Pic I got from Pen! Lily getting a little too deep in researching just how that whole hypnosis thing works. She could have just asked Kaa'lin but hey...nothing ventured nothing gained!
Date Aug 30, 2024UserBrushie_ArtRating SafeScore123(vote up)
@Thalaryth lol yeah thats kind of what I was asking. Like I was wondering how on paper Trai would be considered. Is he a hive mind type thing, or is it more of a conjoined twin type deal. It more so me wondering how he is in the technical sense rather then his own personal preferences. Thanks for answering though.
@Maininthemask the pronouns are a little unintuitive, but the way I've been writing it is to use 'they' for the collective of all three heads, but each of them is a he. So the use of 'they' just means plural, it's not to do with gender.
@Thalaryrth I know I have said this before but I personally love Clavi as you have made her. Even if she is op, her power just shows that she really is a responsible person. Im sure many others wouldnt be able to help themselves in abusing that kind of power even if it was a little, or harmless. Even if she is a goodie two shoes I think thats fine as their are plenty of characters on the sight that are more then fine with being morality questionable. Of course I am biased as consensual/helpful hypnotism/hypnotists are my favorite. :)
@suvasam I can see why it wouldn't be to everyone's tastes, but you hit the nail on the head for what's supposed to be the appeal with Clavi. She's meant to come across as effortlessly above mortals like the reader in a way that's both comforting and disempowering at the same time. I try to make sure she has personality flaws to make up for being overpowered, to keep her from being a Mary Sue.
It's all a way for me to explore the inconvenient feelings I as a hypnofetishist grapple with around doctors, wielders of sedatives and anesthesia and various make-you-docile drugs, who are also figures of trust and authority that you're expected to feel safe with. The character of Clavi is a way for me to kind of pick that apart and use what I find as inspiration.
This is just a personal gripe, and is in no way intended as a s slight on your work Thalarynth, as all of it is well done and well written. I think I just don't like the flawless all powerful hypnotist vibe. I'm not even sure i can put my finger on why.
Added these new ones to the pool, sorry if you wanted to create a chapter 2 pool or something.
I love how she can hear his thoughts and is correcting the wrong name even there.
Naw, it's fine. I had a feeling they'd get added to the pool, eventually.
Also... yeah, I didn't realize that the artist accidentally wrote a thought bubble instead of a voice bubble until MUCH later. So that's just an illustration error. Ranko isn't supposed to hear Ryoga's thoughts. Apologies to anyone who might get that idea. I done goofed. ^^;
Page five of chapter two. We're now past the halfway point of this chapter with just this and three more pages to go. Any resistance Ryoga might have shown in the last page is immediately washed away, his mind being too deep under the hypnotism and his body to stimulated by Ranko's pleasurable skill and dominance.
Date Aug 29, 2024Userwokeat4amRating QuestionableScore96(vote up)
mariosonicfan
2024-08-30 19:47:06>> #554556
CuteChaosSlut
2024-08-30 18:55:17>> #554551
"Alright, I'll take two pics just in case one gets messed up. Hopefully nothing messes with my pho-"
pokemongirl
2024-08-30 06:20:42>> #554516
But ya amazing work on this Brushie one of your best yet <3
Hideki_Inoue
2024-08-30 02:30:34>> #554495
Brushie_Art
2024-08-30 01:54:11>> #554494
But then I remember that Jess probably does not remember any of these texts.
So shenanigans continue I suppose :3
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2024-08-28 18:11:32>> #554365
Maninthemask
2024-08-30 17:43:00>> #554544
Thalarynth
2024-08-29 20:45:18>> #554476
It's all a way for me to explore the inconvenient feelings I as a hypnofetishist grapple with around doctors, wielders of sedatives and anesthesia and various make-you-docile drugs, who are also figures of trust and authority that you're expected to feel safe with. The character of Clavi is a way for me to kind of pick that apart and use what I find as inspiration.
suvasam
2024-08-29 18:24:29>> #554460
slight on your work Thalarynth, as all of it is well done and well written. I think I just don't like the flawless all powerful hypnotist vibe. I'm not even sure i can put my finger on why.
VanillaHypnotist
2024-08-30 16:49:36>> #554539
I love how she can hear his thoughts and is correcting the wrong name even there.
Naw, it's fine. I had a feeling they'd get added to the pool, eventually.
Also... yeah, I didn't realize that the artist accidentally wrote a thought bubble instead of a voice bubble until MUCH later. So that's just an illustration error. Ranko isn't supposed to hear Ryoga's thoughts. Apologies to anyone who might get that idea. I done goofed. ^^;
anon859
2024-08-30 10:13:50>> #554530
I love how she can hear his thoughts and is correcting the wrong name even there.
pokemongirl
2024-08-28 03:31:26>> #554335
VanillaHypnotist
2024-08-28 02:37:07>> #554323
DemiDownhill
2024-08-30 13:42:39>> #554535
Trixter
2024-08-29 17:42:17>> #554455
pokemongirl
2024-08-29 03:50:25>> #554415
Makes me want to dance too <3 <3 <3
Patata
2024-07-23 20:05:55>> #550954
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2024-07-20 00:07:20>> #550544
Sleepyhead97
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