DHB said: Always a really nice style with clean and organic body shaping. Love seeing any work from you. Your traditional and humble work always gets top points from me~!
Thank you! :D I'm a fan of your art too!
DisasterDan said: Dan helps another! Good stuff! Real nice to see us all come together and form a hope that can crush any despair.
Zelinko said: It's more that they're way too pointy even lifted up. look how sharp they're raised up Problem is with the lighting is that she shouldn't have a light reflection on the right side (Viewer's left) at all because of the direction she's looking.
I don't see any problems with the pointy arms, it's an artist style, even if it's not, it looks fine anyways. And when you're already criticising the capitalization, watch your dots. Some sentences just end without a dot, that's nitpicky, but still. Look at your own mistakes before criticising others. :P
Zelinko, giving someone feedback and constructive criticism is okay, but being rude is not. Nine times out of ten, if you are rude to an artist while giving "critique" they will feel like they are being attacked and people tend to get defensive as a result and not improve as easily. So, it does not help them in any way, and may hurt them to include insults and quips in your feedback.
G3m4sSt4ff said: Although, the glossiness is referring to a light source to her right, that's clearly visible..
The shoulders are this high since there should be arms going beneath them, he just decided to only draw the hands, so it works out after all.
It's more that they're way too pointy even lifted up. look how sharp they're raised up Problem is with the lighting is that she shouldn't have a light reflection on the right side (Viewer's left) at all because of the direction she's looking.
SomaX said: This is just a shot in the dark, but i think thats knuckles. Not amy. even has the weird lowhanging head doolie's knuckle's has, and they are all lighter shades than normal.
It's Amy, I drew knuckles a bit more orange in the comic, while Amy is the pastel pink, also Knuckles has their hair pulled into a pony tail and doesn't have the headband in addition to the headphones.
SomaX said: This is just a shot in the dark, but i think thats knuckles. Not amy. even has the weird lowhanging head doolie's knuckle's has, and they are all lighter shades than normal.
nah if you look at the parent picture you can see the same girl putting the headphones onto a normal knuckles
This is just a shot in the dark, but i think thats knuckles. Not amy. even has the weird lowhanging head doolie's knuckle's has, and they are all lighter shades than normal.
Sweet :o I went around a trick-or-treating and going to a costume party while crying and screaming at people if they approach me or shine flashlights at me. Then I rush over to them and start clawing them for an instakill.
I saw someone doing that at an anime convention, it was awesome. =) Unfortunately security didn't find it as amusing. X|
pokemongirl said: Any suggestions for getting into Sheena, like you did for Fuu, Roxa? I know I don't have time for the games at all is there animes, OVAs, or good cut scenes?
And I realise that it's been 3 months since my last Sheena commission. T_T
Any suggestions for getting into Sheena, like you did for Fuu, Roxa? I know I don't have time for the games at all is there animes, OVAs, or good cut scenes?
Date Nov 3, 2016Usersuccubusl0v3rRating ExplicitScore89(vote up)
Love the idea of "Home", I miss the days of this type of hentai, where you where bounded to the flesh and used there as a breeder, that was my first fantasy of hentai tbh.
Taryh said: I'm not knowledgeable enough to offer criticism, but I really do love the text, and the concept of the creature being referred to as "Home" in her mind. Very good job with the story to go with a good choice in images.
Yeah, I agree. This post makes me long for a home of my own, to join her in the process of constant sex. There should be some category for this incredibly extreme form of hypnosis.
Taryh said: I'm not knowledgeable enough to offer criticism, but I really do love the text, and the concept of the creature being referred to as "Home" in her mind. Very good job with the story to go with a good choice in images.
Yeah, I agree. This post makes me long for a home of my own, to join her in the process of constant sex. There should be some category for this incredibly extreme form of hypnosis.
I'm not knowledgeable enough to offer criticism, but I really do love the text, and the concept of the creature being referred to as "Home" in her mind. Very good job with the story to go with a good choice in images.
Date Oct 31, 2016UserTheGoodShankRating QuestionableScore42(vote up)
pokemongirl
2016-11-05 21:59:46>> #136369
Yes Pokemongirl, it is very hot, so you should take off all your clothes.
*nods and strips*
ghost13
2016-11-04 23:54:05>> #136232
Hot outside...yes...*drools*
Yes Pokemongirl, it is very hot, so you should take off all your clothes.
pokemongirl
2016-11-04 19:17:28>> #136114
HypelHub
2016-11-04 18:10:08>> #136099
Always a really nice style with clean and organic body shaping.
Love seeing any work from you.
Your traditional and humble work always gets top points from me~!
Thank you! :D I'm a fan of your art too!
Dan helps another! Good stuff! Real nice to see us all come together and form a hope that can crush any despair.
Yaay!
DisasterDan
2016-11-04 12:03:59>> #136053
Kansattica
2016-11-10 08:06:07>> #137106
-Starlight Glimmer, 2016
LilithAuroros
2016-11-04 18:53:33>> #136107
Ogodei-Khan
2016-11-04 04:38:19>> #136022
Yumberduddle
2016-11-05 01:03:10>> #136249
Everything makes sense except the stomach bloat/pregnancy.
the pregnancy is because the corruption is making her sexier
Bloodly
2016-11-04 08:10:25>> #136047
Imasuky
2016-11-04 03:58:24>> #136013
DrgnmastrAlex
2016-11-04 03:57:04>> #136012
Sophia
2016-11-04 16:44:36>> #136090
It's more that they're way too pointy even lifted up. look how sharp they're raised up Problem is with the lighting is that she shouldn't have a light reflection on the right side (Viewer's left) at all because of the direction she's looking.
