Takeshi busts in and kills him most likely via shotgun or blunt force trauma

And now that I'm actually awake I see that this is all pony and my story doesn't fit at all. Fug.

Imagine what it must feel like to live in that time. To be one of the remaining 17.9% I mean. Roughly 4 out of every 5 people you know have already become mindless drones. You might even be the last of your group, desperately trying to survive what must seem like the end of days. Are you running for your life, knowing they'll catch you? Are you trying to fight back even against the enormous odds? More likely than not any survivors at that point would be holed up in their bunkers or innawoods far from anyone else. So when they do come, no one will be witness to your conversion save the blank stares of your soon to be sisters. How hopeless it must feel.

I dig scenarios like that. I like to picture myself as one of those survivors. I'm sitting in a camouflaged shack out in the middle of nowhere with a salvaged radio set, just listening to the chatter. Every other day it seems another station falls to the drone onslaught and I have to relocate before they home in on my signal. Sometimes I even hear the attacks. The screaming, maybe some gunshots, but they all end the same way. New voices join the chorus and the message goes out over they airwaves. "You shall not stop your ascension. You will submit. You will comply." Then the signal is replaced by digital tones. I can't understand them, but know what they mean. They're looking for listeners like me. They're homing in and if I leave the radio on they'll be here. I'll become like them. They probably know who I am already. I bet they'll send one of my old friends to do it. They know I won't have it in me to shoot them. It's getting harder these days. It's always the same. Listen, run, hide, repeat. I'm so tired. Last night I intercepted a signal from a hideout in Reno. A couple. The guy sounded awful sick and the girl just kept repeating their location saying "We're ready. Just let me keep him." How long will it be before that's me? I could just leave the radio on. They might even take me in my sleep. Would it be so bad? I shake my head no. I'm not ready to throw in the towel. Who knows? I might find a way out of this nightmare for real one of these days. I can at least be the last man standing. I shut off the rado and grab my bag. It's a long road ahead.

Spoilered for long winded writefaggotry. And apologies for any errors. Mobile phones and sleep deprivation aren't good editors.

The perfection of the PRime Drone, D-721, will corrupt the world. World at 82.1% and rising steadily.

Yay hypno tentacle :P

Well, this was just something I did for fun. It's pretty amateur however, I hope to get better buuuut I guess I gotta start somewhere.

Also sorry about the tags??? I am pretty sure I got them all?

Oh, if this is a reoccuring character she should have a character tag. Whats her name?

Im still pondering how to continue the pic ideas in the future. The girl in particular has been shown on the site in a Naga-state, drawn by My Pet Tentacle Monster. However, I will be certainly looking to see how to continue it.

I agree, both these pictures are really hot. The girl is curvy and has depth and I love the hypnosis effect. She's showing mostly everything while still being clothed which isn't seen often.

Super great

Yay bestiality

Here's hoping we'll be seeing more from this artist, this is pretty nice stuff. owo

This should probly have a loli tag even though it seems almost borderline

From the looks of it from the Polyle's site it's refered to as "cum drunk." However that is just the title and I can't read one of the tags on it. Definitely good fodder for a story if this form is listed as unsuited.

In the new one it doesn't really happen.

Don't know much about the new thundercats but I think their eyes can do that glowing thing in the show as well.

Found this on r34 today. Glowing eyes gave off a hypnosis vibe but I would understand if it doesn't to others.

link to origonal i cant find it

pretty boys are a national treasure. like for real look back up to that cute little thing in the image and tell me you don't want it to call you "master"

notsureifwant

yes yes, more fuel for my pretty boy paraphilia.

^THIS <3

Well there's a "smoke" tag that isn't currently listed here, so that answers your first question (hypnotic smoke is indeed a thing xD). There's also a "smoker" tag but I think that's the L4D monster. Also your artist tag, since you drew this yourself.

Not sure if shota or not.

Great pic otherwise.

Yush~

also please add any tags i may have missed!

so i decided after a while to come back and upload something! i ended up making some oc's and i wanted to draw em out :]

p.s. is hypnotic smoke a thing? xD

Yes mistress

That's.... kind of a harsh thing to say. Newer artists seeing that will be much less likely to even post for the first time. I mean, if you shouldn't post until something is flawless, well, almost nobody should post anything.

That said, I don't see much wrong with this. There are ways it could be improved, but that's just based on my tastes. I don't think it's something that isn't ready to submit.

(づ￣ ³￣)づ

Just because it's flawed, doesn't mean it shouldn't be here. If anything it can receive criticism here and that would be the fastest way to fix those flaws.

I'm just going to tell you what we always tell people on the wiki I admin on; If you have to say that, you already know that there's flaws you should be working on improving/it's not ready to submit.

sexy

dudes account has bin deactivated on DA, so figured id put this up here before its gone forever

"M i e"

Or maybe she's faking it in game! DUH NUH!!!

its....so....OUT OF CHARACTER

Since everything I'd say it covered in earlier comments, I'll forego the manipping advice.

I'm going to let the QCC take a looksy at this and make the determination.

Not going against you, at least not solely, but I probably need to talk with our admin team to get that phrase banned from the comments. I know, I am guilty of using it myself in the past, but in all honesty, you can't apply the time it takes yourself to do something to someone else's manip. It's discouraging, unfair and can make the whole comment section toxic instead of helpful. Everyone that take the time to actually create something for the community should never hear that he put no effort into his/her work.

If anything, please use something like "you could improve at ...". The rest of your comment is pretty good, I'd just have prefered you left out the first sentence.


A tipp for everyone. There are grammar checkers available online. Copy/paste your text in there then go through it line by line. It helps minimizing typos. Otherwise, our forum has been used in the past for proofreading, so feel free to ask other users there.


You should have, by all means posted it here. Personally, I'd combine the feedback you get here and create a v2. The scores can be transfered to the updated version by making the new picture the parent post of this one, then deleting this picture. For your first post, you should mostly expect to get some people to ask for improvements till it can stay, but once you get the hang of it, this will not be an issue in the future. :)