The problem with this picture is the faces. The lips need more definition as now they're incomplete lines which has strange implications. uh... As it is with how it' looks my head thinks they're in neutral position and more a generally DERP position with how their head's are tilted at an odd angle (rotationally) like that.
Also Something really feels off about Alice's Torso. Maybe it's the pose but it seems like it's almost too long. I can't put my finger completely on it but something about it just in my head screaming WRONG
At least Patchy's getting some fun stuff.
Edit: The crease for her naval goes on Way too far! That's what the most obvious issue is. Marisa's size is better.
Unless Alice had really nasty long scar there it's not supposed to be that long.
I figured this may as well be translated since it's so brief.
I was torn between using "Magic words" and "A good luck charm" for the first bubble since both could apply, I'm really not too sure which fits best here.
blazefox2
2016-12-20 18:30:22>> #145333
voyer
2016-12-20 05:16:42>> #145266
pokemongirl
2016-12-20 20:18:23>> #145342
Heavenly
2016-12-20 20:17:19>> #145341
Melandria
2016-12-20 09:46:46>> #145292
vahn_yourdoom
2016-12-20 08:49:59>> #145288
All of the Patreon plugging! Seriously tho, good work!
a patreon poster inna patreon post, patreonception XD
Blastman
2016-12-20 05:57:43>> #145273
Ex_Mastermind
2016-12-20 05:17:04>> #145267
*tries to modify a motorcycle to fly in space so she can join them*
Roll a D-20 to see how well you do! *needs to get DnD off the mind*
StepfordCrimson
2016-12-20 04:58:16>> #145265
pokemongirl
2016-12-20 04:45:10>> #145262
scarlet4
2016-12-20 14:57:41>> #145306
anonplsno
2016-12-20 06:00:30>> #145275
Big Booty Fuck Deer *giggles*
Should be "jiggle boy" *jiggles and giggles*
pokemongirl
2016-12-20 04:39:52>> #145260
Yakai
2017-01-06 00:17:02>> #148580
Yakai's work looks a lot like Roukishin.
Not that i'm complaining, but i've been keeping an eagle eye out for roukishin to come back, so i often notice these things.
How does it look like Roukishin ?
Ogodei-Khan
2017-01-05 02:30:00>> #148404
Not that i'm complaining, but i've been keeping an eagle eye out for roukishin to come back, so i often notice these things.
Zelinko
2016-12-20 13:34:17>> #145301
Also Something really feels off about Alice's Torso. Maybe it's the pose but it seems like it's almost too long. I can't put my finger completely on it but something about it just in my head screaming WRONG
At least Patchy's getting some fun stuff.
Edit: The crease for her naval goes on Way too far! That's what the most obvious issue is. Marisa's size is better.
Unless Alice had really nasty long scar there it's not supposed to be that long.
Defcon7
2016-12-20 04:35:00>> #145257
Imasuky
2016-12-20 04:34:32>> #145256
Myuk wanted a futanari version =p
Good!
Zelinko
2016-12-20 13:38:46>> #145302
Kracky
2016-12-20 06:10:06>> #145276
Yakai
2016-12-20 04:30:25>> #145253
SomeoneElse
2016-12-20 13:25:56>> #145299
I was torn between using "Magic words" and "A good luck charm" for the first bubble since both could apply, I'm really not too sure which fits best here.
SupremacySun
2016-12-20 04:26:35>> #145252
RedCollarBlackCollar
2017-05-27 08:00:56>> #177967
can pink snake be a tag please <3 <3 <3
No.
Pitaya's the character tag if u just wanna look for snakes like her.
luckytonberry
2017-05-27 07:31:02>> #177961
pokemongirl
2016-12-20 04:44:31>> #145261
Defcon7
2016-12-20 03:39:35>> #145247
skullman2033
2016-12-20 02:57:21>> #145241
Pazuzu
2016-12-20 05:48:26>> #145270
MrM7
2016-12-20 03:32:24>> #145245
Umbra
2016-12-20 01:46:46>> #145228
DrgnmastrAlex
2016-12-19 23:34:42>> #145207
*DRGNMASTRALEX HAS REACHED CRITICAL MASS! DON'T MATTER IF THIS IS JIMRYU, IT'S HOT AS FUCK!*
Imasuky
2016-12-19 23:07:22>> #145206
Jackie
2016-12-19 13:19:29>> #145155