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devilsubconscious
>> #453468
Posted on 2022-01-11 16:49:24
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What do you do when you realize your harem is getting too big? Ignore the problem and make it worse by brainwashing more girls. This protag has his priorities sorted.

jigiyak
>> #453475
Posted on 2022-01-11 17:55:29
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devilsubconscious said:
What do you do when you realize your harem is getting too big? Ignore the problem and make it worse by brainwashing more girls. This protag has his priorities sorted.


you know the fact that you made this almost impossible to read really shows that you should be next in line to look at the gem, bad manipper you're a very bad manipper, go think of your actions in the corner

Purpleloli
>> #453481
Posted on 2022-01-11 19:06:54
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jigiyak said:
you know the fact that you made this almost impossible to read really shows that you should be next in line to look at the gem, bad manipper you're a very bad manipper, go think of your actions in the corner


Wow that’s a bit harsh

devilsubconscious
>> #453512
Posted on 2022-01-11 22:38:44
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jigiyak said:
you're a very bad manipper, go think of your actions in the corner


:(

qwerty
>> #453572
Posted on 2022-01-12 04:32:22
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Needs to be added to the pool, I think?

abithig
>> #453600
Posted on 2022-01-12 10:07:44
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jigiyak said:
you know the fact that you made this almost impossible to read really shows that you should be next in line to look at the gem, bad manipper you're a very bad manipper, go think of your actions in the corner

See, this can be taken two ways, neither of which I entirely agree with. You're either referring to the first paragraph which, sure, could perhaps have used a second pass to flow better and pair down some of the repitition, is nowhere near impossible to parse. Or instead, you're referring to the color of the text chosen not having enough contrast with the background, something using high contrast outlines in the future would certainly help with, but is by no means illegible in this particular work.
No matter which direction you meant to take this comment, however, it is undeniably rude and unwarranted, and could have been rephrased to give more constructive critisism addressing whatever your issues with the piece are.

jigiyak
>> #453608
Posted on 2022-01-12 13:31:02
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abithig said:
See, this can be taken two ways, neither of which I entirely agree with. You're either referring to the first paragraph which, sure, could perhaps have used a second pass to flow better and pair down some of the repitition, is nowhere near impossible to parse. Or instead, you're referring to the color of the text chosen not having enough contrast with the background, something using high contrast outlines in the future would certainly help with, but is by no means illegible in this particular work.
No matter which direction you meant to take this comment, however, it is undeniably rude and unwarranted, and could have been rephrased to give more constructive critisism addressing whatever your issues with the piece are.


yes i would talking about the color, and no i didn't give any criticism because the bad manipper part was a joke (a terrible one i admit), sorry if no one understood

april
>> #454866
Posted on 2022-01-20 03:59:34
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Transcript:
Taking care of my harem has ended up becoming a bit of a chore, not that I'm complaining, but I can't help but feel financially responsible after everything, and having 4 girls that all need a lot of attention from me has made it hard to make time to make money. So perhaps this isn't the best plan, but I'm planning on taking my party to Forebrook, a town not far up the river from here known for its demonic influence and dangerous streets. We could make a lot of money there if we were prepared, and in this case being prepared means bringing a cleric and paladin to deal with all the dark magic and curses we'll encounter. Before anyone says anything, I didn't pick this plan just to add two more girls to the party, but yes I'm going to brainwash a cleric and paladin. In fact, A cleric is already on her way for a house call exorcism.

Hello, my the light of the heavens shine on you. Are you the one who sent for an exorcism?

Yes I did, please come take a seat. It's this gem, I think it's cursed or something, I was really hoping you could take a look at it.

Hmmm, oh wow, this gem is... incredible, its dark power is…

Don't look away, you need to observe is closely to help me.

Observe it closely... need to help you…

I've heard clerics are resistant to this sort of thing, but your head emptied out just as fast as everyone else.

My head... isn't empty... the darkness cannot pierce... the light…

Interesting choice of words... lift your dress please.

I... c-can't stop my hands…

I take it back, you are very resistant, but it's not enough. You see, this is my holy cock. Can you feel it rub against your thigh? This is a tool of your worship, a little piece of your light.

Ohh... it's hard... and warm... I can feel its power…

When it 'pierces' into you, your resistance to me will cease, my light will fill your head, and you will understand that I am holy and to be worshipped. Are you ready?

Y-you can't... but I'm so wet... I'm ready... but it won't work…

We'll see, just a little closer... ohh, you feel nice miss, a little more, deeper, faster…

Y-you... i-it's filling my mind... y-your holiness... give me more…

Let's put this away and get you onto the bed.

O-oh, master you are... this is so indecent, but if it's you it must be holy... and it feels so good, thank you so much master...

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