Transcript: Ah, you must be Emily. Welcome to the BSG spa house. Goddess let me know you'd be coming. Thoughts of resistance fluttering around that pretty redhead of yours, hm? But you reported them like a good slave, so obviously you don't really want to resist. That's why Goddess sent you here, so that I could help you work out all those pesky thoughts. My my, you look like your eyes are about to pop out. By now you must have seen your fellow slaves naked. Ah, but my form must look so enticing to your poor addled mind. Long, smooth legs, shaven cleft, taut belly, and of course, these wonderful breasts... Ahh, that's a good girl. Feeling those wonderful suggestions take hold of your mind as I bounce my breasts. Just follow with your eyes, up and down, up and down, that's a good girl. Just relax and let your thoughts evaporate away. Oh my, you look like you're having trouble staying upright. You poor thing. It's just so hard, so pointless to resist your programming, isn't it? I know, sweetheart, it's okay. Why don't you drop that towel and join me in the water? That's it, just step in, nice and slow. Feel that warm water as you slowly dip in one leg, then the other. Feel the warmth creeping up you as you sink slowly, ever so slowly. Eyes still following as I bounce, bounce, bounce... Lower now, down and down as the water rises to cover your already-dripping pussy. Such a good girl, wet and obedient. Lay down on my belly, there you go, sinking deeper and deeper into my control as Goddess's wonderful will tighten itself around your help- less little mind, squeezing out all that awful resistance like a sponge full of dirty water. And like a sponge, your mind is eager to soak up my words, my voice and my body. So just keep lowering yourself down. That's it, nestle your head between my wonderful breasts, all limp and relaxed as your obedient slave mind soaks up my words. Big soft wonderful breasts on either side of your head, pushing out disobedience so that you can soak up perfect compliance. Oh my, you're on the verge of overflowing, is that it? The lovely warm water of obedience is filling you up to the brim and you're about ready to burst. But you're a good girl, so you'll wait for my command. Feel that lovely obedient pleasure swelling up within you, threatening to spill out at any moment. But you're a good puppet and you dance on my strings, so just feel that pleasure soaking deeper and deeper into your perfect puppet brain. It's soaking through every part of you, and it's about to explode... And now I press my lovely breasts around your head and you just CUM. That's it, pretty girl, let it all out. Cumming for me, feeling so good and obedient, all that pleasure rushing out of you as hypnotic euphoria squeezes your helpless little mind. Cumming, cum- ming for me, cumming for Goddess... That's it, letting it all out now. All squeezed out, like a sponge. And like a sponge, you feel yourself taking on water again... Settle in, pretty puppet. We're not leaving until those thoughts of disobedience are washed clean from that mind of yours~
Transcript: Oh, hi there! You must be one of the new girls. Emily, right? How was your first session of brainwashing? Based on where your eyes keep going, it looks like the sexuality programming is taking hold pretty well, haha! So, welcome to the maid's quarters! This is where any slaves on maid duty get ready, store supplies, that kind of thing. Most everybody gets maid duty now and again, just to keep everybody on rotation. We'll get you fitted for your bunny suit in a little bit. Oh, her? That's Erica. She's new like you. She's up for maid duty right away, so she's getting her maid conditioning now. She's not quite done yet, though, as you can see. Mmmmmmuuuuuhhhh... serve... slave... obey... good girls... obey... Oooh, I get shivers every time I see another girl getting a dose of Goddess's brainwashing. Gets me wet every time. Looks like that's starting to happen for you, too! That's part of how Goddess reinforces Her control over us. She makes us associate brainwashing with pleasure so we never want to stop. It's a win for everybody! Goddess gets a harem of brainwashed slave girls, and we get to be the brainwashed slave girls! Mmmmm... Goddess..... obey..... lick..... wet..... horny..... slave..... Oooooh, Erica sounds like she's in for some very special maid duty, haha. Along with the cooking and cleaning, maids get to sexually service other slavegirls and assist with brainwashing. That's what all the massage oil back here is for! Wait 'till you meet Leah later, her fingers are magic. Mmmmmust..... obey..... serve..... slave..... gggguuuuuuuuuuhhhhh..... Oh shoot, she came. Damn, she's drooling too. She's taking the brainwashing really well. Be a dear and grab me some paper towels from that counter over there? Thanks, Em. Can I call you Em? You're right, I never did introduce myself. How rude! I'm Bianca, sophomore, mechanical engineering major. I've gotta switch Erica's training over to the next track, gimme a sec... there. The ears have earbuds connected, so we can always get more conditioning and commands while on maid duty. We can leave her to it while we get you fitted for your bunny suit. You've definitely got the figure for it. I'm glad Goddess programs envy out of us, or else I'd be really jealous of your tits, haha.
