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  • Id: 139473
  • Posted: 2022-03-05 04:07:29
    by SleepyAxolotl
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SleepyAxolotl
>> #460736
Posted on 2022-03-05 04:13:17
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Hello guys! After some time enjoying eroges and posts from the hypno-community I finally decided to make my own hypnosis game. For now it is just a small demo/introduction to the game (about 20-30 minutes long).
It's free so check it out if you have some free time.
Download links on my patreon:
www.patreon.com/SleepDeprivedAxolotl
averageguy17
>> #460802
Posted on 2022-03-05 16:58:42
Score: 2 (vote Up)
So, I played the demo. Pretty standard stuff in terms of story. Guy is in unfortunate circumstances, guy get's hypno powers and immediately tests out the powers on friend, etc. etc. But the execution works, in that there's a couple of mysteries going on, which kept me intrigued. Also, the girl, Alice, is pretty cute. Are you also the artist as well?

I do have a couple of suggestions if you don't mind.
1) When you give Alice an order, she then immediately ends the conversation. How about having the player have to "manually" tell her to snap out of her trance or she snaps out of it automatically once you change locations (like if you leave her house when she's entranced, if you enter she'll be back to normal, errr *normal* depending on the suggestions you give her) I only ask this because once you have the opportunity to do more *things* with her, it might be a bit annoying to have to restart the conversation everytime you want her to do something.

2) (this is more of a personal thing, don't take this too hard) I do wish there was a bit more... doubt from the MC. He kinda just accepts that he can control others pretty easily. I'd thought he'd do something a bit more *experimental* with his powers before going into a "massage". Something like "is she really under my control? Better have her do something silly that she'd normally never do, just to make sure."

3) I'd suggest that maybe you make a Forum post as well. Sometimes people skip over art, or miss it since it get's moved to the next page. It's also a way of discussion that's better than on the actual post.

I did come across a bug. Right at the beginning, when the phone is ringing, you can just leave the house without answering the phone. And if you leave and re-enter, the same cutscene plays out where he's like "oh i gotta answer the phone". Maybe put a block on the player leaving, being like "oi, i can't just leave while the phone's ringing, It could be important!"
anonlv000
>> #460809
Posted on 2022-03-05 18:14:53
Score: 1 (vote Up)
averageguy17 said:
I'd suggest that maybe you make a Forum post as well. Sometimes people skip over art, or miss it since it get's moved to the next page. It's also a way of discussion that's better than on the actual post.


I haven't given this game a try yet, but I second the motion. I don't click on every image post that shows up, and nor do I always read the comments beneath them. If you were to post any new updates to the game, I'm not sure I would notice unless it were in the forum.
SleepyAxolotl
>> #460811
Posted on 2022-03-05 18:22:23
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averageguy17 said:
Are you also the artist as well?

Yes, I am, this game is all made by one person.
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1) When you give Alice an order, she then immediately ends the conversation. How about having the player have to "manually" tell her to snap out of her trance or she snaps out of it automatically once you change locations (like if you leave her house when she's entranced, if you enter she'll be back to normal, errr *normal* depending on the suggestions you give her) I only ask this because once you have the opportunity to do more *things* with her, it might be a bit annoying to have to restart the conversation everytime you want her to do something.


I think I get what you mean, that's something that I was trying to do but aparentely it still needs to be polished.


2) (this is more of a personal thing, don't take this too hard) I do wish there was a bit more... doubt from the MC. He kinda just accepts that he can control others pretty easily. I'd thought he'd do something a bit more *experimental* with his powers before going into a "massage". Something like "is she really under my control? Better have her do something silly that she'd normally never do, just to make sure."


Yeah, I was told the mc went to fast from a normal guy to a hypnotist (as if he had done that several times). I'm going to work on that to make his "corruption" (basically him getting into hypnosis) a little bit more progressive.


3) I'd suggest that maybe you make a Forum post as well. Sometimes people skip over art, or miss it since it get's moved to the next page. It's also a way of discussion that's better than on the actual post.


I'll try doing that, thanks!


I did come across a bug. Right at the beginning, when the phone is ringing, you can just leave the house without answering the phone. And if you leave and re-enter, the same cutscene plays out where he's like "oh i gotta answer the phone". Maybe put a block on the player leaving, being like "oi, i can't just leave while the phone's ringing, It could be important!"


I thought I fixed that, gonna patch it quickly.


Anyways thanks for the feedback I really appreciate it a lot.
pokemongirl
>> #460820
Posted on 2022-03-05 19:45:51
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Oh gosh she's such a cutie~~~
Syrett
>> #460852
Posted on 2022-03-05 22:18:43
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now this seems pretty neat.
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