Posted on 2021-06-25 09:03:14
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They say some people are born lucky. If so, Misaki Nakamura's luck is downright supernatural. Blessed with overwhelmingly irresistible sex appeal, Misaki commands the world revolve around her every whim.

Trying to refine my manips with what I've learned from reading a whole bunch of them to tag [[bragging]]. What can I say? I'm a man of singular taste, and I've got a weakness and a half for smug-ass women telling me how good they've got it as they work my mind into mush. Incidentally, I decided to make the POV of this manip gender-neutral. As long as you're just the tiniest bit attracted to girls, she'll put you under her spell with her irresistible body~ <3

Posted on 2021-06-25 09:21:26
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This hit buttons I didn't even know I had... <3 _ <3

Posted on 2021-06-25 19:34:40
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Holy cow ! This is AMAZING ! It takes a very ordinary idea, the "mug-ass women telling me how good they've got it as they work my mind into mush" thing, and does it, not only with clear writing, but creating a completely natural and reasonable pitch on it ! The most viable world domination plan I've ever seen, really. Great job !

Posted on 2021-06-25 20:50:19
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Glad to hear I did something right! <3

There were two big things I wanted to improve on with this manip's story. First was the pacing, which I think I did a pretty good job of. It's really important to have good pacing when you're writing literal fap material, after all. Both need a slow build to climax. ;)

Second was the personality of the dom. There's only so much you can do in ~500 words, and I wanted Misaki to really stand out from my previous doms, even though she hits a lot of the same notes (again, I have singular taste). I tried to give her a distinct "voice," and I hope it made her feel unique.

It's actually pretty fun to get into her headspace. She's so full of herself that she doesn't even see it as arrogance. Why should she ever have to work a day in her life? That's for people who don't have hypnotic sex appeal.

Posted on 2021-06-25 20:50:56
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Mind Control vs Capitalism* wasn't on my agenda today, but it's a pairing i'm happy to see.
* Or would that be Big Business?