I think the problem with Controlling Mother could've been fixed if the mom had acted less like a horny teenage girl and more like a... well, mom. The big problem, at least as I see it, isn't just that there's no visual signs of control on the mom, it's that she literally doesn't change at all. She seems exactly the same after the control as before it. And it doesn't help that I immediately thought she would have sex with her son upon seeing the first page, and that was without taking the mind control helmet into account.
God I love Jaden's artwork, the way he draws the female form is pretty dang attractive (it's the angles he draws and the coloring/shading that I most admire) .
That all said, between this and Controlling Mother he doesn't seem to show visual representation of control in his sub characters. If he showed blush, slack expressions, dipped eyebrows or empty/blank eyes then I'd probably be forced to commission him myself to see Belldandy in his artstyle.
Speaking of which. He's working on a potentially hypno-themed comic with Urd in it. I can't wait to see that pay off.
Date Aug 22, 2024UsershepaardRating SafeScore76(vote up)
I do really love suppas's writing but it can get a little samey, this one on the other hand was really good,especially the fractionation section mmff, you've used the natural following of the head to answer questions before, but that's one I rarely get tired of and usually iirc it's more in a dubcon context, where this one is in a convincing you of an affect.
I did notice one typo near the end (hardly an actual issue) where 'once' should probably be 'one' in the sentence: "OPENING YOUR COLOUR-DRENCHED EYES ONCE MORE TIME BEFORE..."
This is the first one by you to go into my favorites it's really good (I think if I went through the backlog there's probably a couple others that would get added I just didn't favorite anything when back then when I was going through your posts)
Time to see a error in my comment after I post it and get annoyed there's no edit button xp
Jufe 168... and from a quick skim its basically just the average fat man comes in, hypnotizes pretty girl at the start, then rapes her for about 2 hours straight. Guy even hypnotizes her actual boyfriend to assist him.
Oh...that explains the other video, who knew there would be Wifi in the shadow realm, well at least we know Yubel will have fun in moderation, let's see who will be the next victim, Akiza, Alexis, Mai, the possibilities are strangely endless.
Date Aug 22, 2024UserMisterMan4Rating ExplicitScore201(vote up)
Usually I am against manips that involve "opening the eyes" when the original has them closed but I felt this one was worth the effort. Always need more harem lucy and bunny erza
Date Aug 22, 2024UsermagicwritingsRating ExplicitScore20(vote up)
anon859
2024-08-22 20:38:35>> #553824
Mindwipe
2013-08-16 22:35:11>> #26
bellchan
2013-08-16 22:25:37>> #25
That all said, between this and Controlling Mother he doesn't seem to show visual representation of control in his sub characters. If he showed blush, slack expressions, dipped eyebrows or empty/blank eyes then I'd probably be forced to commission him myself to see Belldandy in his artstyle.
Speaking of which. He's working on a potentially hypno-themed comic with Urd in it. I can't wait to see that pay off.
shepaard
2024-08-22 20:37:15>> #553823
anon859
2024-08-22 19:46:06>> #553813
lickitup
2024-08-22 19:33:10>> #553807
anon859
2024-08-22 20:23:07>> #553821
I did notice one typo near the end (hardly an actual issue) where 'once' should probably be 'one' in the sentence: "OPENING YOUR COLOUR-DRENCHED EYES ONCE MORE TIME BEFORE..."
This is the first one by you to go into my favorites it's really good (I think if I went through the backlog there's probably a couple others that would get added I just didn't favorite anything when back then when I was going through your posts)
Time to see a error in my comment after I post it and get annoyed there's no edit button xp
calor
2024-08-07 04:45:44>> #552387
eveningdawn
2024-08-22 20:14:37>> #553820
Unless someone does it before me of course.
pokemongirl
2024-08-22 19:51:10>> #553817
Latios
2024-08-22 19:58:06>> #553819
giselle1029
2024-08-06 05:53:55>> #552305
yin2712
2024-08-04 09:36:53>> #552125
Lsuss
2024-08-03 18:20:09>> #552074
pokemongirl
2024-08-03 18:17:56>> #552072
pokemongirl
2024-08-22 19:47:43>> #553816
anon859
2024-08-22 19:46:45>> #553814
Nothingtoworry13
2024-08-22 08:23:20>> #553789
pokemongirl
2024-08-22 19:45:51>> #553812
Wonderful MM <3
MisterMan4
2024-08-22 12:47:39>> #553801
pokemongirl
2024-08-22 19:45:02>> #553811
pokemongirl
2024-08-22 19:42:53>> #553810
WitchyCara
2024-08-22 18:04:28>> #553802