Nerd to bimbo, though super slut doesn't help. I mistranslated it a bit (I'll try and find a clearer wording), but it's pretty clear from context that she went from someone who got into the university of Tokyo in one try to someone who has trouble remembering the words to greet customers.
I getcha. I love the hell outta some nerd to mindless doll tho!
Mindwipe said: I don't think just calling her a bimbo is really enough to call this bimbofication. She isn't actually exhibiting any bimbo traits.
I tried to add a 'bimbo' tag, but one independent of the bimbofication tag doesn't seem to exist.
DisasterDan said: What's ya turn off, super sluts?
Nerd to bimbo, though super slut doesn't help. I mistranslated it a bit (I'll try and find a clearer wording), but it's pretty clear from context that she went from someone who got into the university of Tokyo in one try to someone who has trouble remembering the words to greet customers.
Fable said: >Image looks hot >Curious about text >Start translating, setup seems pretty hot >Two and a half hours of kanji translation later, hit my #1 turnoff
Sorry, going to have to leave this one half-translated.
Fable said: >Image looks hot >Curious about text >Start translating, setup seems pretty hot >Two and a half hours of kanji translation later, hit my #1 turnoff
Sorry, going to have to leave this one half-translated.
Damn... kind of wanted to see whether the dialogue appealed to me or not. Worst case scenario, I just stick with the textless versions of this pic.
Date Nov 3, 2016Userneverm1ndRating QuestionableScore35(vote up)
MindBendingWraith said: Uh, Zko? Unless I'm mistaken, and I missed something, or I'm looking in the wrong spot.... What the hell happened to Skypenotized?! The last post (a cliffhanger, no less) says Three years ago! What gives? Or am I just stupid....
Uh, Zko? Unless I'm mistaken, and I missed something, or I'm looking in the wrong spot.... What the hell happened to Skypenotized?! The last post (a cliffhanger, no less) says Three years ago! What gives? Or am I just stupid....
Napdust said: how do i do that? QwQ im new to this site and dont fully understand it yet udbifubsdf
Haha, don't worry, it's kinda arcane ^^. just create a " artist:YOURNAMEHERE " tag while tagging, same for new character " character:CHARACTERNAME " and copyright/anime name/etc. tags " copyright:NAME ".
BTW, you can click on the "Edit" button right next to the "Quote" button below your own comments, that way you can post reactions to several people in one post instead of having to create 6 of them :3.
Concerning the sequel pic: PLZPLZPLZ uploaaaaaaaaadddddddd bru :D!
Dantus said: If you're the sauce then I think it's time that you get your own artist tag, that way there will be no doubt about it ;-).
Your art is great, love the details and colouring! Alphys really needed to unwind a bit, hehehe. Welcome to the Hub, can't wait to see more from you ;3.
how do i do that? QwQ im new to this site and dont fully understand it yet udbifubsdf
Date Nov 2, 2016UserDisasterDanRating QuestionableScore40(vote up)
DisasterDan said: How the hell did I miss this gem on the first pass? I'll give it a shot, probably. Recently in a rut about not improving a lot in just general art quality. Hopefully this'll get me out.
Splendid! I'm glad I could help get the creative juices flowing!
DisasterDan said: How the hell did I miss this gem on the first pass? I'll give it a shot, probably. Recently in a rut about not improving a lot in just general art quality. Hopefully this'll get me out.
Defcon7 said: On another picture, Pink, Hypnobunbun and I toyed with the idea of being traps with hypno collars. That sound like good material to you?? (I think I'd like to be represented by a trap wearing a shy guy mask. Too shy to show my face...sorry if I sound pushy.)
How the hell did I miss this gem on the first pass? I'll give it a shot, probably. Recently in a rut about not improving a lot in just general art quality. Hopefully this'll get me out.
Defcon7 said: On another picture, Pink, Hypnobunbun and I toyed with the idea of being traps with hypno collars. That sound like good material to you?? (I think I'd like to be represented by a trap wearing a shy guy mask. Too shy to show my face...sorry if I sound pushy.)
Flagged post: no visible Mc, just a girl in a dress
Certain housewife posts are in fact permitted to the site, as they do involve elements of MC/brainwashing to an extent. I don't know if these flags were done out of spite, but as I've previously stated, we are trying to deal with a loophole in the rules. Nothing more, nothing less.
Well, the thing about my first fic? I did it over 12 years ago. Since then, I've improved in writing, both proof-reading/editing and actually writing and structuring the story/characters/details. I won't say I don't need a good editor, but I've come a long way.
I'd imagine it's the same for you. ^^
9 years ago, But I still work with my editor. We make a great team and the stories are way better with help.
Imasuky said: I thankfully have a good editor who helped keep me in line with it,=.
Hehe~
Well, the thing about my first fic? I did it over 12 years ago. Since then, I've improved in writing, both proof-reading/editing and actually writing and structuring the story/characters/details. I won't say I don't need a good editor, but I've come a long way.
