I think it's just the perspective, yeah. If you look at the bottom of the image being slightly closer to us then it looks fine. It could also have something to do with the massive tentacle currently fucking her brains out, pun very much intended.

Also for the record it was a blast getting to watch you make this masterpiece on stream, good job on it!

ok thank you for the critic.





haha thanks, i was pretty much trying out stuff

DAAAAAAAAMN YAKAI!! :3

Love it. Absolutely love it :D

Almost didn't recognize your work, your tentacles have improved by leaps =O

Tentacles are nice although I'm not sure if it's a perspective fail or not but her torso looks weirdly shaped

Actually she'd be hopping at you.

You can see where this is going with how big her breasts are.

But with the tongue thing. She IS undead. Just saying she may need some maintenance soon.

Aaaaaaaaaahhhhh big boobs and zombie walking yeeeeeeeeeess
Though it's weird when people draw drool the same colour as the person's tongue. Kind of makes it look like their tongue is melting.

We should have a tag for that.

She's a JiangShi. It's part of their core mythos. It's how their master controls them, else they become roaming monsters who turn others to JiangShi! The tag has their orders listed there so they obey. Of course don't put too much on there at once or they might get confused, they're not that strong after all

It's a hopping zombie/vampire apocalypse in the waiting.

Does anyone know where the putting a tag on someone's forehead came from. I see once in a while and I can't find the origin of it?

I guess it's just me, looking at saalim's face, thinking he said this line right here:

www.youtube.com/watch?v=8unVSLfkCmA

Cute

Yay Hex Maniac *drools*

AM I FUCKING DREAMING
OH MY GOD YES
THIS MAKES ME SO HAPPY

O.O *is speechless*

Or... you could just look at the source link and look at the description there :P

guess again, friend

If I had to guess Eaglet1 either commissioned the piece or is friends with the artist.

If you look hard enough in different circles you'll always find the one individual with the means to mass produce content which is 100% specific to them.

I never understand the turning random girls into mermaids like this. Love it anyways.

Ah, corrupted heroes. One of my favorite things. Honestly, Myotismon could do this, he just never tried. =/

When are you going to make a new page?

Not as far as I know tbh. I don't upload outside of tumblr too much nowadays. I usually leave it up to my viewers to handle that sort of thing. As it brings me much pride and joy :) If I find one such link or you find one yourself. Lets Share it!

Is there a place to read this comic and it's sequal in a more structured format? Like exhentai.org?

Thank you for your kind words, means the world to me :)

Yeah, this crap is going on my blacklist...

Hey, no worries. I'm glad you like the artwork, I REALLY loved drawing it. So satisfying xD

Nowadays, I like to approach comments as very open minded as I can(regardless of how they make me feel) to avoid harsh reactions but gain critical thinking. It didn't even occur to me that people might base this off the original concept. So you have taught me something and I am grateful :)

Oh no I got that! I should have been more clear: I meant the author of the book IN YOUR PICTURE didn't know what they were writing or nobody read said book.

I'm sorry for that, and it's cool you based it off other porn. And granted this doesn't look awful so please forgive me if I sounded harsh or something like that

Hello, Dalo here. I based this off of Simon Benson's: Stepford Bound. A depiction of the Stepford society at its most extreme. So no, I did not base this off the original.

Normally I complain when someone uses Comic Sans, but somehow in this case it seems to suit it perfectly.

That's not a compliment.

No. No it's not.

Either the author didn't know what the fuck they were writing, or someone didn't read the damn book. :P

See, I told you. :P

Okay...this wasn't what I was expecting when I saw the first panel. >.>;

I've never seen Danny Phantom, but yeah. You were right. >.o

Well the name was very misleading

I like how you guys are saying this Stepford Society thing is gonna be great and that I would like it, without knowing/realizing this is DESIREE making this wish :P

I've seen enough Danny Phantom to know this is gonna turn into something we didn't want or expect/something horrible.

my recent commission from Dalo Knight, a prequel/ alternate telling to a previous set he did of approximately the same premise - I asked that Valerie not realize her transformation, and believe herself to be unaffected, or only physically affected, by the extreme bondage wish - Dalo was extra generous in that he gave a lot of intermediate images to make it a more robust comic

I like where this is going.

That crystal looks interesting. Care to show me up close?

Thanks for the tip, I'm still learning to work on gimp.

The base picture is one of my favorites. Thank you for this animation. One little thing, if you do an animation, please try to optimize it for filesize in the end. I was able to optimize the gif with gimp after saving it from here, reducing its filesize from 30 to 3 MB, which is a 90% decrease in filesize, while maintaining the picture quality.

While I on the other hand respect a realistic color of pee. What most people go for ends up looking like lemon juice or gatorate. And then there are some who make the pee fluorescent and I have no idea what is up with that. You'd think they are aliens who never went an earth toilet before, and their urination fetish is their way to connect with the human race.

Your iteration has a typical 'I have a nasty cold' coloration. +4 for effort.

I faved because I could see that you clearly put a lot of work into this manip and as a former full-body manipper myself I can respect that.