Posted on 2020-09-14 03:41:31
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Ah, Shuchiin Academy. So full of rich, stuck up boys and girls. While noble for a few, to others, such as myself, man were they annoying beyond belief. But that’s not the main issue here. And it certainly helps that I had a plan on running this school one day. And the best way to get started on that was to use my power from the Psychology Club, and using a close and easy girl to sway, Chika Fujiwara. The Secretary of the Student Council. Soon to be my slave.


Chika was a nice, sweet girl. But damn was she also annoying as hell. But again, cute and a good way to get into power. And she loved to be involved in things. So, this would be a prime opportunity.


I had checked out to see the Student Council schedule. Prez and VP would be out due to other commitments. Like hell Ishigami would stay in a room with just Chika. So, I had my plan, and I decided to enact it and fast. Once school was done for the day, I headed on up to the Student Council room and knocked on the door.


“Come in!” I heard a voice call out. I took a deep breath and opened the door. I saw her sitting at the president’s desk. To be expected. Time to knock this little lady down a peg or two…or three. I walked up to the desk and bowed a little.


“Ms. Fujiwara. It is an honor to meet you.” I say very formally. Praise was a great way to get her attention.


“Ah yes. What can I do for you?” She asked, now engaged due to the praise.


“I have to ask you something. I am a member of the psychology club, we need funding. And we need you to get the word out about our club. We are dying and it will be most helpful if you could support us.” I said all while bowing to her. Come on, play into the ego I know you have.


Chika tapped her finger to her chin and smiled a bit. “I would love to!” She said as she sprung out of her sea. Perfect. “What does the psychology club even do. I don’t remember filing a report on it after the elections?” She asked as she walked around the desk to stand beside me.


So, I took my 5 yen coin and dangled it before her. It was time. She locked eyes with it instantly as it spun around a little. Hell, I don’t think outside of a handful of words I said anything to her. I just let Chika get wrapped around my thumb like a good little girl should. After a couple of minutes of dangling that coin in front of her face, I dropped it and moved my hand over her eyes and closed them.


Chika moved forward a little and leaned down and fell into my arms. I laughed a little as I looked down at her stiff body, something I had decided.


“Now then, it is time for you to get ready to obey, right?” I ask with a smirk.


“Yes…Master. I am ready to obey.” She said a little robotically with a bit of a smile. I pulled her up and snapped my fingers in front of her face.


“Happy face first,” I said to her as a wide smile came across Chika’s face. I smirked next. It was time for phase 2.

Posted on 2020-09-14 05:16:21
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Cute, but the eye blank doesnt match the normal eye color, and your story doesnt feel like it matches either

Posted on 2020-09-14 13:08:29
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Just to clarify, the eyes were done that way on purpose, so you don't need to upload your edit

Posted on 2020-09-14 18:24:49
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Eyes doesn't become empty, spiral or kaa while hypnotized, but I don't see people complaining it xD.

Change eye's color is also a hypnotic effect that people tends to use, I don't see anything wrong with it.

Posted on 2020-09-15 10:34:29
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My theory is that if eyes keep color, it may just be absent-mindedness, consciousness sleeping, shock and all, while getting a different color mean that it's no longer just hypnotism, but brainwashing instead.
Was that the objective?