Posted on 2014-05-08 09:20:11
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There, I added some text to it.

Posted on 2014-05-08 10:35:35
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I like this idea, though :D

Posted on 2014-05-08 13:47:23
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yay! someone read my post and actually took my advice! ^_^

Posted on 2014-05-08 14:26:34
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Very interesting...

Posted on 2014-05-08 15:18:28
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And finally... the director of this inn own everything, right?

Posted on 2014-05-08 15:22:15
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Ummm... Okay, nitpicking time. This takes place in a hotel or something? So, the front desk has at least 3 keys to the same room, not including the master key, I'd wager? I mean, I might understand a spare key, but a third one seems a tad overkill, especially if it's a one bed room, and if it wasn't, would the girl rent a larger one for herself, or was someone staying with her, and wouldn't that person then have a key as well?
Also, how did the second guy just know what was going on in room 6? Were there cameras already in place, and if so, why? Or has a lot of time passed, and the first guy's been parading around with his new 'property' in tow? I must know!

Posted on 2014-05-08 19:47:33
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Well, a lot of hotels have magnetic strip keycards. They're programmable, so you can have as many keys to room 6 as you have keycards.

Posted on 2014-05-08 20:14:51
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Dude. For some reason, I LOVE the idea of getting a potential orgy of procedurally-enslaved customers/entranced subjects. This needs to be expanded on. 8D

Posted on 2014-05-08 22:26:03
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That is a terrible front desk clerk.

Posted on 2014-05-08 23:28:59
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Maybe he's hypnotized too! OooOOOooooo.