Posted on 2021-07-17 18:58:09
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This is a revised version of post #121940 to fix an issue Generalstrax brought to my attention. I'd accidentally cut an aspect I didn't mean to cut, but thankfully I was able to fit it back in pretty easily with a few minor edits.

This manip was heavily inspired by post #111128 in both writing and formatting styles. I put my own spin on each, but the influence is obvious, and I'd be remiss to not give credit where credit is due.

The exposition for how this ties into Lucky Me~ got cut for space, so I'm not sure if I should keep it in the pool. What do you guys think? The idea is: Misaki ran into this idol, found her incredibly sexy, and wanted to figure out why the idol didn't have the same hypnotic effect on people that she does. Only to find out that either her presence, or the act of hypnotizing her, made it so she does. Misaki promptly abuses this to have the idol help make her boyfriend cum his brains out.

Posted on 2021-07-17 22:01:18
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I saw the original, and while I appreciate the better continuity of progression on the left (where it's more clear the viewer is successfully convinced to give into their temptation), I think your changes on the right make it a bit inconsistent (loving each other, but loving Mistress more). And I saw the comment that I suspect prompted that change as well, the person that was sad for the 'lost love/relationship' in a sense. I say it's inconsistent because I think it contradicts with the "knowing you're second to such an incredible woman gets you sooo hard" and having their memories together melted away in the previous paragraph. I recognize there is a world and interpretation where that's not strictly contradictory, but I think it is more than it isn't. But honestly that's not what I really want to get at...

I actually don't have a problem with the idea of a domm coming into a relationship and taking over completely. I know it's not for everyone, but the idea of a dominant coming in and stealing the love and complete devotion of a person is hot. And if they then use them to help do the same to their former love... That's hot as hell, IMO. They could wipe the memory of their love, or simply brainwash them to see it as insignificant against their new devotion. I'm all in!

Not sure if it happened, but... I say this to suggest you should feel comfortable and confident with the story you craft, and not feel pressured to change it. If it's something you enjoy and think is hot, others will too, because there are people out there who get off to anything and everything. And if you do decide to make alterations for varying taste, consider making alternate versions so people with those varying tastes can enjoy along side your uncompromised original vision.

Critique aside, and above all else, I have very much enjoyed your manips, and I'm very thankful you found your way into this community. I hope you are not discouraged, and I wish you all the best. Thank you for the fantastic work, I can tell you put tremendous time and effort into the content you create and it shows! You're awesome! :D

Posted on 2021-07-17 23:00:50
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This is incredible. I love this whole pool it's so good

Posted on 2021-07-17 23:30:45
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@HypnoCharles: Thanks for the kind words! I mean, I'm not exactly going to be putting "writes good hypno fap material" on my resume, but I do care about quality, and I appreciate I've been able to scratch an itch for you!

Anyway, I didn't feel pressured to change it. Rather, I didn't realize it could be interpreted any other way than the way I meant for it to be until Generalstrax made their comment, which made me personally unhappy. Otherwise, I wouldn't have reuploaded the whole thing just because one commenter didn't like a bit.

I am curious where you think the contradiction is, because I meant for it to come off exactly as you're saying: Misaki is inserting herself into this relationship and taking over completely. They're both more in love with her than each other. The thing I wanted to make clearer with this edit is that she's letting them keep their attraction to each other instead of making them revolve around her completely. As for why she's making him cum out his memories with his girlfriend, it's because they're "wrong." After all, Misaki has always been his mistress. He needs to get rid of them so he can remember "correctly."

I've had to cut so much content from this manip it's not even funny, so I'm just trying to make sure what's left conveys the core of what I was going for.

Posted on 2021-07-18 01:52:18
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@jaayslin: Ah, that makes more sense, and I can see why you'd want to revise and reupload.

As far as the contradiction... Well, let me qualify first and say that I'm a demisexual. So when I read "love" I read more than just physical attraction. What I'd envision in that scenario is that they'd be free to 'play' or 'practice' with each other to keep themselves occupied/horny or just to be better toys for her to play with, but they'd ultimately only "love" Misaki. Because, with their memories cummed away (I was 100% with you on that part), they'd be striving to be her perfect toys and slaves, with no intentions of truly pleasing each other. But that's my interpretation, and certainly not the only one. I can see the image you were looking to portray too, but it's just not how I would have phrased it (not that you'd have to phase it my way, of course. :P). All the same, I'm glad I have a kindred spirit making manips. :D

And as someone who has done some manipping, and a WHOLE lot of RPing, in the past... I can relate to having to trim and cut things down. It's never easy, and if these comments aren't clear enough, I regularly err towards verbosity myself.

Posted on 2021-07-18 10:30:13
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@HypnoCharles: Yeah, I see your point. If I were to reupload again - and I'm not sure I will, lest my indecisiveness incur the wrath of the mods - I think I would just go with this:


Because that's all I really needed to clarify they're still allowed to fuck each other. I could've left out the "love" bit entirely. Speaking of, <<i.imgur.com/xx9q3aZ.png|here's>> a revised version for you. :)

Plus, you're right! It is more hot if they're just doing each other out of pure carnal desire. Their hands running across each other's sweaty bodies, trembling in ecstasy as their minds are consumed with thoughts of pleasuring Mistress...

Huh... Might have to save that one for later~

Posted on 2021-07-19 01:37:48
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Like I said... Kindred spirit. :P

And that was very kind of you, thank you. Though, as I said at the start of all this, please don't feel the need to cater, especially to me. For my personal set of interests, I find I'm generally able to enjoy almost any femdom scenario on some level (and some femsub ones depending on the circumstances). But it was very thoughtful, all the same. So thank you once again, and thank you for continuing to manip and express yourself. :D

Posted on 2021-07-24 09:07:02
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Nice job on this! I always liked the writing of the other post but not the image, so it's nice to see a similar take on the idea.