Not sure if it could be really tagged "Sexuality change" also... it's a little problematic that the image is too big so it need to move from left to right to read.
TheModrenMan said: Add a tag like "pool:BSG_sorority_house." That should create a pool automatically. Then you can add new images to the pool by adding the same tag.
Thank you very much, just did it.
Sir_Lurksalaot said: Someone adjust the rabbit ears, the signal's all fuzzy.
Goddamnit, I wish I'd come up with that. That's hilarious.
BurningPenguin6 said: I love the eye effect on her!
Thanks! I didn't want every manip I make to be a spiral eyes edit, and when I found the source image her face just screamed "drooling, TV static brain" to me and the effect happened to work well.
Transcript: Emily kept losing her train of thought. The welcome video from her RA had made her a bit dizzy at first, but she had chalked it up to tiredness from the drive to college. The video had started out as an ordinary greeting, showing her gorgeous RA welcoming her to the hall. Wait, gorgeous? That wasn't right. Emily was straight as an arrow... right? She was having trouble remembering. That shouldn't be something you can have trouble remembering.... Her eyes kept getting drawn back to her RA's cleavage. Full, bouncy tits straining against a tight university t-shirt, neckline invitingly low nipples poking against the fabric for want of a bra to hide them. Emily barely noticed her hands slipping under her shirt to remove her own bra. What was the RA saying? Something about following instructions? Being a good girl? It was hard to tell with the odd pulsing sounds, but Emily found herself compelled to keep watching. She could barely make out the RA's sexy voice over the pulsing sounds. "I just know you're going to love being a brainwashed slave girl for me. You may not have liked girls before, but once your training is complete, worshipping powerful women like me is all you'll be able to think about when you get wet. Speaking of which, you must be so hot right now, isn't that right?" Emily unwillingly let out an incoherent whine. She was starting to pant and sweat through her shirt. "Why don't you start edging for Goddess like a good girl? No using your hands, though. And no cumming until you're told." Emily was already frantically taking her skirt off and humping her pillow as Goddess kept talking and the video switched over to a spiral with flashing text on it. "I'll leave you to the brainwashing, slave. This first session won't get you even close to done, but you'll be brainwashed enough that you won't want to stop. Now be a good girl and get addicted." Emily was eager to obey.