I don't see any problems with the pointy arms, it's an artist style, even if it's not, it looks fine anyways. And when you're already criticising the capitalization, watch your dots. Some sentences just end without a dot, that's nitpicky, but still. Look at your own mistakes before criticising others. :P
Changer
2016-11-04 16:37:42>> #136089
Zelinko
2016-11-04 16:36:57>> #136088
Although, the glossiness is referring to a light source to her right, that's clearly visible..
The shoulders are this high since there should be arms going beneath them, he just decided to only draw the hands, so it works out after all.
It's more that they're way too pointy even lifted up. look how sharp they're raised up Problem is with the lighting is that she shouldn't have a light reflection on the right side (Viewer's left) at all because of the direction she's looking.
Sophia
2016-11-04 16:31:18>> #136087
Floor buffer is referring the random glossiness on her and in previous images he had not used any capitalization at all.
The shoulders STILL bug me as they're way too high and pointy.
Although, the glossiness is referring to a light source to her right, that's clearly visible..
The shoulders are this high since there should be arms going beneath them, he just decided to only draw the hands, so it works out after all.
Zelinko
2016-11-04 16:13:57>> #136086
Why are you being so rude?
That picture looks fine, I demand some moderation for this guy over here, that's going too far imo.
Looks lovely! ^w^
Floor buffer is referring the random glossiness on her and in previous images he had not used any capitalization at all.
The shoulders STILL bug me as they're way too high and pointy.
hypnotic_delphox
2017-09-06 06:59:12>> #197292
kirinnaur
2016-11-07 00:54:03>> #136590
This is just a shot in the dark, but i think thats knuckles. Not amy. even has the weird lowhanging head doolie's knuckle's has, and they are all lighter shades than normal.
It's Amy, I drew knuckles a bit more orange in the comic, while Amy is the pastel pink, also Knuckles has their hair pulled into a pony tail and doesn't have the headband in addition to the headphones.
G-ray-T
2016-11-05 04:59:08>> #136277
This is just a shot in the dark, but i think thats knuckles. Not amy. even has the weird lowhanging head doolie's knuckle's has, and they are all lighter shades than normal.
nah if you look at the parent picture you can see the same girl putting the headphones onto a normal knuckles
SomaX
2016-11-05 04:20:34>> #136275
anonplsno
2016-11-04 01:47:53>> #135997
pokemongirl
2016-11-04 04:11:56>> #136021
Myuk
2016-11-04 01:59:20>> #135999
Nazwa
2016-11-04 00:44:40>> #135986
Black--Wave
2016-11-04 15:22:56>> #136075
I...I don't quite see why this is flagged. If you look at the first comment it's pretty clear.
I'm used to it, which is why I spelled it out in the first post to begin with. Even so... X|
Black--Wave
2016-11-04 15:20:36>> #136074
Mei is most annoying, for those who haven't figured it out yet.
I had a feeling you'd say that. X)
(She's my second favorite~.)
Black--Wave
2016-11-04 15:18:35>> #136073
No, but a black guy shouted "Pills here!" but he was already dressed up as Blade.
Some motherfucker's always tryin'a ice skate uphill...
Black--Wave
2016-11-04 15:15:49>> #136072
:D
Sweet :o I went around a trick-or-treating and going to a costume party while crying and screaming at people if they approach me or shine flashlights at me. Then I rush over to them and start clawing them for an instakill.
I saw someone doing that at an anime convention, it was awesome. =) Unfortunately security didn't find it as amusing. X|
Black--Wave
2016-11-04 15:10:37>> #136071
If you think TRACER is the 2nd most annoying, I'm guessing you haven't played this game enough.
In other words, keep calm and GIT GUD. X)
crazyman
2016-12-03 21:12:06>> #141597
I want to know your thoughts on her once you see her. :3
hot and dangerous, i like her
Roxa
2016-11-10 03:03:19>> #137056
Much thanks!
I want to know your thoughts on her once you see her. :3
pokemongirl
2016-11-05 22:00:03>> #136370
<<gogoanime.io/tales-of-symphonia-episode-1|Here you go!>>
Much thanks!
Apple
2016-11-04 05:58:51>> #136025
Any suggestions for getting into Sheena, like you did for Fuu, Roxa? I know I don't have time for the games at all is there animes, OVAs, or good cut scenes?
<<gogoanime.io/tales-of-symphonia-episode-1|Here you go!>>
pokemongirl
2016-11-04 04:09:48>> #136020
GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASP
<3 <3 <3
And I realise that it's been 3 months since my last Sheena commission. T_T
Any suggestions for getting into Sheena, like you did for Fuu, Roxa? I know I don't have time for the games at all is there animes, OVAs, or good cut scenes?
asaola
2016-11-04 19:00:06>> #136111
Ogodei-Khan
2016-11-04 01:08:22>> #135993
KingofLimbs
2016-11-04 00:49:31>> #135989
I'm not knowledgeable enough to offer criticism, but I really do love the text, and the concept of the creature being referred to as "Home" in her mind. Very good job with the story to go with a good choice in images.
Yeah, I agree. This post makes me long for a home of my own, to join her in the process of constant sex. There should be some category for this incredibly extreme form of hypnosis.
KingofLimbs
2016-11-04 00:49:19>> #135988
I'm not knowledgeable enough to offer criticism, but I really do love the text, and the concept of the creature being referred to as "Home" in her mind. Very good job with the story to go with a good choice in images.
Yeah, I agree. This post makes me long for a home of my own, to join her in the process of constant sex. There should be some category for this incredibly extreme form of hypnosis.
Taryh
2016-11-03 23:56:19>> #135978
edcellwarrior
2017-10-05 06:12:25>> #202547
It looks like she's about to fall asleep.
Looks like the sun is in her eyes
CJO1234
2016-11-03 20:34:33>> #135950