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Zebulon_Pike
>> #394190
Posted on 2020-11-12 02:47:34
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A picture i've been fairly obsessed with for a while and finally got around to manipping. it *sucked*, but i am (almost) very happy with the end result. this is the smaller file, and the most readable version (i spent a long time fiddling with the colors of the text throughout the caption, and i wanted that to show up, but i *also* wanted a white background, and neither the pink nor the gradients worked very well, so i just used this but the borders are off aaaaaAAHHHH).

I would appreciate advice on the artist tag! i do have their Twitter handle, but i'm not sure if I need to create a new tag or not, on account that I don't know Japanese.

Also, please feel free to leave feedback! this one was closer to my actual writing so i would love some constructive criticism. it ended up being nearly 1300 words, which I know is... quite a lot for a caption!

though granted, something like fully a fourth of the word count is just *soft warm pretty pink* over and over again.

Not that I imagine any of you mind after reading~. Mash certainly doesn't~.
CoolHypno
>> #394192
Posted on 2020-11-12 03:08:46
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This is fantastic! Great job!
Sleepy_Moth
>> #394215
Posted on 2020-11-12 05:52:27
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I think you did fantastic with the build up through color! Like as you go down the left side, you notice the slight shift in the hues, so things are getting a little steamy, but that right one getting brighter and brighter pink? I'm a sucker for that shit! It's some good hard work you got here!

Also on the writing, I really like your use of mantras as the sub is slowly going under. It builds well, espically when a dom gets that satisfaction of that mantra digging into their subject's head, finally come out of their mouth. Some good shit there
Abigal
>> #394232
Posted on 2020-11-12 08:48:48
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Great!
IMHO, this manip needs "unaware" tag.
Zebulon_Pike
>> #394236
Posted on 2020-11-12 10:58:18
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CoolHypno said:
This is fantastic! Great job!

<3
Sleepy_Moth said:
I think you did fantastic with the build up through color! Like as you go down the left side, you notice the slight shift in the hues, so things are getting a little steamy, but that right one getting brighter and brighter pink? I'm a sucker for that shit! It's some good hard work you got here!

Also on the writing, I really like your use of mantras as the sub is slowly going under. It builds well, espically when a dom gets that satisfaction of that mantra digging into their subject's head, finally come out of their mouth. Some good shit there


That's awesome! I'm really glad to hear that everything I wanted to put in there came across, tysm!

Abigal said:
IMHO, this manip needs "unaware" tag.


Added!
tipoima
>> #395300
Posted on 2020-11-20 21:40:47
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We need a sequel where Gudako shows why you don't try to steal a kouhai from someone who has Command Spells over you. Trying to find a picture of Medb wearing a sweater like this would probably be hard tho. Although using Da Vinci certified tech is always an option as well.
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