barefoot blush breasts caption caption_only code_geass feet femsub kallen_stadtfeld large_breasts manip nalak_(manipper) panties red_hair short_hair sweat text underwear

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Zelinko
>> #3890
Posted on 2013-11-02 02:15:05
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Shift the font to the right a little. It's too far left aligned and thus it looks rather strange on the third paragraph. Effectively shifting it over by say two hits of the spacebar will make it much easier to read. Also more spacing between the spoken lines and the thought lines. Consider dropping a full line space there.

Systemfailure99
>> #114869
Posted on 2016-07-18 00:59:26
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Really like this. The text could be better and show the whole childish Kallen more, but the picture is really good and the expression is perfect

april
>> #449517
Posted on 2021-12-15 12:12:19
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Transcript:
Now then what has Mr. Frog taught you today? Mr. Frog taught me that I am a slave and that as a slave my purpose is to serve my master. Then Mr. Frog was teaching me the proper dress for slaves and after that he was going to teach me who my master was.
I see then I shall return later when your lessons are finished to see how well you've learned them. Ok the mental age regression is still there but I think otherwise the mind control plush works wonderfully. The targets rarely expect it and the mental age regression wears off after a short time period leaving a perfectly obedient slave. Right time to go see if I can't market these things.

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