I'd imagine it's the same for you. ^^
Date Nov 2, 2016UserSleepyhead97Rating SafeScore21(vote up)
HypnoMangaEditor said: So this are the last 3 Pages. Yesterday I released a little later, so today I am a little bit earlier. I already released the Manga on exhentai, but it might take a couple of minutes till it is available to everyone. Once it is visible, I will add it as source to all the pictures in the pool.
The exhentai/e-hentai gallery is actually the better version. Here are the improvements i made to the version i posted here:
- Added a Translators note on first page to explain what "Aniki" means, to avoid confusion that I have seen in the comments on this page - Improved Contractions. I reworked them on every page as per Feedback - Pages 1-3 had a different font size. This was changed to bring it in line with the rest of the translation
Thanks everyone for giving feedback and making the final exhentai release a better version.
Wow, so my favorite manipper is also the one who translated my favorite hentai? Very cool
lindalines
2016-11-03 12:29:43>> #135908
DisasterDan
2016-11-03 05:17:34>> #135887
Nerd to bimbo, though super slut doesn't help. I mistranslated it a bit (I'll try and find a clearer wording), but it's pretty clear from context that she went from someone who got into the university of Tokyo in one try to someone who has trouble remembering the words to greet customers.
I getcha. I love the hell outta some nerd to mindless doll tho!
Fable
2016-11-03 05:03:48>> #135886
I don't think just calling her a bimbo is really enough to call this bimbofication. She isn't actually exhibiting any bimbo traits.
I tried to add a 'bimbo' tag, but one independent of the bimbofication tag doesn't seem to exist.
What's ya turn off, super sluts?
Nerd to bimbo, though super slut doesn't help. I mistranslated it a bit (I'll try and find a clearer wording), but it's pretty clear from context that she went from someone who got into the university of Tokyo in one try to someone who has trouble remembering the words to greet customers.
DisasterDan
2016-11-03 04:01:45>> #135879
>Image looks hot
>Curious about text
>Start translating, setup seems pretty hot
>Two and a half hours of kanji translation later, hit my #1 turnoff
Sorry, going to have to leave this one half-translated.
What's ya turn off, super sluts?
DrgnmastrAlex
2016-11-03 03:33:01>> #135875
>Image looks hot
>Curious about text
>Start translating, setup seems pretty hot
>Two and a half hours of kanji translation later, hit my #1 turnoff
Sorry, going to have to leave this one half-translated.
Damn... kind of wanted to see whether the dialogue appealed to me or not. Worst case scenario, I just stick with the textless versions of this pic.
Systemfailure99
2016-11-03 22:12:26>> #135968
MindMasher
2016-11-03 02:38:57>> #135867
MindBendingWraith
2016-11-20 02:27:40>> #138895
Mindwipe
2016-11-18 06:06:58>> #138628
Uh, Zko? Unless I'm mistaken, and I missed something, or I'm looking in the wrong spot.... What the hell happened to Skypenotized?! The last post (a cliffhanger, no less) says Three years ago! What gives? Or am I just stupid....
The last post was 5 months ago (if you don't count the character sheets) hypnohub.net/pool/show/150
MindBendingWraith
2016-11-18 05:57:44>> #138625
rocketracer294
2016-11-04 06:40:21>> #136035
liquidhobo
2016-11-04 00:53:17>> #135990
Dantus
2016-11-04 12:19:20>> #136054
how do i do that? QwQ im new to this site and dont fully understand it yet udbifubsdf
Haha, don't worry, it's kinda arcane ^^. just create a " artist:YOURNAMEHERE " tag while tagging, same for new character " character:CHARACTERNAME " and copyright/anime name/etc. tags " copyright:NAME ".
BTW, you can click on the "Edit" button right next to the "Quote" button below your own comments, that way you can post reactions to several people in one post instead of having to create 6 of them :3.
Concerning the sequel pic: PLZPLZPLZ uploaaaaaaaaadddddddd bru :D!
CranialHeartache
2016-11-04 07:38:32>> #136041
there is actually!! i just have to post it hahah
Looking forward to it.
SupremacySun
2016-11-04 00:56:57>> #135992
how do i do that? QwQ im new to this site
Helluva good start, welcome!
Succubunny
2016-11-03 20:55:50>> #135957
there is actually!! i just have to post it hahah
Post iiiiit! I wanna see! This was already so cute and hot. Silly little Alphys clearly needs some time to stop overthinking things so badly. ;3
Seriously the art is great and loving the expression. I look forward to more. ^-^
P.S. Checking out your Deviant art I have found... your art is super cute... also weird. In an awesome way. I like your stuff! :D
Napdust
2016-11-03 17:21:56>> #135928
If you're the sauce then I think it's time that you get your own artist tag, that way there will be no doubt about it ;-).
Your art is great, love the details and colouring! Alphys really needed to unwind a bit, hehehe. Welcome to the Hub, can't wait to see more from you ;3.
how do i do that? QwQ im new to this site and dont fully understand it yet udbifubsdf
Defcon7
2016-11-04 23:34:24>> #136221
How the hell did I miss this gem on the first pass? I'll give it a shot, probably. Recently in a rut about not improving a lot in just general art quality. Hopefully this'll get me out.
