Love it, but the progression feels off. I know from the other one she's supposed to be asleep at the end, but the frame chosen looks a bit more like resistance. I'd flip the last two frames, especially in the textless version.
A small piece from one of the more memorable anime series that I've watched (Yukino from oregairu).
My first caption, so I would appreciate critique. The whole red line thing was a kind of last minute idea, I feel like it's sort of cheesy and could have executed it better.
Help with tags would be appreciated, I'm not too up to speed on how the booru system works.
Also I was wondering, since this is the first SNAFU post, what the title tag should be, considering the variety of names this show has.
Date Apr 13, 2016UservoyerRating ExplicitScore38(vote up)
auralords
2016-04-14 05:10:11>> #99014
Does his dick have an underbelly? >.>
Ribbed for her pleasure.
Spirals
2016-04-14 04:06:28>> #99007
PresidentAuroch
2016-05-07 06:44:29>> #102659
hyreader
2016-04-17 21:26:49>> #99544
dark_phoenix
2016-04-14 05:47:07>> #99020
You are supposed to tag yourself as the manipper when you manip
ftfy
Baka21
2016-04-14 02:39:54>> #98998
saraqael
2016-04-14 02:31:30>> #98997
Ogodei-Khan
2016-04-14 04:58:02>> #99011
keeperofthekingdom
2016-04-14 02:08:09>> #98996
AWMBH
2016-04-14 01:58:59>> #98994
B-
hyreader
2016-04-14 00:58:21>> #98988
hypnofan100
2016-12-01 23:55:50>> #141282
Gumillia
2016-04-16 10:22:17>> #99315
It's the main character's nick/name.
It's his real first name.
ghost13
2016-04-15 02:27:15>> #99111
Id just like to know what "Hachiman" is supposed to mean.
It's the main character's nick/name.
builder396
2016-04-15 01:42:39>> #99107
Drool
2016-04-13 22:54:28>> #98978
My first caption, so I would appreciate critique.
The whole red line thing was a kind of last minute idea, I feel like it's sort of cheesy and could have executed it better.
Help with tags would be appreciated, I'm not too up to speed on how the booru system works.
Also I was wondering, since this is the first SNAFU post, what the title tag should be, considering the variety of names this show has.
ClueElf
2016-04-15 04:56:04>> #99150
Bobbette
2016-04-13 22:48:57>> #98977
voyer
2016-04-13 22:46:02>> #98976
helljumper
2016-04-14 22:29:12>> #99087
foffyoul5
2016-04-14 05:28:44>> #99018
Bloodly
2016-04-13 20:54:17>> #98972
hypnotoad
2016-04-13 20:43:33>> #98971
Mesmer
2016-04-13 20:38:33>> #98969
www.hentai-foundry.com/st...11230/Teen-Titans-Incubus
UserFriendly
2017-02-10 05:46:57>> #155381
pokemongirl
2016-04-14 08:17:21>> #99051
gguy123
2016-04-14 00:39:11>> #98986
Note: it's a bad idea to put accented letters in tags.
You know what? This thought DID occur to me... right after i hit the third 3.
Mindwipe
2016-04-14 00:13:53>> #98983
siliam
2016-04-13 20:43:31>> #98970
Kaito_Kid
2016-04-15 03:52:49>> #99125
HypnoHammer
2016-04-13 18:29:01>> #98952