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petal
>> #15165
Posted on 2014-04-14 10:57:57
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(KLK + Nonon + Nui+ brainwashing + brain injection + new uniform + REVOCS stamp)*horrible dumb looking ahegao face and nose hook = wasted potential.

Apologies that our first Nonon pics are so not cute.
HypnoMangaEditor
>> #15174
Posted on 2014-04-14 17:03:47
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This is kind of a good example of putting too much into one picture I think.

Text, SFX and Brainwaves in the background make this look cramped to me ...

More zoomed out, the text a little bit to the side where it doesn't interrupt the brainwaves or SFX, maybe even getting rid of 1-2 of the SFX's, then the overall vibe would have improved.
GorgonEyed
>> #15176
Posted on 2014-04-14 18:05:26
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Not brain waves, life fibers. Mind control in the series amounts to having your brain literally tied up, so it's fitting to have them in. Agreed on all other counts, though.
HypnoMangaEditor
>> #15178
Posted on 2014-04-14 20:00:56
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GorgonEyed said:
Not brain waves, life fibers. Mind control in the series amounts to having your brain literally tied up, so it's fitting to have them in. Agreed on all other counts, though.

Oh okay ... I couldn't stand the anime for more than 3 minutes, so I didn't know. I think these "life fibers" are pretty fitting, but due to the rest going on, the viewer is drawn away for them, which is not a good idea because they are the main source of the MC.
Vanndril
>> #15395
Posted on 2014-04-17 08:33:28
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I kind of agree. That's why I always love when artists have no-text versions of their work. This one would be twice as good without the text for me because I can't read it, anyway. :P
petal
>> #15434
Posted on 2014-04-17 15:34:53
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Vanndril said:
This one would be twice as good without the text for me because I can't read it, anyway. :P


Well, it's a bit hard to tell since Nonon is covering the kanji, but I'm pretty sure it just says something along the lines of "I, Jakuzure Nonon, am Harime Nui's pig slave. I pledge absolute obedience to the Life Fibers."

e: Oh, and the first page says something like, "Me, become a slave to the Life Fibers? What the hell are you saying, you shitty loli bitch?" (not sure what to make of なるわけない because I'm not very good at Japanese at all)

Also, maybe the whole standing in front of red text is actually a <<i.imgur.com/4OvfDyC.jpg|like master,>> <<i.imgur.com/fgZuQNR.jpg|like slave>> <<i.imgur.com/W9Vqfoc.jpg|thing>> :p
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