Transcript: WHAT THE FUCK! Excuse me? Lover? Sorry, Mast- fuck! NO! Get your dick out of my ass! No, I'm brainwashing you. What? No! Yes. Yes. Why? I was going to use you to get revenge on her... Yes! Revenge! I'm a… I can't remember… I told you to forget your resistance. Remember why I control you. I don't know. I'm scared. I'm falling for you. Breaking… I don't want you broken. I want you. I... you... what? I can't hurt my friend enough. But you? Smart. Sexy. Twisted. Yes. Oh, fuck, yes. Bound. Empty. Loved. You're mine. Forever. Yes. I'll see you in hell. Promise? Yes Master.
Pinkanator said: Actually, RD's and AJ's parents are confirmed for next season.
Rip joke
Not yet! While it was confirmed that they will be shown, I think they also said that it is going to be a flashback, therefore our cannon can still exist. (and so will our jokes!) So RD and AJ get her parents. But Scoots is still a orphan? GG Larson.
grashok said: Welp. To be precise the Moms we do know of who also were shown in the show were:
Twilight Sparkle:Twilight Velvet (as a homage that there was already a Twilight in G1) Rarity: in Sisterhoof Social you can see Rarity's parents Pinkie: The Pie Family has been show on multiple occasions but first in The Cutie Mark Chronicles Applejack: Her parents are presumed to be dead. Fluttershy: Look above. Diamond Tiara: Her Mother is the Rosa Unicorn on the right. Spike: Twilight Hatched him so...... ... .. . .. .. . ...... ... .. .. .
I think that cuts it. If there are anymore please correct me.
There's also Cadence and Stormy Flare(Spitfire's mom) I guess Chrysalis counts, too.
RunicScript said: Pretty much. They're two biological moms and one mother figure to three of the protagonists. Twilight Velvet would be another one and... that's pretty much all we got in the show, I think.
Welp. To be precise the Moms we do know of who also were shown in the show were:
Twilight Sparkle:Twilight Velvet (as a homage that there was already a Twilight in G1) Rarity: in Sisterhoof Social you can see Rarity's parents Pinkie: The Pie Family has been show on multiple occasions but first in The Cutie Mark Chronicles Applejack: Her parents are presumed to be dead. Fluttershy: Look above. Diamond Tiara: Her Mother is the Rosa Unicorn on the right. Spike: Twilight Hatched him so...... ... .. . .. .. . ...... ... .. .. .
I think that cuts it. If there are anymore please correct me.
pokemongirl said: So these like the cannon pony MILFs?
Pretty much. They're two biological moms and one mother figure to three of the protagonists. Twilight Velvet would be another one and... that's pretty much all we got in the show, I think.
Date Feb 26, 2017UserAzamuku-chanRating ExplicitScore132(vote up)
Story by commissioner: Saw Gerrara was certain that his old student Jyn Erso was a spy sent to kill him. He knew that the only way to find out for sure was to hand her over to Bor Gullet for a thorough interrogation. Bor Gullet, had never seen such a delicate specimen before and it knew that a deep probing would be necessary.
Jyn moaned as the tentacle slid up from her throat and rested on her lips. The tentacle that had slithered into her unprepared rear and all the way through her digestive tract was driving her to the brink of madness. The tentacle slapped against her head was driving her over the edge as a smaller tendril had snaked deep into her ear to probe her brain. As Jyn moaned wetly around the tentacle sliding all the way through her writhing body and the tendril penetrating deep into her head through her ear canal, Saw Gerrara hoped he would have the answers he needed.
AriothVulpe said: Hey! Looks like this is your first submission, right? Well, let me say, I like it! You've got a good choice of source picture, for one, which helps a lot, but I have to say the story itself is hot to me. I've always been a sucker for orientation play, and it's done well!
Welp, it's actually 4th my manip, if I got your words correctly. Thanks for comment though.
Hey! Looks like this is your first submission, right? Well, let me say, I like it! You've got a good choice of source picture, for one, which helps a lot, but I have to say the story itself is hot to me. I've always been a sucker for orientation play, and it's done well!
As for the writing, there are just a couple typos I noticed, like "psycho" being "pshycho", etc. There are also a couple sentences whose grammar is perhaps just a bit stilted. I'd also be careful about the shift from 'narrator' to 'internal thoughts' because they're the same color in this caption, and it can be a bit difficult to tell when they transition. However, none of that kept me from totally understanding what was going on and enjoying it too, so I wouldn't worry about that too much and just keep it in mind for new ones.
