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Quantum77z
>> #17085
Posted on 2014-05-06 21:59:28
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DannyG
>> #17096
Posted on 2014-05-06 23:59:42
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Content is good, but in the future, I'd recommend a different font for your text. The one you used is a little small for one, and makes it look a little less polished overall. It's a shame to see a good caption spoiled by bad typeface.

Mindwipe
>> #17103
Posted on 2014-05-07 00:38:48
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DannyG said:
Content is good, but in the future, I'd recommend a different font for your text. The one you used is a little small for one, and makes it look a little less polished overall. It's a shame to see a good caption spoiled by bad typeface.


And also place the text better. Like here, there's a clear area where the background turns all white, but the text goes over it into the pink area. Then, there's a whole area at the bottom with no text. Empty space should be avoided whenever possible.

Dreamshade
>> #17104
Posted on 2014-05-07 00:41:45
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Added character, artist, and copyright tags, along with source.

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