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>> #414071
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>> #414074
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For a starter, it's an alright work. I'd say to improve the physical aspect of the animation, but at the same time I can't help but smile over how stiff Chloe is from being knocked over like that. :3
Gotta agree. Any and all artistic work, no matter how many nipples present, should be celebrated. The fact that you were able to sit down and make this is an accomplishment, just like every other piece on the hub. Also, every piece of art can also be improved, so don't be hard on yourself.
I would say if you're looking for improvement, the major thing you should look at are the smaller details to their animation. They're both stiff (Even though only Chloe should be). For example, when Max's arm rises, her hand stays at the exact same angle. Her goal is to push Chloe. When someone goes to grab/touch/push something, their arm will move but their hand will remain facing towards the object, but that doesn't happen here. The whole arm raises at once, making it look like an animatronic.
I'm not a professional animator, I'm some horny idiot on a porn site, but I think a great first step in learning the process would be to animate people doing VERY basic movements. Opening a door, looking around, and writing with a pencil are great basic moments to try. Look up videos of people doing said action and try to notice all the small things they do.
Again, take what I say with a grain of salt. The fact that you want to animate is great! And the fact that you made something is even better! So congrats on your first contribution to the hub, and I hope we can see you improve. :)
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I don't know much about 3D animation, but something I do notice can be improved is the interaction between the hand and the body. It might need more contact, which would probably squash her shoulder a little despite her being immobilized. The hair would also follow gravity unless, you were going for petrified effect.
Again, I'm not an expert, but that's what I could spot, so hope it helps.
Also, I like the scenario. :3
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