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BugmenotEncore
>> #426079
Posted on 2021-06-24 05:14:34
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Hell-looooo~ I think this one turned out the best thus far! Don't you, lovelies~?

It won't be long now.

Edit: I fixed a few typos that bothered perfectionist li'l me. I won't reupload it just for that, but you can check out the new version here: cdn.discordapp.com/attach...402661908/carenmanip4.png

NuRho
>> #426082
Posted on 2021-06-24 06:25:18
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Can someone clarify what element makes this "hypnotised hypnotist", because I'm a little lost on that.

AnonymousBrainwash
>> #426083
Posted on 2021-06-24 06:52:54
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NuRho said:
Can someone clarify what element makes this "hypnotised hypnotist", because I'm a little lost on that.



Okay my Fate knowledge is kind of crap but here’s my guess. The god which possesses Caren is magnifying the Master’s lust, this leads the Master to take more actions that lead to Caren becoming more possessed/controlled by the god in question. So to simplify god controls Master to control Caren

BugmenotEncore
>> #426087
Posted on 2021-06-24 07:52:39
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NuRho said:
Can someone clarify what element makes this "hypnotised hypnotist", because I'm a little lost on that.



AnonymousBrainwash said:
The god which possesses Caren is magnifying the Master’s lust, this leads the Master to take more actions that lead to Caren becoming more possessed/controlled by the god in question.


It's pretty much that, but I'll give some more context here.

In the beginning, the Researcher (who is not Caren's Master - they're a random Chaldea employee) is dry, intellectual, and a huge dork. Their primary interest was seeing what would happen, like any scientist who sees something unusual related to their field of work.

A few weeks later, they are manipulating Chaldea, a clandestine organization dedicated to protecting humanity from anomalous events...by summoning legendary figures across spacetime, and have them punch the anomalies in the face? Basically the SCP Foundation, but with more Japan.

How does the protag go from dork to chess master? Simply, it wasn't entirely their idea.

Eros - who was pulling every lever he could in the brain of every person Caren met at that point - managed to twist that curiosity into something... much more interesting~ And he worked his way up from there.

Eros didn't start out with a plan. He is just a Greek god of sex(read: A sex pest among sex pests), and wanted to have fun while he was locked inside a prude nun. But in doing so, he found an ambitious, smart person who instantly came up with a plan to help him. It worked out for him quite nicely.

By the events of this post, the Researcher is..well, they're still a dork(I mean, who says "wicked" anymore? This isn't the fifties), but they are a suave and savvy dork who knows how to play games.

BugmenotEncore
>> #426088
Posted on 2021-06-24 08:12:01
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So, funny story. I've been sharing these manips with my S.O. as I write them.
When I gave her this one, something clicked for her, because she asked 'Wait. You make these?'
Apparently she missed the memo until then.

It's nice to know she didn't say she liked them just because she likes me.

cdyoung
>> #426094
Posted on 2021-06-24 08:31:10
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BugmenotEncore said:
It's pretty much that, but I'll give some more context here.

In the beginning, the Researcher (who is not Caren's Master - they're a random Chaldea employee) is dry, intellectual, and a huge dork. Their primary interest was seeing what would happen, like any scientist who sees something unusual related to their field of work.

A few weeks later, they are manipulating Chaldea, a clandestine organization dedicated to protecting humanity from anomalous events...by summoning legendary figures across spacetime, and have them punch the anomalies in the face? Basically the SCP Foundation, but with more Japan.

How does the protag go from dork to chess master? Simply, it wasn't entirely their idea.

Eros - who was pulling every lever he could in the brain of every person Caren met at that point - managed to twist that curiosity into something... much more interesting~ And he worked his way up from there.

Eros didn't start out with a plan. He is just a Greek god of sex(read: A sex pest among sex pests), and wanted to have fun while he was locked inside a prude nun. But in doing so, he found an ambitious, smart person who instantly came up with a plan to help him. It worked out for him quite nicely.

By the events of this post, the Researcher is..well, they're still a dork(I mean, who says "wicked" anymore? This isn't the fifties), but they are a suave and savvy dork who knows how to play games.

the fact you need to elaborate this much shows the weakness in your narrative. not trying to be harsh but criticism shouldn't coddle artists.

BugmenotEncore
>> #426097
Posted on 2021-06-24 08:36:15
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cdyoung said:
the fact you need to elaborate this much shows the weakness in your narrative. not trying to be harsh but criticism shouldn't coddle artists.



I don't need to. I choose to. And I'd bet you didn't read half of it anyway.

I do get the point, but I'd say it's more "niche title" than "something I need to fix".

BugmenotEncore
>> #426100
Posted on 2021-06-24 08:43:03
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cdyoung said:
stuff


More to the point, the story is told from the perspective of the Researcher, and them not knowing any of this yet is part of the fun. I guess I could have added the perspectives of the others? But even I think that would have been long as hell. If this gets popular, I'll happily start over with a different character.

Until then, I'm doing this for my own amusement, and sharing it under a public account. I neither want nor crave recognition, good Or bad. This clarification post above is my interpretation alone. I wrote it for fun, not because it's necessary to enjoy the story. You should be able to make guesses at what's happening without it. Take it or leave it.


blankeyed
>> #426163
Posted on 2021-06-25 00:37:17
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This was an amazing read, and I am quite thankful you posted this.
The explanation of why this is a 'hypnotized hypnotist' helped me out as well, and it makes the whole thing that much better.
Thank you again, and great work!

Patapon360
>> #428511
Posted on 2021-07-12 04:09:37
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Not to brag, but I basically figured out what was going on from your writing before I read your interpretation. Maybe I'm abnormal, or just guessed, but I feel like the foreshadowing was done fairly well.

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