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Underscore
>> #6735
Posted on 2013-12-29 13:52:13
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Dont even know if this should be allowed to pass the quality bar, but I would like it if someone else could be the judge of that because I have worked to much on this and can only see the flaws With it at this point...
Julia
>> #6739
Posted on 2013-12-29 17:56:16
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looks great to me
Underscore
>> #6740
Posted on 2013-12-29 19:07:42
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Julia said:
looks great to me

Thank you
Grim
>> #6836
Posted on 2013-12-30 15:07:39
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Underscore said:
Dont even know if this should be allowed to pass the quality bar, but I would like it if someone else could be the judge of that because I have worked to much on this and can only see the flaws With it at this point...


there's a quality bar?
Underscore
>> #6837
Posted on 2013-12-30 15:18:30
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Grim said:
there's a quality bar?

Well, yes sorta, to prevent People from using 2 minutes in paint making something and then uploading it.
Not very strict rule, most stuff is accepted which is why I asked the question, does people think this manip is acceptable?
petal
>> #6838
Posted on 2013-12-30 16:57:56
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There's some distortion around the eyebrows on the left girl, but it's not bad, and you did a good job getting rid of the tears on the right girl's face. Black-haired girl's eyebrows also look great--I didn't notice they were changed until I finished writing this post! While I wouldn't think that the glowing eyes took very long to do (no offense), they look just fine to me. Right girl's eyeglow is a little flat, but her eye had no detail in the original anyways. It would have been nice if you preserved the shape of the right girl's eye a little better, but it looks okay and again, it wasn't very detailed in the original anyways. I'd say that the most serious issue is the eyebrow distortion, since it's tricky to redraw hair without already being an artist, but I honestly think it could pass as jpeg artifacts if someone isn't looking for problems.

Of course, whether something stays or goes is certainly not my decision, so that's just my two cents.
Underscore
>> #6839
Posted on 2013-12-30 17:48:17
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petal said:
There's some distortion around the eyebrows on the left girl, but it's not bad, and you did a good job getting rid of the tears on the right girl's face. Black-haired girl's eyebrows also look great--I didn't notice they were changed until I finished writing this post! While I wouldn't think that the glowing eyes took very long to do (no offense), they look just fine to me. Right girl's eyeglow is a little flat, but her eye had no detail in the original anyways. It would have been nice if you preserved the shape of the right girl's eye a little better, but it looks okay and again, it wasn't very detailed in the original anyways. I'd say that the most serious issue is the eyebrow distortion, since it's tricky to redraw hair without already being an artist, but I honestly think it could pass as jpeg artifacts if someone isn't looking for problems.

Of course, whether something stays or goes is certainly not my decision, so that's just my two cents.

Thank you very much for the detailed feedback :D If I do more manips where I redo/move eyebrows I will be sure too pay extra atention to it aswell as trying to preserve eye shapes aswell as trying to keep the eyes from getting flat.

Again, thank you for the feedback, now I know what to try and improve
HypnoMangaEditor
>> #6841
Posted on 2013-12-30 18:33:31
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Grim said:
there's a quality bar?


It's pretty low these days, though I don't want to shit on people that take their time to make something for the community, because I know how I started and looking back at some of my old images I now can see how aweful they were.

Most images go the easy way by adding a purple glow, using one solid color for the eyes or making a spiral instead of actually taking the effort to edit decent looking empty eyes. :(

I would have added some kind of chant, the victim acknowledging the command and then some sfx symbol (for flavor in japanese) that she is taking a dump right now. For the Text I would use the color of their hair with white background or white with the color of their hair as background (whichever looks best). You could also add some simple chatter text to the 2 observing girls.
Underscore
>> #6842
Posted on 2013-12-30 18:55:40
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HypnoMangaEditor said:
It's pretty low these days, though I don't want to shit on people that take their time to make something for the community, because I know how I started and looking back at some of my old images I now can see how aweful they were.

Most images go the easy way by adding a purple glow, using one solid color for the eyes or making a spiral instead of actually taking the effort to edit decent looking empty eyes. :(

I would have added some kind of chant, the victim acknowledging the command and then some sfx symbol (for flavor in japanese) that she is taking a dump right now. For the Text I would use the color of their hair with white background or white with the color of their hair as background (whichever looks best). You could also add some simple chatter text to the 2 observing girls.

Yeah, after my last atempt With text I have been alittle affraid of using text again since it turned out so horrible and I haven't really gotten around to figure out how to fix it.

As for the eyes it was hard to do anything but the glow since the original was allready compleetly empty with the exeption of the tears and since I am an anti-artist (A person that cant draw something nice looking to save my life) there wasen't much else to do because I do prefere the empty-eyes sulution like in my other manips.

Speaking of my other manips, does anyone know if it is ok if I put in my manipper tag in the pictures transfered here from the old site?

Anyways thank you for Your feedback, gonna sound really stupid here but you are one of my favorite manippers and a sort of inspiration for me. Basically, you are my hero and one day I wish that I can make manips at the same level as yours :D
HypnoMangaEditor
>> #6843
Posted on 2013-12-30 19:23:12
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You should take a look at the Yui Age Regression Manips I did, especially this one hypnohub.net/post/show/11...-blush-bottomless-comic-d. The blue and pink text was added by me and you can use that method to add text almost anywhere and it can be read without problems. It's also quite easy to do and if positioned correctly, does not obstruct the picture.
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