So, fun fact: in order to make the last line fit the parameters of the manip, I had to use font size 36 instead of size 40 like the rest of the thing. I was originally annoyed as SHIT, but then I felt that it sorta fit thematically, what with the ending being pretty inconclusive and both parties feeling reduced in a way.
I also like to think that this is a girl that merely happens to resemble Asuka. Asuka damsel-in-distressed HARD after getting owned by Manjoume and then Saiou in the anime, and pretty much had to be saved. I like to think that this girl would be no damsel, even if she's lost her will to the boy in the narration. I therefore left her unnamed within the manip intentionally. I briefly considered the name Djinni but decided against it as well. Maybe if I do any more with this idea, but I'd need to find more good Asuka art before I commit.
Ooh! I like this. I really like your writing style, glad to see more femsub! I'd love to see more of this, interested to see what direction it goes if continued. Tricking her into giving up control of those other aspects, maybe even some romance to capture emotion the old-fashioned way...
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I also like to think that this is a girl that merely happens to resemble Asuka. Asuka damsel-in-distressed HARD after getting owned by Manjoume and then Saiou in the anime, and pretty much had to be saved. I like to think that this girl would be no damsel, even if she's lost her will to the boy in the narration. I therefore left her unnamed within the manip intentionally. I briefly considered the name Djinni but decided against it as well. Maybe if I do any more with this idea, but I'd need to find more good Asuka art before I commit.
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