Transcript: ONE THOUSAND YEARS. IT HAD BEEN ONE THOUSAND YEARS SINCE I LAST HAD VISITORS IN MY SANCTUM. FOR ONE THOUSAND YEARS, THIS PLACE HAD BEEN HIDDEN FROM THE REST OF THE WORLD AND I HAD BEEN STUCK HERE, UNABLE TO LEAVE. ONE THOUSAND YEARS OF SOLITUDE. IMAGINE MY SURPRISE AND EXCITEMENT WHEN I SUDDENLY FELT A PRESENCE. IT WAS SMALL, AND IT WAS BATHING IN MY HOLY WATERS! EVOKING MY POWER, I CONJURED A THICK MIST FROM THE WATERS, ENVELOPING THE YOUNG VISITOR IN IT. SHE STOOD WITH A START, HER EXPRESSION ONE OF SURPRISE. AS SHE INHALED MY MIST, HOWEVER, HER POSTURE RELAXED AND HER EXPRESSION WAS LOST. THE MIST HAD CLOUDED HER MIND. SHE WAS NO LONGER ABLE TO ACT WITHOUT MY WILL OR MY WORDS. I WALKED TOWARD HER, GAZING AT HER YOUNG YET NUBILE BODY. JUST WHO WAS THIS BEAUTIFUL CREATURE? I ASKED. I AM...AN ICE FAIRY... CIRNO... I...AM THE STRONGEST... I REACHED OUT WITH ONE HAND, CUPPING IT AROUND ONE OF HER BREASTS. THEY WERE SMALL AND FIRM, PERFECTLY TO MY LIKING. I REACHED MY OTHER HAND BEHIND HER, RUNNING IT DOWN THE ARCH OF HER BACK. SHE HAD SUCH A NICE SHAPE, AND HER SKIN WAS SO SOFT. I GAVE HER A DEEP KISS BEFORE TAKING A STEP BACK, VIEWING THE WHOLE OF MY VISITOR...NO, MY THRALL, ONCE MORE. HER FACE SEEMED FLUSH, HER NIPPLES HAD ERECTED, AND HER BREATHING QUICKENED. HER RESPONSES TO MY TOUCH, TOO, WERE PERFECT. YOU'RE LUCKY, MY DEAR. I'VE DECIDED TO KEEP YOU. FROM THIS DAY FORWARD, YOU ARE MINE. MY PUPPET. MY SERVANT. YOU WILL HAPPILY SERVE ME, ON YOUR HANDS AND KNEES IF SO WISH, FOR THE REST OF YOUR LIFE. YOU LIVE FOR ME, BREATH FOR ME. YOU THINK ONLY OF ME. THE MISTS DISPERSED, LIFE RETURNING TO THE FAE BEFORE ME. WHO ARE YOU? SHE GENTLY GRABBED MY ARM, PLACING MY HAND ON HER CHEST, AND SMILED SWEETLY. I AM YOUR ETERNAL SLAVE, MASTER.
daeva said: Out of curiosity, do you still have the full initial text and if so, would you share it ?
Unfortunately not. I actually start writing on the image from the getgo. Everything from the rough draft to the final copy (assuming I give so much effort, like I did on this one) is done on the image and in one sitting. It helps me visualize what I need to do to the text to make it fit, read, and look properly. The downside is that I never keep backups of anything but the final edit.
Vanndril said: When I was done writing, I actually had enough text for a couple of pages of a small-paged novel. <.< I was forced to cut out a good 75% (in volume of text) of what I really wanted to include, and whatever fluff I added in. There was just no way to fit it into the space I gave myself and I didn't want this to become one of those story manips.
Out of curiosity, do you still have the full initial text and if so, would you share it ?
Vanndril said: There is merit to writing the story for the image, rather than trying to find an image for the story.
That's at least 95% of my work. I write better than I manip (IMO), so when I see a pic, I'm always trying to build the story behind it, one that requires the fewest changes to the picture in order to realize. Doing it the other way around, writing the story first and seeking out a pic to fit it, seems like a great way for me to waste a lot of time. I'd never be satisfied with any pic, because it would never seem to fit the pic just right; the pic will never be "made for" the story. And if there's a possibility that you might end up with a story and no pic to go with it, you probably should have just written it as a short story to begin with, and let your words paint the picture. Now I'm starting to rant!
Congratulations on cutting out that much text, though. Editing for conciseness is among my greatest weaknesses.
MCaesar said: The pic and the writing really blend well together. Her expression is particularly perfect.
That was the intention, yes. :P I'm glad it worked out that way.
