So does anyone else get the feeling that whatever she said to the bunny will be relevant later? Seemed more in-depth than a simple "sleep and forget" command.
Date Apr 16, 2016UserdkraiderRating ExplicitScore44(vote up)
If you're taking suggestions, how about Izayoi from BlazBlue: static2.wikia.nocookie.ne...zblue/images/7/7a/Izayoi_(Chronophantasma,_Character_Select_Artwork).png coiled by some tentacles and hypnotized by an eye in a bikini?
Sure thing man, but the eye, is it embedded in the bikini or did you mean shes wearing the bikini and the eye is a part of the tentacles? Also do you want kaa thick tentacles or rope ones like in this image?
dkraider said: uh, here is my next drawing. Uh, didn't mean to have that arm up there completely showing it was meant to be partially off screen... um anyway yea. second post. yippee. feel free to criticize or comment. not like i could stop you. I would like to thank everyone though that left a positive comment on my last pic so uh thanks. Also if anyone would like me to draw a specific character to help keep me going just comment who and how that wauly i dont stop drawing. btw this is an OC.
This looks really good :D
If you're taking suggestions, how about Izayoi from BlazBlue: static2.wikia.nocookie.ne...zblue/images/7/7a/Izayoi_(Chronophantasma,_Character_Select_Artwork).png coiled by some tentacles and hypnotized by an eye in a bikini?
uh, here is my next drawing. Uh, didn't mean to have that arm up there completely showing it was meant to be partially off screen... um anyway yea. second post. yippee. feel free to criticize or comment. not like i could stop you. I would like to thank everyone though that left a positive comment on my last pic so uh thanks. Also if anyone would like me to draw a specific character to help keep me going just comment who and how that wauly i dont stop drawing. btw this is an OC.
Date Apr 16, 2016UserBlack--WaveRating QuestionableScore84(vote up)
EoD said: I just noticed how much your English has improved. The wording can still be a bit stiff and unnatural at times, but for the most part it flows very well. Good on ya!
I don't think the English in this post is a particularly good example of his improvement...
"I've just done what you order me to" is weird, should probably be "ordered me too".
"Masturbate all the time for lunch break" - Masturbate through the whole lunch break sounds better. The "All the time" doesn't really make sense, unless it was "all of the time" and even then it should be "During" lunch break(s).
"Made me to be" could just be "Made me be"
I would probably rewrite the first part along the lines of
"Hi Master! I've just finished (done works as well) what you ordered me to do. I masturbated all throughout lunch break and did so without cumming at all. I was on the edge at least 7 times because of how sensitive you made me be"
If the order given was intended to be a permanent "every-day" order the wording would have to be a little different.
Honest;y, I've always thought Vahn's text was pretty well-written and very well thought out, so I don't really see this as an improvement over any recent work.
I just noticed how much your English has improved. The wording can still be a bit stiff and unnatural at times, but for the most part it flows very well. Good on ya!
Mister Vi said: I was gonna say "why not both" and then the idea popped in my head of having like a reverse harem of mistresses who take turns owning you.. like a timeshare hypno-subject. Like weekends are Lyra's time Monday-Tuesday is rarity. ect. ect.
That's my dream. I can't believe someone put this into words.
Hypno Hammer said: yeah. some might think that girl under Sailor Mars is Akiza, but it's actually Kallen. seriously, can't tell you how many pics I've seen where they swap clothes. if not for the subtle differences, you might not realize it
Codknight said: Ecchime, if someone removes a character you add, you should probably question why?, For example, the character you think is Naru Narusegawa and Doudile thought was Isuzu Sento, is a girl from high school of the dead called Rei Miyamoto.
yeah. some might think that girl under Sailor Mars is Akiza, but it's actually Kallen. seriously, can't tell you how many pics I've seen where they swap clothes. if not for the subtle differences, you might not realize it
Ecchime, if someone removes a character you add, you should probably question why?, For example, the character you think is Naru Narusegawa and Doudile thought was Isuzu Sento, is a girl from high school of the dead called Rei Miyamoto. Check the source if you think it's tagged wrong without a character request.
