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  • Id: 10435
  • Posted: 2013-11-01 08:47:06
    by Reversed1
  • Size: 1304x965
  • Rating: Questionable
  • Score: 93 (vote up)
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Mindwipe
>> #3855
Posted on 2013-11-01 09:13:18
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It's kind of intriguing how different people see different potential in a pic. Like, I can't see femdom in this pic. Her expression just screams sub to me. But, obviously, someone saw it differently.
Fossilbrand
>> #3863
Posted on 2013-11-01 15:04:15
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There's a lot of things about this. Pic to poit out.

1. Isn't this the chick from Ben-To?
2. I agree with Mindwipe somewhat. She does have her arms crossed but it doesn't seem to be in an angry way. So it seems dom but if you take a look at the body language, it does seem more sub.
3. Just for critiquing purposes, I don't think the text makes sense. If you're mad then kick them out. If you play it off as mad then hypnotize them then wouldn't you want to teach them a lesson? I may be reading to much into this but that's my take.
4. I like the eyes.
Toxic_Thunder
>> #3870
Posted on 2013-11-01 17:29:33
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1. Yes.
edcellwarrior
>> #3872
Posted on 2013-11-01 20:01:12
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I have to agree with Mindwipe and Fossilbrand on this. While the text itself is very well done, it doesn't seem to match the picture.
Reccy
>> #3875
Posted on 2013-11-02 00:09:16
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...Yeah that pic is femsub. Definitely femsub.
Sorry, but it kills the mood when the picture completely contradicts the text.
The text is nice though, just needs a new pic!
Vanndril
>> #3877
Posted on 2013-11-02 00:35:12
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I dunno. I can totally imagine that expression as a sort of semi-annoyed dom. Reading it in a softer voice does help.

That said, I feel the tone of the dialogue is too forceful for what she looks like, but that's just me nitpicking.

Also, nice spirals. :)
Reversed1
>> #3891
Posted on 2013-11-02 03:11:23
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I was asked to make it a femdom manip by request of Monochrome.
Still, I thank you all for the advice you're giving me. Each criticism helps me grow and improve!
The compliments are nice too! (IE: text, spirals, eyes)

Fossilbrand
>> #3895
Posted on 2013-11-02 03:33:20
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Well we can all give our opinion of whether its a good job but its no good if you don't have any backup information as to why it's good. That's the type of critisism I always try to give. Other than sexy critique shows. People love sexy critique shows.
BowserCommunist
>> #3899
Posted on 2013-11-02 04:59:47
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I for one don't give a damn either way. It's sexy and I can fap to it. End of story
AC
>> #3903
Posted on 2013-11-02 06:22:22
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I agree with the assertion that she just looks annoyed.
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