Which brings me to the final point: I do want to see more from you! I hope I see more content like this in the future, if you're willing. It's good stuff, and you can only improve on your writing over time! That's exactly what I did for my own writings. :3
Whisper said: Honestly this has too be one of my favorite picture on the hub I love that Inma blank face, it seems to me like it says "Hey at least I am not the one getting fucked this time~"
Honestly this has too be one of my favorite picture on the hub I love that Inma blank face, it seems to me like it says "Hey at least I am not the one getting fucked this time~"
Believe it or not. The words were the hardest part. Because there's so much you can fit in those squares, once you figure out how to drop stuff in them. So, I started out with single characters. And abandoned that when I noticed "OPE'NOPE'N". The words though, they looked a lot better and there is less pressure to make a pattern with them.
Imasuky said: Are you talking about yourself, cause far as I can tell she's doing it the only right way.
You're thinking of Chinese Checkers. They like foot binding there. (Note I am aware that Chinese Foot Binding is a horrible offense of human rights and nothing like this. I am just making a joke.)
Date Feb 26, 2017UserNoNameJohnRating SafeScore10(vote up)
april
2021-12-06 07:29:53>> #448342
WHAT THE FUCK! Excuse me? Lover?
Sorry, Mast- fuck! NO!
Get your dick out of my ass!
No, I'm brainwashing you.
What? No! Yes. Yes. Why?
I was going to use you to get revenge on her... Yes! Revenge! I'm a…
I can't remember…
I told you to forget your resistance. Remember why I control you.
I don't know. I'm scared. I'm falling for you. Breaking…
I don't want you broken.
I want you. I... you... what?
I can't hurt my friend enough. But you? Smart. Sexy. Twisted.
Yes. Oh, fuck, yes.
Bound. Empty. Loved. You're mine. Forever.
Yes.
I'll see you in hell.
Promise?
Yes Master.
JksAccount
2017-02-26 23:29:32>> #158632
jk
You called!
Mr_Face
2017-02-26 23:14:39>> #158627
I think Greasyi's post on the original kind of sums up why I changed it. Just wish it didn't take me so long XD
Pinkanator
2017-02-26 22:32:00>> #158612
Two years later and I'm like "I should unfuck that manip."
Yeah, I mean, succubus sub? Terrible.
jk
Mr_Face
2017-02-26 22:29:51>> #158610
grashok
2017-03-10 13:28:26>> #160626
Actually, RD's and AJ's parents are confirmed for next season.
Rip joke
Not yet!
While it was confirmed that they will be shown, I think they also said that it is going to be a flashback, therefore our cannon can still exist. (and so will our jokes!)
So RD and AJ get her parents.
But Scoots is still a orphan?
GG Larson.
SkrontheSecond
2017-02-27 06:58:13>> #158709
Welp. To be precise the Moms we do know of who also were shown in the show were:
Twilight Sparkle:Twilight Velvet (as a homage that there was already a Twilight in G1)
Rarity: in Sisterhoof Social you can see Rarity's parents
Pinkie: The Pie Family has been show on multiple occasions but first in The Cutie Mark Chronicles
Applejack: Her parents are presumed to be dead.
Fluttershy: Look above.
Diamond Tiara: Her Mother is the Rosa Unicorn on the right.
Spike: Twilight Hatched him so...... ... .. . .. .. . ...... ... .. .. .
I think that cuts it. If there are anymore please correct me.
There's also Cadence and Stormy Flare(Spitfire's mom)
I guess Chrysalis counts, too.
Pinkanator
2017-02-27 06:45:31>> #158706
Rip joke
grashok
2017-02-27 06:35:22>> #158704
Pretty much. They're two biological moms and one mother figure to three of the protagonists. Twilight Velvet would be another one and... that's pretty much all we got in the show, I think.
Welp. To be precise the Moms we do know of who also were shown in the show were:
Twilight Sparkle:Twilight Velvet (as a homage that there was already a Twilight in G1)
Rarity: in Sisterhoof Social you can see Rarity's parents
Pinkie: The Pie Family has been show on multiple occasions but first in The Cutie Mark Chronicles
Applejack: Her parents are presumed to be dead.
