bottomless breasts caption elfen_lied empty_eyes femdom hypnotic_accessory long_hair looking_at_viewer lucy_(elfen_lied) male_pov malesub manip nude pov pov_sub red_eyes red_hair small_breasts text thekinkyfinn_(manipper) topless

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TheKinkyFinn
>> #3616
Posted on 2013-10-28 10:09:07
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So I was bored this weekend and found some neat images on gelbooru. While I'm usually not a fan of femdom, I just found that to be the perfect domface. For the record, I'm a bit troubled that I couldn't really write Lucy in character, but then again, 'You saw a beautiful, naked woman on top of you, and then you were dead' wouldn't make for much of a text, now would it? And I didn't tag it empty eyes simply because that's how her eyes often look, so it's not really implying any MC on her.

Corey
>> #3631
Posted on 2013-10-28 19:19:56
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Elfen Lied FTW!
..... I really should draw Lucy.
And her controlling someone wouldn't be too far off, really. She'd scare them into submission!
**shudders**
Lucy is a scary bitch.

Lost+Name
>> #3632
Posted on 2013-10-28 19:46:11
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So non-canon text manips are becoming a big thing now, eh? Great... that's great... I love pretending that characters I know are completely different characters with completely different personalities that just happen to look EXACTLY like the characters I know...

Well whatever... fantasy is fantasy I guess... and in the world of hentai all things are more or less headcanon...

Great manip... a little bland with just the black text on a white background but other than that I like it.

Vanndril
>> #3633
Posted on 2013-10-28 20:49:53
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Lost+Name said:
So non-canon text manips are becoming a big thing now, eh?


Now? They've been a thing as long as text manips have been a thing.

Besides, in this case...

TheKinkyFinn said:
'You saw a beautiful, naked woman on top of you, and then you were dead' wouldn't make for much of a text, now would it?



Lost+Name
>> #3637
Posted on 2013-10-28 20:58:52
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Vanndril said:

Besides, in this case...

TheKinkyFinn said:
'You saw a beautiful, naked woman on top of you, and then you were dead' wouldn't make for much of a text, now would it?



True, but if that's all they needed it didn't really have to be Lucy it could have just been any random women without a series or back story on top. There's plenty of them throughout the internet.

Vanndril
>> #3639
Posted on 2013-10-28 21:09:38
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Lost+Name said:
True, but if that's all they needed it didn't really have to be Lucy it could have just been any random women without a series or back story on top. There's plenty of them throughout the internet.

Perhaps, but then they'd not have been able to manip this image. I'm sure it was this image in particular that they wanted to manip. Most people don't write stories for manips and then find the image. Usually, it's the other way around.

TheKinkyFinn
>> #3640
Posted on 2013-10-28 21:11:11
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I appreciate the feedback Lost+Name, and I'll promise to try bring out the characters more in some future texts.

And, to justify the inevitable fuckup that these texts will no doubt end up as; well, most of these characters never to my knowledge end up in anything resembling an erotic MC situation in canon, so some improv will be required anyway, meaning it's up to my writing skills. *Insert ominous music foretelling great tragedy in the form of continued maiming of the characters you know*

Vanndril
>> #3643
Posted on 2013-10-28 21:17:10
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TheKinkyFinn said:
And, to justify the inevitable fuckup that these texts will no doubt end up as; well, most of these characters never to my knowledge end up in anything resembling an erotic MC situation in canon, so some improv will be required anyway, meaning it's up to my writing skills. *Insert ominous music foretelling great tragedy in the form of continued maiming of the characters you know*

Mostly off topic, but worth mentioning: I find the hardest part of writing dialogue with numerous characters involved is making the dialogue for each character have different personalities. When I write, I trend toward a specific personality type; probably because that type is related to how I think. I'm sure I'm not the only one. It can be really hard. It's one of the areas I'm struggling in, now, for a long-term pet project I'm making (a scripted RPG in RPG Maker VX Ace - unrelated to this fetish, though).

What you said just made me think of that.

skullman2033
>> #58174
Posted on 2015-05-28 18:41:41
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Well atleast theres no murder

pokefannafekop
>> #62597
Posted on 2015-07-08 09:39:35
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skullman2033 said:
Well atleast theres no murder


Yep, definitely material related to Elfen Lied with that qualifier.

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