Whisper said: My guess is you'll have the opportunity to work on that in next pages ^^ Overall I think the structure could have been made better with a view from Camila and the view from Mozu.
I might be able to add another bit of text to this picture segment before the next one, if I can think of anything to write to describe her total loss of self from her own perspective.
As for showing things from Mozu's perspective, I don't think that would've been a good idea. Mostly because it would reveal stuff I wanted to reveal later, but also because I wouldn't know what to write for her. I find the view of somebody blissfully surrendering themselves to be more interesting and fun to write for than the view of the person who has them in the palm of their hands.
My guess is you'll have the opportunity to work on that in next pages ^^ Overall I think the structure could have been made better with a view from Camila and the view from Mozu.
Whisper said: Not an uncommon metaphor as far as hypnosis goes, but a sexy reliable one at that. Given the nature of the picture I would have however used the opportunity to meld the physical pleasure she feels with the growing emptiness of her mind as she becomes overwhelmed by sensations rather than rational thoughts.
Not an uncommon metaphor as far as hypnosis goes, but a sexy reliable one at that. Given the nature of the picture I would have however used the opportunity to meld the physical pleasure she feels with the growing emptiness of her mind as she becomes overwhelmed by sensations rather than rational thoughts.
Date Jan 24, 2017UserKarmaXRating QuestionableScore86(vote up)
Midori
2017-01-25 00:44:52>> #152519
A Greek legend about a statue who was brought to life.
Ah, this Galatea....no but she is a statue nothing to do with a travel time.
Imasuky
2017-01-25 00:12:52>> #152517
What is a Galatea???
A Greek legend about a statue who was brought to life.
Midori
2017-01-25 00:09:52>> #152516
Uhhh.... Galatea? I mean, since she's named Android...
What is a Galatea???
SilverAlt
2017-01-25 00:02:41>> #152515
I will be back when I can, thanks need to give her a last name.
Uhhh.... Galatea? I mean, since she's named Android...
Midori
2017-01-24 20:14:05>> #152483
Good to see you're back at making sexy stuff like this. Nice work. ^^
I will be back when I can, thanks need to give her a last name.
Cman77701
2017-01-25 01:26:15>> #152520
I like this spiral eyes version the most <3
Same, I'm a sucker for spiral eyes.
Sirloin
2017-01-24 23:00:27>> #152505
Hi everyoneee.
HI, DR. NICK!
Glowstick
2017-01-24 21:22:22>> #152489
StepfordCrimson
2017-01-24 19:53:27>> #152477
JamesF
2017-01-24 19:19:36>> #152463
A very well done job I say, good show good show <3
Thank you Roobu~<3
btw, i think you made a mistake with the parent post.
I certainly did, should be fixed nowww.
BillCiphersPuppet
2017-01-24 18:27:18>> #152452
Pastel-Daemon
2017-01-24 16:27:58>> #152438
EdenSnake
2018-06-09 01:43:16>> #264037
I'm so glad you feel that way. This is one of the best pictures i've drawn, I feel.
This is great, thanks ^_^
KarmaX
2018-06-09 01:39:49>> #264035
This is so beautiful that I am hugging the pc screen now <3
I'm so glad you feel that way. This is one of the best pictures i've drawn, I feel.
EdenSnake
2018-06-08 23:59:31>> #264017
KarmaX
2017-01-26 04:41:45>> #152697
Actually i wouldn't mind that turning of tables! <3
I love both of these ideas.
Mimikyu
2017-01-26 04:24:04>> #152695
Or let Mommy take care of you ;3 <3
Actually i wouldn't mind that turning of tables! <3
pokemongirl
2017-01-24 20:09:26>> #152480
Hawkeye
2017-01-24 17:15:37>> #152441
My guess is you'll have the opportunity to work on that in next pages ^^
Overall I think the structure could have been made better with a view from Camila and the view from Mozu.
I might be able to add another bit of text to this picture segment before the next one, if I can think of anything to write to describe her total loss of self from her own perspective.
As for showing things from Mozu's perspective, I don't think that would've been a good idea. Mostly because it would reveal stuff I wanted to reveal later, but also because I wouldn't know what to write for her. I find the view of somebody blissfully surrendering themselves to be more interesting and fun to write for than the view of the person who has them in the palm of their hands.
Whisper
2017-01-24 15:17:29>> #152431
Damn, yeah, missed opportunity there.
My guess is you'll have the opportunity to work on that in next pages ^^
Overall I think the structure could have been made better with a view from Camila and the view from Mozu.
Hawkeye
2017-01-24 14:43:14>> #152429
Not an uncommon metaphor as far as hypnosis goes, but a sexy reliable one at that.
Given the nature of the picture I would have however used the opportunity to meld the physical pleasure she feels with the growing emptiness of her mind as she becomes overwhelmed by sensations rather than rational thoughts.
Damn, yeah, missed opportunity there.
Whisper
2017-01-24 14:27:31>> #152426
Given the nature of the picture I would have however used the opportunity to meld the physical pleasure she feels with the growing emptiness of her mind as she becomes overwhelmed by sensations rather than rational thoughts.
KarmaX
2017-01-25 03:25:06>> #152531
Shouldn't it be "I love.. master... more.. THAN.. anything.."?
AW, DAMMIT.
And i'm usually pretty particular about grammar and spelling, too. -___-
SHIT. That is going to bother the hell out of me, now. I should know WAY better than to let something like that slip.
Frostbyte
2017-01-25 02:32:51>> #152524
fakesern
2017-01-24 23:00:28>> #152506
pokemongirl
2017-01-24 20:10:34>> #152481
spiralboy
2017-01-24 15:42:01>> #152436
keytarness
2017-01-25 08:05:06>> #152599
SeaithDaizon
2017-01-25 04:45:52>> #152557
Mr_Face
2017-01-24 21:52:03>> #152492
:D
Arata
2017-01-24 21:01:17>> #152485
cypress_z
2017-01-24 18:14:52>> #152451
ROBO's BETTER!
Beep boop meow.
Imasuky
2017-01-25 05:45:59>> #152574
It's my stand, Hypnophant Green.
Not everyone will get that Jojoke, they might need a Breakdown.
SomeCallMeSalty
2017-01-25 05:42:44>> #152573
It's my stand, Hypnophant Green.
God damnit why didn't I think of that
Pinkanator
2017-01-24 11:20:09>> #152413
who dis? she looks like tan but she green
It's my stand, Hypnophant Green.
skullman2033
2017-01-24 09:44:01>> #152410
UberNimrod
2017-01-26 05:17:12>> #152699
There a fanfic where they get brainwashed into being human cows if I remember correctly
WHERE???
oneshot589
2017-01-25 05:37:42>> #152571
Tyrranus
2017-01-24 19:51:09>> #152474
hypnouser2
2017-01-24 11:26:50>> #152415
DrgnmastrAlex
2017-01-24 07:55:42>> #152408