Posted on 2022-01-30 09:27:45
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The next few wont be up for a day or two, as I want to take a break from writing lol, I planed to stop at just post 2, but I realized that It was a lot of set-up to the hypno, and none of the real good brainwashing stuff, so I went ahead and powered through the next two.

P.S.
Also, A question for ppl: what are your thoughts on the way I color the words to show different levels of hypnosis? I think it is cool but it is also very time consuming as I am adding the text in MS paint (my art program dosent have a text thing that i know how to use, its weird lol)
Long story short:
Should I keep doing the colored text to show levels of hypnosis, or is it just me giving myself a lot of work for something that makes the story harder to read/something that nobody cares if it exists (to be clear im not talking about using color/font to differentiate characters, just like how "Serve" is in purple, instead of blue in the 3rd last paragraph)

Posted on 2022-01-30 15:30:02
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I personally love your use of colored text to show levels of hypnosis, but if you think it's more trouble than it's worth, feel free to drop it. I'll continue lurking regardless hahaha

Posted on 2022-01-30 16:24:30
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Yea, pretty much this; the different colors are a nice touch but it doesnt seem like the payout isnt worth for the amount of time spent doing it. It'd be perfectly fine to drop it to focus more on the writing.

Posted on 2022-01-30 19:43:54
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for me, the payout is wither or not people like it, so im probably going to keep doing it :)

Posted on 2022-01-30 20:24:40
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Oh this is gooood. The choices for the text are impeccable. Want more!

Posted on 2022-01-30 20:45:05
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More on the way! Im planning on doing 8 total, so we are only half done!

Posted on 2022-01-31 01:11:46
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cant agree more, this is great work, cant wait for the next one.

Posted on 2022-01-31 03:25:38
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I love it, please continue.

Posted on 2022-01-31 06:59:08
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I like the coloring. But I'd recommend you find a new program that uses layers. Most of those allow you to edit the text at a later point. There might even be one that lets you have 2+ colors in 1 text box, though I haven't used one with that feature myself. After using photo editors with layers you'll never want to go back. There should be free ones out there somewhere

Posted on 2022-01-31 08:07:44
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I have a photo editor that is *really* good at layers and stuff, but its ***REALLY*** bad at text lamo, I might eventually try to find one thats a bit better, but for now my system works