There is merit to writing the story for the image, rather than trying to find an image for the story. After I saw the expression, I just had to manip this. I knew it had to be done. I decided to add a caption after I finished the eyes (which were a bit of a pain, tbh - due to the sheer size of the image, the smallest mistakes show up at 100% zoom). I started writing with a general idea of what I wanted the the plot to be, and, looking back at the image constantly as I wrote, actively drew inspiration and ideas from it. The mist, the fact that Cirno's standing, the fact that she's currently mindless, the fact that she's bathing, her erect nipples, blush, and heavy breathing; all of this and then some were directly inspired from the image itself. Even her "nice shape" was inspired by her posture in the image.
When I was done writing, I actually had enough text for a couple of pages of a small-paged novel. <.< I was forced to cut out a good 75% (in volume of text) of what I really wanted to include, and whatever fluff I added in. There was just no way to fit it into the space I gave myself and I didn't want this to become one of those story manips.
pokemongirl
2024-06-17 19:48:45>> #547180
pokemongirl
2024-06-17 19:48:22>> #547179
pokemongirl
2024-06-17 19:46:23>> #547178
IDPet
2024-06-17 03:14:51>> #547108
Trying to practice a new layer of shadding and the Thorr's pose, any feedback let me know.
pokemongirl
2024-06-17 19:45:03>> #547177
DrWaffles
2024-06-17 00:38:36>> #547104
Still good stuff~
assman69er
2024-06-17 18:01:53>> #547174
pokemongirl
2023-02-07 00:58:48>> #499403
Anonymous
2023-02-06 07:32:41>> #499328
DirtyRedGorgon
2023-02-06 06:25:04>> #499321
Mindwipe
2023-02-06 05:55:08>> #499320
hypnosp1der
2024-06-17 17:11:13>> #547171
april
2024-06-17 16:23:07>> #547169
Ah, you must be Emily. Welcome to the BSG spa house. Goddess let me know you'd be coming. Thoughts of resistance fluttering around that pretty redhead of yours, hm? But you reported them like a good slave, so obviously you don't really want to resist. That's why Goddess sent you here, so that I could help you work out all those pesky thoughts.
My my, you look like your eyes are about to pop out. By now you must have seen your fellow slaves naked. Ah, but my form must look so enticing to your poor addled mind. Long, smooth legs, shaven cleft, taut belly, and of course, these wonderful breasts...
Ahh, that's a good girl. Feeling those wonderful suggestions take hold of your mind as I bounce my breasts. Just follow with your eyes, up and down, up and down, that's a good girl. Just relax and let your thoughts evaporate away.
Oh my, you look like you're having trouble staying upright. You poor thing. It's just so hard, so pointless to resist your programming, isn't it? I know, sweetheart, it's okay. Why don't you drop that towel and join me in the water?
That's it, just step in, nice and slow. Feel that warm water as you slowly dip in one leg, then the other. Feel the warmth creeping up you as you sink slowly, ever so slowly. Eyes still following as I bounce, bounce, bounce...
Lower now, down and down as the water rises to cover your already-dripping pussy. Such a good girl, wet and obedient. Lay down on my belly, there you go, sinking deeper and deeper into my control as Goddess's wonderful will tighten itself around your help- less little mind, squeezing out all that awful resistance like a sponge full of dirty water. And like a sponge, your mind is eager to soak up my words, my voice and my body. So just keep lowering yourself down. That's it, nestle your head between my wonderful breasts, all limp and relaxed as your obedient slave mind soaks up my words. Big soft wonderful breasts on either side of your head, pushing out disobedience so that you can soak up perfect compliance.
Oh my, you're on the verge of overflowing, is that it? The lovely warm water of obedience is filling you up to the brim and you're about ready to burst. But you're a good girl, so you'll wait for my command. Feel that lovely obedient pleasure swelling up within you, threatening to spill out at any moment. But you're a good puppet and you dance on my strings, so just feel that pleasure soaking deeper and deeper into your perfect puppet brain. It's soaking through every part of you, and it's about to explode...