Fluttershy: Look above.
Diamond Tiara: Her Mother is the Rosa Unicorn on the right.
Spike: Twilight Hatched him so...... ... .. . .. .. . ...... ... .. .. .
I think that cuts it. If there are anymore please correct me.
RunicScript
2017-02-27 00:40:55>> #158653
So these like the cannon pony MILFs?
Pretty much. They're two biological moms and one mother figure to three of the protagonists. Twilight Velvet would be another one and... that's pretty much all we got in the show, I think.
Azamuku-chan
2017-02-27 11:26:05>> #158728
BurningPenguin6
2017-02-27 05:41:49>> #158701
TheDominantSub
2017-02-27 05:33:00>> #158698
NamesAreForTheWeak
2017-02-27 02:37:59>> #158671
PassingPerson
2017-02-27 02:29:36>> #158670
anonymind
2017-02-26 20:48:53>> #158580
MultiLimbedXeno
2018-01-07 20:46:54>> #226017
Jyn moaned as the tentacle slid up from her throat and rested on her lips. The tentacle that had slithered into her unprepared rear and all the way through her digestive tract was driving her to the brink of madness. The tentacle slapped against her head was driving her over the edge as a smaller tendril had snaked deep into her ear to probe her brain. As Jyn moaned wetly around the tentacle sliding all the way through her writhing body and the tendril penetrating deep into her head through her ear canal, Saw Gerrara hoped he would have the answers he needed.
crazyman
2017-02-26 20:43:30>> #158578
Sleepyhead97
2017-02-26 15:37:25>> #158552
Mister Vi
2017-02-28 01:11:33>> #158806
T323
2017-02-26 21:23:52>> #158588
Hey! Looks like this is your first submission, right? Well, let me say, I like it! You've got a good choice of source picture, for one, which helps a lot, but I have to say the story itself is hot to me. I've always been a sucker for orientation play, and it's done well!
Welp, it's actually 4th my manip, if I got your words correctly. Thanks for comment though.
AriothVulpe
2017-02-26 21:19:32>> #158586
As for the writing, there are just a couple typos I noticed, like "psycho" being "pshycho", etc. There are also a couple sentences whose grammar is perhaps just a bit stilted. I'd also be careful about the shift from 'narrator' to 'internal thoughts' because they're the same color in this caption, and it can be a bit difficult to tell when they transition. However, none of that kept me from totally understanding what was going on and enjoying it too, so I wouldn't worry about that too much and just keep it in mind for new ones.
Which brings me to the final point: I do want to see more from you! I hope I see more content like this in the future, if you're willing. It's good stuff, and you can only improve on your writing over time! That's exactly what I did for my own writings. :3
T323
2017-02-26 12:41:22>> #158540
Link
2017-02-28 20:47:27>> #158939
Myuk
2017-02-26 19:34:30>> #158574
Honestly this has too be one of my favorite picture on the hub
I love that Inma blank face, it seems to me like it says "Hey at least I am not the one getting fucked this time~"
Myuk-ko got her back^^
...or Inma has hers :3
Whisper
2017-02-26 16:16:10>> #158555
I love that Inma blank face, it seems to me like it says "Hey at least I am not the one getting fucked this time~"
RelaxDude
2017-02-26 12:47:05>> #158541
EdgeOfTheMoon
2017-02-26 12:23:15>> #158536
Mr_Face
2017-02-27 01:38:57>> #158663
Bob137
2017-02-26 23:49:08>> #158638
Mr_Face
2017-02-26 23:31:29>> #158633
pokemongirl
2017-02-26 22:18:59>> #158601
rocketracer294
2017-02-26 19:29:11>> #158573
Are you talking about yourself, cause far as I can tell she's doing it the only right way.
You're thinking of Chinese Checkers. They like foot binding there.
(Note I am aware that Chinese Foot Binding is a horrible offense of human rights and nothing like this. I am just making a joke.)
OverlordMiles
2017-02-26 20:19:49>> #158575
Kansattica
2017-02-26 08:53:37>> #158503
Imasuky
2017-02-26 21:40:14>> #158592
ehm... does the little spiky ball not look like nebby? GODDANMIT NEBBY QUIT ENSLAVING WOMEN
Get back in the bag!
Rumpo
2017-02-26 18:24:08>> #158567
pokemongirl
2017-02-26 06:46:19>> #158485