Posted on 2014-04-27 16:26:23
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Whelp, decided to take a crack at drawing to help contribute. Brutal honestly is appreciated. Hope it is enjoyed.

Posted on 2014-04-27 17:14:09
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Solid work for a beginner. Some shading would help though. Definitely would like to see more of your art. Considering that your drawing skills will massively improve the more stuff you draw ... DO IT ;-).

A tip for the tagging: If you do not know the tags by heart, tag the picture after you uploaded it. That way the autocomplete will do most of the work for you. That's how I do it.

Posted on 2014-04-27 19:11:59
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THATS WHAT I LIKE TO HEAR.

So first of you need to fix up some proportions, for example your forearm is too short for the rest of the arm. I recommend having real life and various artistic references when drawing so you can get a good idea of what it should look like. This link should give you a bit of help in the future art-tutorials.tumblr.com/...drawing-review-translated but you should also just google various poses and save good ones you see on the internet for future references yourself, it really helps out in the long run.

Your hand also look a bit overly simplified, again IRL references are always good, using your own hand as references I usually the best way to go about it.

The proportions for the torso seem a bit skewed, like the skirt is too high up, that or I just dont understand how your clothes work because I see a belly button under the skirt.

You should also look into drawing proper clothing wrinkles. Your skirt has to many unneeded lines and your clothes dont have enough wrinkles and they look really flat, again, references are your friend pachurz.tumblr.com/post/1...eferences-my-life-drawing
www.tvhland.com/community/img/image/201301/50eab6da0c90f.jpg

Also I'm not sure what you were going for with the legs but this should be handy media-cache-ak0.pinimg.co...786fda048760b06deeeea.jpg

Finally your line work has the same thickness throughout which kind of makes it boring to look at, vary the thickness of your linework will add a lot more.

Also one of your ears are to close to the top of the head but I don't want to comment too much on the face since it's a very subjective thing if your drawing fur. but go look at how other artists do it and see how theyre style makes it work

Posted on 2014-04-27 20:43:05
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Definitely solid, do more.

Posted on 2014-04-27 23:45:05
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Brutal honesty probably what you need IMO. Do check out the things Zko said but mostly just draw more; the specifics are less important right now. Work on drawing from reference (posemaniacs is pretty nice for anatomy, pixelovely has good references when you want to start drawing clothes on your figures) to get away from symbol drawing and learn proportions.

Posted on 2014-04-29 09:10:27
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who knew that string could float in the air.

Posted on 2014-04-29 10:39:41
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Maybe a wizard just off-screen is manipulating it!

Posted on 2014-04-29 11:14:21
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this is a much better Rope Trick than the one i'm familiar with