And now I press my lovely breasts around your head and you just CUM. That's it, pretty girl, let it all out. Cumming for me, feeling so good and obedient, all that pleasure rushing out of you as hypnotic euphoria squeezes your helpless little mind. Cumming, cum- ming for me, cumming for Goddess...
That's it, letting it all out now. All squeezed out, like a sponge. And like a sponge, you feel yourself taking on water again...
Settle in, pretty puppet. We're not leaving until those thoughts of disobedience are washed clean from that mind of yours~
Anonymous
2023-02-01 13:44:54>> #498635
Hypno_0
2019-05-05 11:45:46>> #317215
jb
2019-05-03 02:38:47>> #316889
My name is Emily
That's a bruh moment
AngelGrace
2019-05-02 09:59:16>> #316833
My name is Emily
april
2024-06-17 16:19:15>> #547168
Oh, hi there! You must be one of the new girls. Emily, right? How was your first session of brainwashing? Based on where your eyes keep going, it looks like the sexuality programming is taking hold pretty well, haha!
So, welcome to the maid's quarters! This is where any slaves on maid duty get ready, store supplies, that kind of thing. Most everybody gets maid duty now and again, just to keep everybody on rotation. We'll get you fitted for your bunny suit in a little bit.
Oh, her? That's Erica. She's new like you. She's up for maid duty right away, so she's getting her maid conditioning now. She's not quite done yet, though, as you can see.
Mmmmmmuuuuuhhhh... serve... slave... obey... good girls... obey...
Oooh, I get shivers every time I see another girl getting a dose of Goddess's brainwashing. Gets me wet every time. Looks like that's starting to happen for you, too! That's part of how Goddess reinforces Her control over us. She makes us associate brainwashing with pleasure so we never want to stop. It's a win for everybody! Goddess gets a harem of brainwashed slave girls, and we get to be the brainwashed slave girls!
Mmmmm... Goddess..... obey..... lick..... wet..... horny..... slave.....
Oooooh, Erica sounds like she's in for some very special maid duty, haha. Along with the cooking and cleaning, maids get to sexually service other slavegirls and assist with brainwashing. That's what all the massage oil back here is for! Wait 'till you meet Leah later, her fingers are magic.
Mmmmmust..... obey..... serve..... slave..... gggguuuuuuuuuuhhhhh.....
Oh shoot, she came. Damn, she's drooling too. She's taking the brainwashing really well. Be a dear and grab me some paper towels from that counter over there? Thanks, Em. Can I call you Em?
You're right, I never did introduce myself. How rude! I'm Bianca, sophomore, mechanical engineering major. I've gotta switch Erica's training over to the next track, gimme a sec... there. The ears have earbuds connected, so we can always get more conditioning and commands while on maid duty. We can leave her to it while we get you fitted for your bunny suit. You've definitely got the figure for it. I'm glad Goddess programs envy out of us, or else I'd be really jealous of your tits, haha.
setokayba
2019-02-20 02:29:37>> #305131
steverogers5
2019-02-18 09:22:38>> #304821
PsychoFur
2019-02-18 05:54:52>> #304793
Add a tag like "pool:BSG_sorority_house." That should create a pool automatically. Then you can add new images to the pool by adding the same tag.
Thank you very much, just did it.
Someone adjust the rabbit ears, the signal's all fuzzy.
Goddamnit, I wish I'd come up with that. That's hilarious.
I love the eye effect on her!
Thanks! I didn't want every manip I make to be a spiral eyes edit, and when I found the source image her face just screamed "drooling, TV static brain" to me and the effect happened to work well.
n0t_that_one_guy
2019-02-18 02:31:57>> #304761
april
2024-06-17 16:16:09>> #547167
Emily kept losing her train of thought.
The welcome video from her RA had made her a bit dizzy at first, but she had chalked it up to tiredness from the drive to college. The video had started out as an ordinary greeting, showing her gorgeous RA welcoming her to the hall.
Wait, gorgeous? That wasn't right. Emily was straight as an arrow... right? She was having trouble remembering. That shouldn't be something you can have trouble remembering....