Date Apr 15, 2016UservolcoRating QuestionableScore144(vote up)
PenKen said: yeah it's why i put in tag me, I'm super sorry. I completely meant to try and remember and go through my messages but i'm still in the middle of a stream
*Knock Knock* Stream is over, do your duty and tag the 2 missing girls.
yeah it's why i put in tag me, I'm super sorry. I completely meant to try and remember and go through my messages but i'm still in the middle of a stream
sexfire
2016-08-20 23:56:27>> #120606
*raises his hand*
rocketracer294
2016-04-16 11:08:44>> #99319
Nazwa
2016-04-16 10:17:33>> #99313
*raises hand*
Halarith
2016-04-16 08:44:33>> #99302
Halarith
2016-04-16 08:43:15>> #99300
RunningAmok
2017-06-29 18:35:31>> #184975
A Greninja Attack
dkraider
2016-04-16 09:09:50>> #99306
This looks really good :D
If you're taking suggestions, how about Izayoi from BlazBlue: static2.wikia.nocookie.ne...zblue/images/7/7a/Izayoi_(Chronophantasma,_Character_Select_Artwork).png coiled by some tentacles and hypnotized by an eye in a bikini?
Sure thing man, but the eye, is it embedded in the bikini or did you mean shes wearing the bikini and the eye is a part of the tentacles? Also do you want kaa thick tentacles or rope ones like in this image?
eaglet
2016-04-16 08:44:15>> #99301
uh, here is my next drawing. Uh, didn't mean to have that arm up there completely showing it was meant to be partially off screen... um anyway yea. second post. yippee. feel free to criticize or comment. not like i could stop you. I would like to thank everyone though that left a positive comment on my last pic so uh thanks. Also if anyone would like me to draw a specific character to help keep me going just comment who and how that wauly i dont stop drawing. btw this is an OC.
This looks really good :D
If you're taking suggestions, how about Izayoi from BlazBlue: static2.wikia.nocookie.ne...zblue/images/7/7a/Izayoi_(Chronophantasma,_Character_Select_Artwork).png coiled by some tentacles and hypnotized by an eye in a bikini?
dkraider
2016-04-16 04:32:36>> #99272
Black--Wave
2016-07-06 22:34:11>> #113061
So are we to assume by the red dot on Dawns' machine that she has been "caught?"
I'm glad someone picked up on that. =)
Doublea
2016-05-10 09:48:45>> #103154
gothboyfang
2016-04-18 16:57:59>> #99705
You've got some good ideas.
Thanks :)
Kansattica
2016-04-16 22:55:47>> #99369
Could be a mindwipe then get a pokemon personality with a matching revealing costume before being sold as pets/playthings.
You've got some good ideas.
pokemongirl
2016-04-16 21:39:01>> #99365
Huh, never thought of that. I'm definitely gonna need to see an 'after' pic now.
EDIT oh jeez, the more I think about it I realize you've opened up a whole new can of fetish worms for me with this brain-swapping malarky ;-)
Yay more fetishes *giggles*
Could be a mindwipe then get a pokemon personality with a matching revealing costume before being sold as pets/playthings.
True enough but I really want I mind transfer with the pokemon trading machine from the anime now : )
Bibla499
2016-04-21 07:57:13>> #100078
Hey can you do a manip of Sally hypnotizing the viewer?
Sure thing.
sonicfire65
2016-04-18 07:15:18>> #99648
Robobacon
2016-04-17 02:51:38>> #99417
Give him the funny kiss.
sonicfire65
2016-04-16 18:49:59>> #99341
Rose-Knight
2016-04-16 05:46:24>> #99279
vahn_yourdoom
2016-04-18 20:29:05>> #99727
Oh god that sounds torturous. I love it.
it's a way to make the victim craving for the D when the time comes :shrug:
@ jimskog
thanks for the corrections XD
jimskog
2016-04-17 06:53:17>> #99450
However (constructive criticism here) I don't agree with EoD, I think the text here is much more awkwardly phrased than your previous works.
jimskog
2016-04-17 06:51:13>> #99449
I just noticed how much your English has improved. The wording can still be a bit stiff and unnatural at times, but for the most part it flows very well. Good on ya!
I don't think the English in this post is a particularly good example of his improvement...
