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richardjoke
>> #402322
Posted on 2021-01-13 23:01:21
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Meanwhile, the handful of people that overheard you two are wondering what the fuck they just heard...

My first attempt at being more directly hypnotic in my writing! I know it's not the best, but I'm quite happy with it! Hope you all enjoy!

alt117
>> #402343
Posted on 2021-01-14 01:38:56
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I love the idea of being hypnotically compelled to cum in my pants

thedragontamer1
>> #402381
Posted on 2021-01-14 03:50:11
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alt117 said:
I love the idea of being hypnotically compelled to cum in my pants


Personally, I prefer it more in a non-consensual context. As a sort of threat or a show of dominance. That said, never sad to see more consensual stuff here.

Zebulon_Pike
>> #402423
Posted on 2021-01-14 06:38:26
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Great pic and excellent writing! The two complement each other really nicely, I love how simple it is, and I really like the voice that the woman has. Great manip!

thedragontamer1 said:
That said, never sad to see more consensual stuff here.


...my one quibble might be that I'm not *entirely* sure how this is consensual? I guess it's just that she's using hypno to make him feel a certain sensation, not actually changing his mind or dropping him into trance? I'm not quite sure. very minor thing, though, nothing to do with my enjoyment of the manip lol

richardjoke
>> #402429
Posted on 2021-01-14 08:26:57
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thedragontamer1 said:
Personally, I prefer it more in a non-consensual context.


Trust me, I do too! But 1) I am a sucker for more wholesome stuff, even if this isn't quite "wholesome" per se. And 2) since I'm terribly new to writing more directly hypnotic stuff, I want to get used to it before I go for the stuff where that's the center of attention. At least here, it's not as bad since it's in the context of a girlfriend helping her boyfriend, but imo it needs to be a bit better if it was more like a stranger seducing a stranger.

I know you weren't complaining or anything, I just wanted to note all that. Eventually, I do want to do some lewder stuffs, but I also want to write full stories! And God knows that's gonna be a while...

Mr7
>> #402593
Posted on 2021-01-15 18:48:27
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alt117 said:
I love the idea of being hypnotically compelled to cum in my pants


same

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