I love this, really great job! I'd love to see more from you!

One comment is that in the beginning I didnt realize that when there was a new paragraph it switch from what she was saying to the 2nd person. Next time might I suggest adding in different colored text or perhaps just adding quotation marks to signify when a person is speaking and when its 2nd person

I also love Fancyaddiction... and I love this!! Please make more!!!

This was very heavily inspired by Sadistic Caregiver by Fancyaddiction (who is my favourite manipper of all time). It's also my first time trying 2nd person writing, and I'm quite pleased with the effect.

I appreciate the $\mathbb{R}$ notation for 'hypnosis is real' lmao

(I kinda doubt that will render at all but I suspect you know what I mean lol)

She looks very cute with that dress!... And it seems she will keep it for a while, so thats even better~

Gardenia is so hot. I love seeing the bubbles with what they are saying or thinking in posts like these. Wish it was a tag.

You bet your ASS it is! That thing's gonna get ALL FOUR SPARKLES I tell you. ALL FOUR!

Is one of her daily maid tasks to make sure to shine that badge up so that it keeps sparkling and making pure tones when tapped at?

Here is my place now...~~

Mmmmmmmmmmmmm nice busty Misty~~~ <3

Which is an odd pairing given the psy-type closest to Cerulean is Abra.

Misty is such a good Hypno slave

I wanna join them~

I love seeing sexy girls kaanotized and bred

I love the collector so much

The fiend! He left her shoes on. Everyone knows elves have perfect feet.

the stupid smirk he gets when he sees her start laughing uncontrollably is priceless, hell all of the expressions are so good. id kill for these randos

also well-paced story-filled comics with that good ~natural progression~ are the sexiest ones imo

I am so glad people you guys are finally getting to see this one. It only gets better.

Carassing elbow skin? Willfully showing ankles??? Take this degenerate filth elsewhere!!! Next thing you know they will be... h*lding h*nds!!!!

Gosh I love how adorable and cute this is~~~ <3

oooooooh she's got a hypnosis kink.

I am in love with this post! Its perfect! :)

Always lovely to see a wild anime girl with Kaa. Surprised it took us this long to see San encountering Kaa.

Right she has a name @.@

She truly is the Princess Mononoke!

I really want to try being hypnotized, are there any hypnotists that could put me in trance?