Posted on 2022-04-21 22:21:34
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Hello, my friends! I hope you are all doing well. Here is the next page in the AU Club Spiral series made by the great artist wadevezecha Even with David's admission, Ami's is actually touched and her heart starts to beat faster than before. David's fears of her being upset with him are quickly washed away as she takes his hands into hers and has him touch her cheeks tell him just how she would have fallen for him even without being hypnotized and brainwashed. And David is elated to hear that.

I really loved this moment of romance between David and Ami. Most would say that it's way to soon for Ami to feel this way without major brainwashing. But lets not forget that the romantic lives of the Inner Senshi are nonexistent. I remember one episode from Super S where Ami fell for a pianist and wrote a song to go with the music he composed. Of course, she found out that he already had a fiance and I hated to see her so heartbroken. Yes, she is fictional, but tell me you would not feel the same way for your favorite waifus that you'd want to tell them how much you care about them. Not to mention that in her chapter, I showed her being enamored with David, to begin with. So it's not beyond the realm of possibility that her feelings along with her original brainwashing could cause her to fall so head over heels for him in such a short time. And with the last panel, I couldn't help but add a little comedy to the heartwarming moment.

I hope you enjoy this page. Tell me what you think of it. I would really like to know.

More pages and pictures are coming soon. So until next time, take care and stay well everyone!

This picture was made by wadevezecha and is posted with permission.

Posted on 2022-04-21 22:59:32
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You know, actually if the nanomechs did spread to Davey, that would be kinda serendipitous; just them both enslaved to love each other forever.

Posted on 2022-04-21 23:04:31
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Precious cinnamon rollbot too good for this world, too pure.

Posted on 2022-04-21 23:51:57
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Nah, Davey's gonna be fine, because plot armor

Posted on 2022-04-22 00:44:17
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Okaaaay? they started become a little bit cringy.

Posted on 2022-04-23 03:38:04
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If I'm being honest, I find this to be wrong. This guy still brainwashed her against her will and used her as he pleases.
I have nothing against the story because I really do like it, but I'm not comfortable with this trying to be a love story

Posted on 2022-04-23 11:49:14
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See to an extent, it being a brainwashing story I'm willing to roll with a lot...but how to phrase this nicely: the 4th panel dialogue should be changed. Like not asking to rework older pages and stuff, but the whole "you're so great I would've fallen in love with you even without the brainwashing" maybe go more along the lines of her saying something like: "Now that I know what you did to me, I just want you to know: I still love you. I don't care if that's the brainwashing talking, I don't want to go back to who I was, I want to be with you."
Just my honest two cents.