"I've just done what you order me to" is weird, should probably be "ordered me too".
"Masturbate all the time for lunch break" - Masturbate through the whole lunch break sounds better. The "All the time" doesn't really make sense, unless it was "all of the time" and even then it should be "During" lunch break(s).
"Made me to be" could just be "Made me be"
I would probably rewrite the first part along the lines of
"Hi Master!
I've just finished (done works as well) what you ordered me to do.
I masturbated all throughout lunch break and
did so without cumming at all.
I was on the edge at least 7 times because
of how sensitive you made me be"
If the order given was intended to be a permanent "every-day" order the wording would have to be a little different.
Honest;y, I've always thought Vahn's text was pretty well-written and very well thought out, so I don't really see this as an improvement over any recent work.
EoD
2016-04-16 13:04:11>> #99330
CosmicNeko
2016-04-15 23:06:16>> #99230
Defcon7
2016-12-08 07:56:49>> #142556
I was gonna say "why not both" and then the idea popped in my head of having like a reverse harem of mistresses who take turns owning you.. like a timeshare hypno-subject. Like weekends are Lyra's time Monday-Tuesday is rarity. ect. ect.
That's my dream. I can't believe someone put this into words.
Brokander_Reborn
2016-12-08 03:01:49>> #142484
I know this comment is ridiculously late for this picture, but it bugged me and I had to mention it.
That's a wine glass, not a champagne glass... -.-
you're right I never noticed before! (just in case you thought otherwise I am not being sarcastic right now I really didn't notice before)
freefloater
2016-12-08 01:14:01>> #142475
That's a wine glass, not a champagne glass... -.-
Scrounge
2016-04-30 06:03:37>> #101489
asaola
2016-04-18 07:58:15>> #99662
DouDile
2016-04-16 06:03:55>> #99281
Bloodly
2016-04-15 22:05:39>> #99225
Honestly think worst possible outcome for a warlock I mean come on she could have turned into a succubus
Could be worse. Most solo Warlocks carry the Voidwalker.
If I remember right, the Fel Hunter and/or succubus get used mainly for PvP matters.
CorruptionPrincess
2016-04-15 21:35:56>> #99220
Bokasa
2016-04-15 20:35:46>> #99215
Bloodly
2016-04-15 18:31:35>> #99210
Legendary_Ranger
2021-11-18 14:48:46>> #446094
Anonarygame
2016-04-16 22:07:37>> #99366
yeah. some might think that girl under Sailor Mars is Akiza, but it's actually Kallen. seriously, can't tell you how many pics I've seen where they swap clothes. if not for the subtle differences, you might not realize it
Just be glad this one doesn't have Mako or Chie.
urahara64360
2016-04-16 14:48:40>> #99333
HypnoHammer
2016-04-16 04:15:23>> #99267
Ecchime, if someone removes a character you add, you should probably question why?, For example, the character you think is Naru Narusegawa and Doudile thought was Isuzu Sento, is a girl from high school of the dead called Rei Miyamoto.
yeah. some might think that girl under Sailor Mars is Akiza, but it's actually Kallen. seriously, can't tell you how many pics I've seen where they swap clothes. if not for the subtle differences, you might not realize it
Codknight
2016-04-16 04:13:26>> #99266
furious
2017-04-22 00:31:00>> #169984
pokemongirl
2016-04-16 03:25:45>> #99262
Inactive001
2016-04-15 17:30:32>> #99207
volco
2016-04-15 09:04:51>> #99178
HypnoMangaEditor
2016-04-25 00:29:51>> #100707
yeah it's why i put in tag me, I'm super sorry. I completely meant to try and remember and go through my messages but i'm still in the middle of a stream
*Knock Knock*
Stream is over, do your duty and tag the 2 missing girls.
RebirthOfPandemonium
2016-04-24 18:05:16>> #100660
Mindwipe
2016-04-19 10:33:31>> #99821
alternac
2016-04-19 07:42:00>> #99799
PenKen
2016-04-15 07:43:23>> #99170
4 girls and only 2 of them tagged.
yeah it's why i put in tag me, I'm super sorry. I completely meant to try and remember and go through my messages but i'm still in the middle of a stream