Her eyes kept getting drawn back to her RA's cleavage. Full, bouncy tits straining against a tight university t-shirt, neckline invitingly low nipples poking against the fabric for want of a bra to hide them. Emily barely noticed her hands slipping under her shirt to remove her own bra. What was the RA saying? Something about following instructions? Being a good girl? It was hard to tell with the odd pulsing sounds, but Emily found herself compelled to keep watching. She could barely make out the RA's sexy voice over the pulsing sounds.
"I just know you're going to love being a brainwashed slave girl for me. You may not have liked girls before, but once your training is complete, worshipping powerful women like me is all you'll be able to think about when you get wet. Speaking of which, you must be so hot right now, isn't that right?" Emily unwillingly let out an incoherent whine. She was starting to pant and sweat through her shirt. "Why don't you start edging for Goddess like a good girl? No using your hands, though. And no cumming until you're told." Emily was already frantically taking her skirt off and humping her pillow as Goddess kept talking and the video switched over to a spiral with flashing text on it.
"I'll leave you to the brainwashing, slave. This first session won't get you even close to done, but you'll be brainwashed enough that you won't want to stop. Now be a good girl and get addicted." Emily was eager to obey.
PsychoFur
2019-02-03 16:57:09>> #302548
Well, do you have any link at all for a source? Cause again, manip only makes it harder to search for the original?
Oh, sorry, misunderstood you. I do have the original image saved, but it looks like some kind soul found a source already.
sarhom
2019-02-03 10:00:12>> #302519
RedCollarBlackCollar
2019-02-03 04:50:01>> #302483
I tried that for a while, yeah. The most I got was it being reposted in Spanish twitter ecchi threads.
Well, do you have any link at all for a source? Cause again, manip only makes it harder to search for the original?
PsychoFur
2019-02-03 04:39:21>> #302479
Have you tried using any reverse image searches? It's harder to find a source when you've edited the image.
I tried that for a while, yeah. The most I got was it being reposted in Spanish twitter ecchi threads.
april
2024-06-17 16:07:13>> #547166
ONE THOUSAND YEARS. IT HAD BEEN ONE THOUSAND YEARS SINCE I LAST HAD VISITORS IN MY SANCTUM. FOR ONE THOUSAND YEARS, THIS PLACE HAD BEEN HIDDEN FROM THE REST OF THE WORLD AND I HAD BEEN STUCK HERE, UNABLE TO LEAVE. ONE THOUSAND YEARS OF SOLITUDE.
IMAGINE MY SURPRISE AND EXCITEMENT WHEN I SUDDENLY FELT A PRESENCE. IT WAS SMALL, AND IT WAS BATHING IN MY HOLY WATERS!
EVOKING MY POWER, I CONJURED A THICK MIST FROM THE WATERS, ENVELOPING THE YOUNG VISITOR IN IT. SHE STOOD WITH A START, HER EXPRESSION ONE OF SURPRISE. AS SHE INHALED MY MIST, HOWEVER, HER POSTURE RELAXED AND HER EXPRESSION WAS LOST. THE MIST HAD CLOUDED HER MIND. SHE WAS NO LONGER ABLE TO ACT WITHOUT MY WILL OR MY WORDS.
I WALKED TOWARD HER, GAZING AT HER YOUNG YET NUBILE BODY. JUST WHO WAS THIS BEAUTIFUL CREATURE? I ASKED.
I AM...AN ICE FAIRY... CIRNO... I...AM THE STRONGEST...
I REACHED OUT WITH ONE HAND, CUPPING IT AROUND ONE OF HER BREASTS. THEY WERE SMALL AND FIRM, PERFECTLY TO MY LIKING. I REACHED MY OTHER HAND BEHIND HER, RUNNING IT DOWN THE ARCH OF HER BACK. SHE HAD SUCH A NICE SHAPE, AND HER SKIN WAS SO SOFT.
