yeah this formatting is kind of bad. I dont know why they did it like this

I think its supposed to be read left down and then right down. Like they got caught in a trap and transformed

The initial sequence does not make sense.

1.They're outside the door.
2. The door opens, there's a girl in there.
3. Everyone comments on the door opening. No one's moved.
4. Now there's three people on the inside of the door?

NotMolo commissioned me a sequel to his last one. This time Persian is infecting her Ninetales friend.

Quite a terrifying creature it is, it will find a female and attach itself to her vagina, crawling inside. Once it makes contact with that area, the girl is helpless, overwhelmed by pleasure too much to even move.
Once inside, the creature will take control of her mind, a soft red glow in the eyes the only indication. It will make her feed on cum, or rather, feed IT with cum.
So that it may grow and reproduce inside of her.

A sketch commission for notmolo on DA

Thing is, I like NTR. I have done RPs where my character has been brainwashed away from her partner. In the middle of one now as a matter of fact. But... Can't help but agree with the others.

Something that could have helped with this, and wouldn't have needed a big rewrite, could have been simple visual clues to their brainwashed nature. The eyes are the windows to the mind as it were. And yet here they are not glazed or glowing. They have light in them. Don't think they are even different colors. This could have been a way to show the MC.

I do wish you good luck with your next project. I hope you truly have taken the thoughts of those you are sharing this with into account.

seeing "BITCH!!!" complete with three (3) exclamation marks was pretty funny

Yeah, as a constructive criticism I agreed with changer in it.

Basically for us on the hypno community, when we see hentai mangas where random guy just use a hypno app during 1 page and nothing relevant to hypnosis happen next don't tend to be exactly our cup of tea.

For example, I love pet play, but when I see a hentai manga with a character squatting as a dog on the cover, then check the manga and just see 1 panel with the character squatting, I feel a bit scammed. The rest of the manga was just vainilla sex and hypnosis didn't really matter at the point you can remove these pages and nothing changes.

Imagine a furry werewolf comic, where the character turns into a werewolf during 2 panels, then go back to normal and that doesn't happen again the rest of the comic.

For the next comics I sugguest try to expand the hypno part,
add triggers, add altered perceptionk, wake up/sleep/wake up scenarios, etc.

Don't feel forced to accept these suggestions, just trying to help with ideas.

really hoping the next 100 page comic has more than 3 panels of hypno~

I'm going to try to say this as nice as I can.

People are going to be upset at this, for numerous reasons, so getting offended when people call you out on this is completely pointless.

You need to learn to know your audience. Yes, this content is technically allowed on the site, but that does not mean we have to like it. It's very clear that your fetish is NTR. You yourself admit this is a primarily NTR comic, on a website that is devoted to material that is primarily hypnosis related. This series has slightly more than 1/30th to do with hypnosis, and the rest is just self-indulgent fucking for fuckings' sake.

Glowhorn makes good art, I've even commissioned them myself before - so don't try to say we're disapraging the art. It's your writing that we take issue with. This story, for one, could have been told in a third of the time rather than making multiple pages in a row in which no plot is advancing. People are going to get tired of it. Take daveyboy's comics in comparison - there's almost always plot advancement in every piece. I would suggest being more like that when putting these together.

Second, the ending is... frankly, it's garbage. I'm not trying to kinkshame here, but as someone who has been cheated on before, this is frankly just saddening. It's unnecessarily mean-spirited, and, fiction or otherwise, it brought back extremely painful memories of my own breakup due to my exe's promiscuity, because she ended things in an extremely similar manner. You do you, boo, but I cannot understand how someone could get off to such genuine rudeness. Especially when a character like Enid has such a genuine healthy relationship with Red.

If you are going to do a part four to this, I'd suggest either finding a way to bounce back from this unnecessarily mean ending, or just not post it here at all, especially if you don't want any "comment wars" - which I think is a bit dramatic. Please learn to take criticism into account more healthy rather than resort to calling them "wars," and ignore the more hateful people who aren't offering anything constructive.

Psychotic, unwell, based.

Username checks out

I regret nothing.

Delete it if you must.

God help me.

So did the seller mind control the buyer?

Love that chain effect~

There's a way to transfer favorites. Parent/child the posts and delete one of them, it will ask/confirm that the favs will be transferred. I forgot which one has to be parent though so you'd have to just try them out if you ever reupload Dx

As an apology for the reset favorites, have another. Now I should really go to bed.

Oh she's the weakest you say? That would make sense with my personal experience and her susceptibility to hypnosis herself

Can it be count as "consensual"?
And will there be a sequel? I really like this pic~

Femdom I actually enjoy? Well done. Please make of these two.

Technically speaking, she's the weakest kind of Chromatic Dragon. So like, if she's doing this good on her own... How intense are the others?

I'm finally starting to mess around with multiple fonts now! It only occurred to me to try it after I saw another caption maker talking about it, but now that I've done it I don't know why it took me so long. Also, I had fun writing the dialogue—though I wish I'd had room for even more—so I'm thinking I might be making these kinds of captions more often!
Anywho, as always, enjoy!

Mmmm... Sexy harem goodness~ Wish I could be just like her~ <3

I love her clothes! I want the same!~

Now with 'more anatomically correct hips' than the pixiv version

we need more Shadow dom on this site, pretty good though

@Tomsk We need to fix that.

There really isn't much content with the anime version of The Jungle Book. If we ever did tag it, then I think "Jungle Book Shounen Mowgli" would be fitting since that's what the title is, in Japanese.

Yeah I dont know why theres no tag for that series

You dont see the anime Jungle Book round here often.