From "hey" to "wanna see my boobies?" in 60 seconds... Ah, now, see if all of MY dates could go that easily!

For some reason I was expecting her brain to be teleported into the tank next to her

More helmet content to come?

Yes, finally. True enlightenment.

New level of intelligence achieved.
Realisation: Chastity is an unnecessarily restrictive social construct.

Eww trans scars

"Corpse Queen Lucina"

Risen Queen Lucina, now Chrom isn't the only one being turned into a Risen Leader.

Haven't used this account properly in about a year, but I spent the time reading through all 3 of the comics in sequence, to get a feel for it. Honestly, I get the comment wars- I don't mind NTR, and the hypno should've been more pronounced.

Honestly though, I feel the bigger problem with these comics has been the lack of progression within them? Chapters 1 and 2 were virtually identical with swapped out characters, and 3 did at least give a payoff to those arcs, albeit in a depressing (but expected) way. But that's effectively 3, maybe 5 major plot points (if you consider the start of the active cheating to be plot points) in ~70 pages. Don't forget, the previous timeline mentioned that Artifact blocked the ability for Enid's GF to re-enter the timeline. This wasn't explored at all, despite the comic being absolutely massive. I get it's a comic we're reading to watch furries fuck, but it just seems bizarre to drop what could've been a plot point they would work towards as a one liner to presumably get off on completely losing her GF. That's fine.

NTR, Cuckoldry, those kinks are fine, any kink is fine! But honestly, I think you should make this a series of separate, but loosely related posts, rather than a comic. That way people don't flame you for the lack of hypno content on the hypno-site; post the hypno here, and the NTR on, say, R34 (Yes, I do know this doesn't break Hypnohub rules, they are under mind control, but it makes up 3/70 of the pages). I'd hope this makes it a bit better for all parties involved

You have amazing art, and clearly a good enough work ethic to put out this much content, just please do more with this story. 90% of these frames feel like they could be removed from the comics, and nothing would be lost. I'm glad you're taking criticism, I just hope you do more than just give the hypnotized characters spiral eyes!

Good Luck on the next comic, I look forward to it~

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Honestly, I have a lot of respect for you taking this kind of thing to heart going forward. You got a lot of vitriol here (more than you probably deserved, even from myself) and found a positive direction to go forward with it.

absolutely draw what you like, but I am overjoyed to hear you'll be putting more hypnosis in your next comic.

You are cool my man. Please never take criticism personally. When people criticize your work, it means they love it and want it to get even better. Keep rocking on my dude.

After this page, there is only one left in this series. I have taken into account what was said during this series as i wrote the next one. I hope the next series is more enjoyable to the folks here. It WILL have a more hypnosis then this one as well as more identifiable traits to know they are hypnotized. Thank You.

Redundancy and repetition in this? I'm shocked.
On a completely unrelated note, how many times has it been said that Cynthia could have won but got cocky? 20? 30?

>>541355

Yeah as much as i love this series the way Mustardsauce reuses the same panel but adds more dialogue is really obnoxious

Noticed that Mustardsauce seems to be a fan of somewhat redundant image pages. Some like the sibling to this one and the sibling to post 202355 seem to be for dramatic effect.

Others like some later in this part (and I think some during Cynthia's breasts expansion in Part 5) seem there to simulate motion (in those cases, breasts bouncing). Interesting thing to shoot for, but not really noticeable unless you are viewing the images in quick succession like a slideshow.

And then you have the doubles for Ash getting kicked to the curb by Cynthia which were just straight up errors.

Interesting decisions, but it to make posting this stuff a pain and I can get why BootyHunter69 skipped those.

Love the expression

God I'd love to RP the R6 girls getting MCed. Discord is same name if ur interested

She *kinda* looks like Becky Lynch, that WWE wrestler gal! Well mainly her head, face & facial structure, also very similar hair too!

Oh wow I thought this was some new BrokenTeapot art, I was like, super in disbelief that I thought BT finally has returned, at least doing hypno art after some long, long years past since the last time!

Fuck me this is insanely hot. I love hypnotized assistant stuff then seeing them give in as their friend turns on them.

Actually I'm dumb they are actually the artist :P

Err, Twitter Commentary rather than artist >->

Artist Commentary:

Another old comic commission for my good pal. @letterabcd! This time featuring Kaa and Lyn from Fire Emblem, though I cannot recognize the other lovely lady. I do believe she is also from Fire Emblem, but I am not 100% sure. :C

Couldn't agree more with you. ^^

We really need more seige stuff here

Spiral eyes version of my previous post.

Gosh I love bimbo GoGo~~~

"Wish Gem: Gogo Tomago"

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"Wish Gem: Gogo Tomago confronts a villian with the Wish Gem in his possession, stating how she's going to take him down. She is then hit by the wish gem, making her into his bimbo slave, ready to f ck him."

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