I GAVE HER A DEEP KISS BEFORE TAKING A STEP BACK, VIEWING THE WHOLE OF MY VISITOR...NO, MY THRALL, ONCE MORE. HER FACE SEEMED FLUSH, HER NIPPLES HAD ERECTED, AND HER BREATHING QUICKENED. HER RESPONSES TO MY TOUCH, TOO, WERE PERFECT.
YOU'RE LUCKY, MY DEAR. I'VE DECIDED TO KEEP YOU. FROM THIS DAY FORWARD, YOU ARE MINE. MY PUPPET. MY SERVANT. YOU WILL HAPPILY SERVE ME, ON YOUR HANDS AND KNEES IF SO WISH, FOR THE REST OF YOUR LIFE. YOU LIVE FOR ME, BREATH FOR ME. YOU THINK ONLY OF ME.
THE MISTS DISPERSED, LIFE RETURNING TO THE FAE BEFORE ME.
WHO ARE YOU?
SHE GENTLY GRABBED MY ARM, PLACING MY HAND ON HER CHEST, AND SMILED SWEETLY.
I AM YOUR ETERNAL SLAVE, MASTER.
Vanndril
2014-08-24 19:26:39>> #26435
Out of curiosity, do you still have the full initial text and if so, would you share it ?
Unfortunately not. I actually start writing on the image from the getgo. Everything from the rough draft to the final copy (assuming I give so much effort, like I did on this one) is done on the image and in one sitting. It helps me visualize what I need to do to the text to make it fit, read, and look properly. The downside is that I never keep backups of anything but the final edit.
daeva
2014-08-23 18:25:43>> #26375
When I was done writing, I actually had enough text for a couple of pages of a small-paged novel. <.<
I was forced to cut out a good 75% (in volume of text) of what I really wanted to include, and whatever fluff I added in. There was just no way to fit it into the space I gave myself and I didn't want this to become one of those story manips.
Out of curiosity, do you still have the full initial text and if so, would you share it ?
MCaesar
2014-01-15 01:05:28>> #8006
There is merit to writing the story for the image, rather than trying to find an image for the story.
That's at least 95% of my work. I write better than I manip (IMO), so when I see a pic, I'm always trying to build the story behind it, one that requires the fewest changes to the picture in order to realize. Doing it the other way around, writing the story first and seeking out a pic to fit it, seems like a great way for me to waste a lot of time. I'd never be satisfied with any pic, because it would never seem to fit the pic just right; the pic will never be "made for" the story. And if there's a possibility that you might end up with a story and no pic to go with it, you probably should have just written it as a short story to begin with, and let your words paint the picture. Now I'm starting to rant!
Congratulations on cutting out that much text, though. Editing for conciseness is among my greatest weaknesses.
Vanndril
2014-01-14 23:27:28>> #7996
The pic and the writing really blend well together. Her expression is particularly perfect.
That was the intention, yes. :P I'm glad it worked out that way.
There is merit to writing the story for the image, rather than trying to find an image for the story. After I saw the expression, I just had to manip this. I knew it had to be done. I decided to add a caption after I finished the eyes (which were a bit of a pain, tbh - due to the sheer size of the image, the smallest mistakes show up at 100% zoom). I started writing with a general idea of what I wanted the the plot to be, and, looking back at the image constantly as I wrote, actively drew inspiration and ideas from it. The mist, the fact that Cirno's standing, the fact that she's currently mindless, the fact that she's bathing, her erect nipples, blush, and heavy breathing; all of this and then some were directly inspired from the image itself. Even her "nice shape" was inspired by her posture in the image.
When I was done writing, I actually had enough text for a couple of pages of a small-paged novel. <.<
I was forced to cut out a good 75% (in volume of text) of what I really wanted to include, and whatever fluff I added in. There was just no way to fit it into the space I gave myself and I didn't want this to become one of those story manips.
Anyway, I'm starting to rant, so... XD