Splendid! I'm glad I could help get the creative juices flowing!
Mm...juices...
Hypnobunbun
2016-11-04 22:29:16>> #136190
How the hell did I miss this gem on the first pass? I'll give it a shot, probably. Recently in a rut about not improving a lot in just general art quality. Hopefully this'll get me out.
Please do! That'll make my month!
DisasterDan
2016-11-04 22:19:41>> #136183
On another picture, Pink, Hypnobunbun and I toyed with the idea of being traps with hypno collars. That sound like good material to you?? (I think I'd like to be represented by a trap wearing a shy guy mask. Too shy to show my face...sorry if I sound pushy.)
How the hell did I miss this gem on the first pass? I'll give it a shot, probably. Recently in a rut about not improving a lot in just general art quality. Hopefully this'll get me out.
Hypnobunbun
2016-11-04 20:11:46>> #136126
On another picture, Pink, Hypnobunbun and I toyed with the idea of being traps with hypno collars. That sound like good material to you?? (I think I'd like to be represented by a trap wearing a shy guy mask. Too shy to show my face...sorry if I sound pushy.)
^ fuck yes~
crazyman
2016-11-03 04:12:03>> #135883
No, stop! Taking off too many clothes makes your soul too powerful!
Well, I do have two.
RedCollarBlackCollar
2017-06-17 19:50:17>> #182366
no visible Mc, just a girl in a dress
Certain housewife posts are in fact permitted to the site, as they do involve elements of MC/brainwashing to an extent. I don't know if these flags were done out of spite, but as I've previously stated, we are trying to deal with a loophole in the rules. Nothing more, nothing less.
EdenSnake
2017-04-14 20:53:19>> #168277
Kansattica
2016-11-03 07:32:08>> #135899
You want it?
www.youtube.com/watch?v=5PJddmfesaA
Man, that is a blast from the past.
JoanieSappho
2016-11-03 03:15:06>> #135871
(Insert obligatory "Crimson loves housewife related hypno art" comment and/or fangirl squealing here)
(Insert obligatory "Joanie agrees wholeheartedly with this" comment)
Tyrranus
2016-11-02 23:17:05>> #135852
pokemongirl
2016-11-03 02:19:03>> #135863
DrgnmastrAlex
2016-11-03 00:42:47>> #135856
DrgnmastrAlex
2016-11-02 23:15:50>> #135851
9 years ago, But I still work with my editor. We make a great team and the stories are way better with help.
That's good to hear. ^^
Imasuky
2016-11-02 22:39:06>> #135848
Hehe~
Well, the thing about my first fic? I did it over 12 years ago. Since then, I've improved in writing, both proof-reading/editing and actually writing and structuring the story/characters/details. I won't say I don't need a good editor, but I've come a long way.
I'd imagine it's the same for you. ^^
9 years ago, But I still work with my editor. We make a great team and the stories are way better with help.
DrgnmastrAlex
2016-11-02 22:34:46>> #135845
I thankfully have a good editor who helped keep me in line with it,=.
Hehe~
Well, the thing about my first fic? I did it over 12 years ago. Since then, I've improved in writing, both proof-reading/editing and actually writing and structuring the story/characters/details. I won't say I don't need a good editor, but I've come a long way.
I'd imagine it's the same for you. ^^
twilightL
2016-11-03 13:41:23>> #135911
Sleepyhead97
2016-11-02 20:58:45>> #135795
what does foo fighters stand even do?
She can change her hand into a gun.
Pinkanator
2016-11-02 20:58:25>> #135793
Brain freeze?
<<www.youtube.com/watch?v=I3vBMmcXSMw|The endless debate>>
Dr_Mabuse
2016-11-02 20:56:06>> #135791
unfortunatly you cant fap to this as foo fighters body is a reanimated corpse, possessed by stand possessing plankton
I'm a grown-ass man and I can fap to... whatever I want!
Also, bold is what Foo Fighters stand actually does. You answered your own question...
SupremacySun
2016-11-02 20:50:43>> #135790
cypress_z
2016-11-02 17:56:27>> #135768
Mattlau04
2020-05-01 17:29:40>> #367074
So this are the last 3 Pages. Yesterday I released a little later, so today I am a little bit earlier. I already released the Manga on exhentai, but it might take a couple of minutes till it is available to everyone. Once it is visible, I will add it as source to all the pictures in the pool.
The exhentai/e-hentai gallery is actually the better version. Here are the improvements i made to the version i posted here:
- Added a Translators note on first page to explain what "Aniki" means, to avoid confusion that I have seen in the comments on this page
- Improved Contractions. I reworked them on every page as per Feedback
- Pages 1-3 had a different font size. This was changed to bring it in line with the rest of the translation
Thanks everyone for giving feedback and making the final exhentai release a better version.
Wow, so my favorite manipper is also the one who translated my favorite hentai?
Very cool
rocketracer294
2016-11-03 06:19:05>> #135893
Nightmare
2016-11-02 22:25:48>> #135842
slipslideman
2016-11-02 20:59:37>> #135796
pokemongirl
2016-11-02 20:44:31>> #135789