't get turned on by most characters i'm not familiar with....it's just the situation is hot enough to overcome that.
Date Apr 23, 2016UserdmcmanRating QuestionableScore145(vote up)
Okay, since this is your fist upload, I am gonna be a little bit more lenient. :)
Things to consider: - Font, Fontsize, Punctuation: A Better Font would be Wild Words, Anime Ace or general easy to read fonts. You used color coding for the text, which is great. Many people overlook this but it makes it easier to read. Without it, I wouldn't even know who is talking in this case. - Position of Text manip: Wrong side. You want the text on the right side. Reason is that most of us read from left to right so we see the picture first, then look at the text. This is very important. - Text Background: You used black. This is not always bad, but you got a very good chance in this picture to make a gradiant of the blue/greenish background color. If the text is on the other side, you should still use a much brighter background for the text, because the wall of black simply is a little bit too dark and the contrast is really harsh on the eye and the general mood of the picture. - Eyes: Some say it could have been done better, I think it is decent for a first try. Then again, I am not into spiral eyes and do not know much about correctly implementing them. :)
Just try implementing these changes into your next manip and it will surely get a lot better. :)
WHEN THERE IS NO PUNCTUATION AND ALL CAPS IT GETS HARD *FLASH* TO TELL WHAT IS HAPPENING EVEN WITH THE BENEFIT OF MULTIPLE FONT COLORS *FLASH* AND GENERALLY IF THERE'S A LOT OF EMPTY SPACE IN THE TEXT BOX THEN MAKE THE WHOLE THING THINNER SO IT FITS BETTER ON MORE SCREENS *FLASH* THE SUBJECT OF THE IMAGE IS WAY OVER ON THE RIGHT SIDE SO IT DOESN'T MAKE SENSE FOR THE TEXT TO BE ON THE LEFT NOW MY EYES HAVE TO CROSS THIS NEGATIVE SPACE IN ORDER TO GO BETWEEN THE IMAGE AND TEXT
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Date Apr 23, 2016UsergreasyiRating SafeScore19(vote up)
Bokasa
2016-04-23 12:07:57>> #100424
Sabwhy
2016-04-23 09:52:53>> #100413
Johny
2016-05-03 04:25:58>> #102007
Johny
2016-05-03 04:25:46>> #102006
siliam
2016-04-24 05:36:41>> #100568
This pic is driving me nuts now *drools and masturbates*
well, we got pokemongirl's motor running.
Cowsinner
2016-04-23 19:47:57>> #100476
GJT0530
2016-04-23 17:37:34>> #100458
HypnoMangaEditor
2016-04-24 05:45:36>> #100569
Things to consider:
- Font, Fontsize, Punctuation: A Better Font would be Wild Words, Anime Ace or general easy to read fonts. You used color coding for the text, which is great. Many people overlook this but it makes it easier to read. Without it, I wouldn't even know who is talking in this case.
- Position of Text manip: Wrong side. You want the text on the right side. Reason is that most of us read from left to right so we see the picture first, then look at the text. This is very important.
- Text Background: You used black. This is not always bad, but you got a very good chance in this picture to make a gradiant of the blue/greenish background color. If the text is on the other side, you should still use a much brighter background for the text, because the wall of black simply is a little bit too dark and the contrast is really harsh on the eye and the general mood of the picture.
- Eyes: Some say it could have been done better, I think it is decent for a first try. Then again, I am not into spiral eyes and do not know much about correctly implementing them. :)
Just try implementing these changes into your next manip and it will surely get a lot better. :)
greasyi
2016-04-23 22:31:21>> #100505
CAPS IT GETS HARD
*FLASH*
TO TELL WHAT IS HAPPENING EVEN
WITH THE BENEFIT OF MULTIPLE FONT COLORS
*FLASH*
AND GENERALLY IF THERE'S A LOT OF EMPTY
SPACE IN THE TEXT BOX THEN
MAKE THE WHOLE THING THINNER SO IT FITS
BETTER ON MORE SCREENS
*FLASH*
THE SUBJECT OF THE IMAGE IS WAY OVER
ON THE RIGHT SIDE SO IT DOESN'T MAKE
SENSE FOR THE TEXT TO BE ON THE LEFT
NOW MY EYES HAVE TO CROSS THIS NEGATIVE
SPACE IN ORDER TO GO BETWEEN
THE IMAGE AND TEXT
ALSO WHAT SPOON AND MEATBALLS SAID
Pinkanator
2016-04-23 21:55:58>> #100497
By the by, where'd he purchase that Magic Gun?
I'd tell you, but that'd mean I'd have to buy the DVD.
zach007
2016-04-23 21:24:54>> #100486
Thanks Linkara.
By the by, where'd he purchase that Magic Gun?
Pinkanator
2016-04-23 17:09:19>> #100455
With the all caps and intense font, I can't help but imagine theyre yelling
Thanks Linkara.
Personmang
2016-08-20 10:35:16>> #120510
Looks like she went from a huge 8itch to his 8itch.
I see someone else just discovered mind wipes work
RedEyes
2016-08-20 09:16:57>> #120498
SomeCallMeSalty
2016-04-26 04:37:43>> #100915
HELL YES.
HELL FUCKING YES
butterball
2016-04-25 07:17:57>> #100804
YES.
HELL YES.
siliam
2016-04-24 05:46:59>> #100571
Lloyd01251
2020-05-31 11:11:53>> #372028
you can milk anything with nipples.
and slowly even get some milk out of it at some point~
Falcon2_0
2018-03-07 06:06:52>> #238316
OBJECTION! Kaitty is male, and therefore cannot be milked!
"male"
She's getting there...
Imasuky
2018-03-07 06:05:02>> #238314
OBJECTION! Kaitty is male, and therefore cannot be milked!
you can milk anything with nipples.
Phonics-Left
2018-03-07 05:53:01>> #238312
Dark_blue_ball
2016-07-08 04:49:16>> #113279
LinkStevens
2019-01-20 23:39:37>> #300124
Blastman
2016-06-16 04:32:37>> #109758
I approve of this. *thumbs up* We need more Boo possessions.
Finally, someone else who thinks so!
bubage
2016-04-25 17:48:47>> #100855
I approve of this. *thumbs up* We need more Boo possessions.
I agree more boos the merrier. :)
Pinkanator
2016-04-23 17:08:35>> #100454
Pastel-Daemon
2016-04-23 16:01:04>> #100450
Late_Night_Delight
2016-04-24 08:04:59>> #100589
plsignore
2016-04-23 07:29:43>> #100393
rocketracer294
2016-04-29 10:07:37>> #101379
filflat
2016-04-24 01:39:41>> #100532
Rest in peace :C
awesomemanftw
2016-04-23 07:24:22>> #100391
indenial394
2021-01-09 15:31:32>> #401698
After that pic, I want it to be me.
Saaaaame, we can both be good pets!
maskedllama
2016-04-23 07:29:18>> #100392
Oh, is it them?
After that pic, I want it to be me.
Kansattica
2016-04-23 07:12:16>> #100388