Does anyone know a way to move comments and favorites to a reupload of this except with fixed verb tense in the event I stop playing Kid Icarus long enough to fix it?
abithig said: This is pretty good. It seems you need to work on your writing a bit though, particularly verb tense usage. Generally, you want to use the same verb tense all the way through to the end, with the only real exception being a shift in time. For instance, you really only need to use past tense verbs here, as the entire thing is being told as a recollection. Keep this in mind next time, and the writing should flow a lot smoother. ;)
Sorry. I kinda drew this at 11-12 last night and wanted to get it out as soon as possible without rushing and creating a disaster.
This is pretty good. It seems you need to work on your writing a bit though, particularly verb tense usage. Generally, you want to use the same verb tense all the way through to the end, with the only real exception being a shift in time. For instance, you really only need to use past tense verbs here, as the entire thing is being told as a recollection. Keep this in mind next time, and the writing should flow a lot smoother. ;)
When it shows what happens in-between, it's not "before and after." That tag would be reserved transformations that don't depict what the process—only pre- and post-transformation (thus BEFORE and AFTER.)
There are several other items mistagged as such as well.
grimest said: this guy's comics are allways such a bait and switch "naked happy mind controled girls!! hell yeah! this is so hot...wait... no... no scat no... no... stAWP STAAAP! AAAHHHH!!"
grimest said: this guy's comics are allways such a bait and switch "naked happy mind controled girls!! hell yeah! this is so hot...wait... no... no scat no... no... stAWP STAAAP! AAAHHHH!!"
plsignore
2016-03-26 05:27:37>> #95428
but they are animals
ur an animal
Kansattica
2016-03-26 00:40:28>> #95338
Should this really be tagged as human_pet?
I've asked about this before. "human_pet" also covers furries acting like animals.
Timo4545
2016-03-23 07:45:49>> #94574
XavierBro-13
2016-03-24 06:25:13>> #94719
XavierBro-13
2016-03-23 13:44:35>> #94598
This is pretty good. It seems you need to work on your writing a bit though, particularly verb tense usage. Generally, you want to use the same verb tense all the way through to the end, with the only real exception being a shift in time. For instance, you really only need to use past tense verbs here, as the entire thing is being told as a recollection. Keep this in mind next time, and the writing should flow a lot smoother. ;)
Sorry. I kinda drew this at 11-12 last night and wanted to get it out as soon as possible without rushing and creating a disaster.
abithig
2016-03-23 10:49:42>> #94593
dark_phoenix
2016-03-23 09:56:44>> #94590
Plus, we need more Suicune.
Yes.
XavierBro-13
2016-03-23 05:47:29>> #94546
ldobe
2016-03-23 18:36:43>> #94610
Oh Enchie.
grimest
2016-03-23 05:21:13>> #94542
HypelHub
2016-04-27 02:30:50>> #101027
There are several other items mistagged as such as well.
Inactive001
2016-03-23 06:41:39>> #94558
Mmmmm would love to get that phone call *giggles*
It can be arranged ; )
pokemongirl
2016-03-23 04:29:53>> #94525
beast5200
2016-03-25 04:17:50>> #95033
She's not under hypnosis. Luffy just did something so stupid she snapped.
That seems just about right.
grimest
2016-03-24 04:56:03>> #94707
exhentai.org/g/708204/adaa321f92/
(as I said...warning, scat ahead)
anon9
2016-03-23 16:02:30>> #94602
this guy's comics are allways such a bait and switch
"naked happy mind controled girls!! hell yeah! this is so hot...wait... no... no scat no... no... stAWP STAAAP! AAAHHHH!!"
Thanks for the warning.
Dankmemer
2016-03-23 09:37:40>> #94589
this guy's comics are allways such a bait and switch
"naked happy mind controled girls!! hell yeah! this is so hot...wait... no... no scat no... no... stAWP STAAAP! AAAHHHH!!"
Umm.. You okay..?
psychowarrior
2016-03-23 07:51:37>> #94576
HungryBeetle
2016-07-18 00:07:12>> #114856
TheGoodShank
2016-03-23 03:30:55>> #94509
Nazwa
2016-03-23 08:17:16>> #94579
...why DID she kidnap them anyway?
Myuk
2016-03-23 03:49:47>> #94515
hypnohub.net/post/show/34...dialogue-drool-empty_eyes
Dang, Sasha has changed as time went on lol
Wow, that's actually pretty cringey...
Halarith
2016-03-23 03:36:00>> #94513
Shinitra
2016-03-23 03:27:18>> #94507
Myuk
2016-03-23 03:26:39>> #94506
ClueElf
2016-03-25 17:58:49>> #95254
I wonder what they are saying.
Well it's translated now.
HypnOlster
2016-03-24 01:03:38>> #94662
Faraday
2016-03-23 08:11:14>> #94577
Imasuky
2016-03-23 03:34:39>> #94512
anon9
2016-03-23 03:23:24>> #94503
Not complaining.
HypnoHammer
2016-03-23 03:10:23>> #94492
Mister Vi
2016-03-23 03:32:48>> #94511
This Nuri fellow has a different hair color in each picture. Must be furry magic.
maybe it's like a mood ring and changes with the temperature.
Kansattica
2016-03-23 02:12:00>> #94484